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Oh status update in case you guys forgot about me. I'm like mostly done with the CS. Just need to add some things to the Misc and maybe edit what I have so far.
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@karamonnom I didn't forget about ya Karanomnomnom!
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@sassy1085

1) You mix your personality and history a bit and I will admit that its a bit confusing.

2) As I've stated previously, Japan has some pretty strict gun laws; customs would have never let her bring a gun in most cases and even then, unless she lives in the middle of nowhere or has a personal sound proof gun range, people will hear the gunshots and will report her to the police.

3) Some of the things in her Misc section can easily be put into more appropriate categories.

All in all, I'd recommend just adding a bit more to her and reworking your CS so its more coherent and fluid, some extra meat would be nice too ^^
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@sakurasan
Thanks Sakura :)
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@karamonnomFear not Kara, just put in here when you're comfortable with it and then I'll rip it to shreds >:D judge it and give feedback ^^
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@ClocktowerEchos unless you missed this earlier~ added the history and 2 more. Some Yuno crap. Tell me if its alright. Especially the past.


*Consummate skill utilizing a wide ranging collection of differing types of weaponry- Her father and her teacher often gave her weapons and taught her how to use them. It's creepy how much she knows about people's pressure points and the latter. She mostly likes to use knives but machine guns are also a favorite of hers. Collecting her weapons is usually due to her mother which she has many secrets of to blackmail her with. Her mother isn't exactly an angel like Honoka but is, in fact, very useful.

*Recollection of past events- When she wants to, she can dig into her past and bring back things that she buried under. However, she has never brought up her murders and her mother's death. More so details of the week. Small details that she doesn't realize then but does in fact have a collection of. Especially of Honoka. With this, she can figure out small things that she missed that revolved around Honoka. Herself, however, is another case. Though she can remember some details of her own past, not very much if it doesn't involve Honoka.

*After the first time that she had to resort to violence when someone was bullying Honoka behind her back, that night, Gospel appeared. Miye disliked him at first, thinking of him as a sort of demon that was there to take Honoka away from her. However, that wasn't the case. She was given a diary that night. The stalker diary.
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@sakurasanI thought I approved of all that stuff o.o

Well, consider it double approve
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@ClocktowerEchos Yay! So what number?
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Oh, yeah, thanks for reminding me, Sakura. Completely forgot xD

What number am I?
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@sakurasanYou should be fourth since I accidentally forgot to give @Vocab the place of third. >.>
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@ClocktowerEchos Adding to sheet.
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I AM INTERESTED OH MY GODDDD
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@Lillysaurus Rex New meat!

Excellent *creepy smile*
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@Lillysaurus RexAlrighty, pick a number between 1 and 3 for your diary roll~
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*drum roll*
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@Lillysaurus Rex You get...

Chaos Diary - Details what things will be destroyed when and how much. Does not detail the casualties or the methods.

Time to indulge your destructive side and let loose then love~

So now, welcome to to the Survival Game, make a CS and we'll take ti from there.

Gamebate~

-Smacks @Vocab for being creepy af yo-
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@ClocktowerEchos *growls*

But I wanna mess with the new meat! Can't kitty have fun?!
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@ClocktowerEchos
Gaaassp.
Chaaoooosss.... eue
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@VocabDoes kitty want to be:

- Shot
- Blown up
- Stabbed
- Shanked
- Pounded to pulp
- Explodonated
- Juiced
- Slaughtered
- Filled with lead
- Beaten to death
- Any combination of all of the above?

If not, I recommend to fking with the one who has a Chaos Diary ^^
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