@Adelynn Ryder It’s a pretty good first draft! There are just a couple of things we need to spruce up before your little Annabelle is ready to go!
On your dislikes you need to list a couple more things. They don’t have to be big, anything from cigarette smoke to not enjoying being too hot, etcetera. You’re bio is a really nice length though, and gives us a great idea idea of what her character is about as a person. Nice work!
On your theme song it would be pretty nifty if you could link us to it. I see by your post count that you're a little new here, so if you needed some help on formatting I could PM you and show you a thing or two, if you wanted!
Here is an example of a finished profile. Your’s doesn’t have to be formated like this with all the colors and headers and what not, but it’ll give you an idea on the amount of likes and dislikes you need and what the theme song area should look like.
@Delta44 I do love Ryoki, but I'm sure whatever other character you make will be great too! I'm playing a different girl this season, but I’m gonna keep Nori in the background for the boss, since he thinks she's neat. ;)
As for the time skip, @Dynamo Frokane said that it's summertime now, so I believe it’s been four to five months since the last season.
@Haeo I sort of glossed over the weatherman in Nori’s updated CS, but he was apprehended and there are no more serial killers in Shine City, nor will there be anything like that this season! Shine City Investigation Services only deals in petty criminals, catching cheating spouses, and finding lost pets now. XD
On your dislikes you need to list a couple more things. They don’t have to be big, anything from cigarette smoke to not enjoying being too hot, etcetera. You’re bio is a really nice length though, and gives us a great idea idea of what her character is about as a person. Nice work!
On your theme song it would be pretty nifty if you could link us to it. I see by your post count that you're a little new here, so if you needed some help on formatting I could PM you and show you a thing or two, if you wanted!
Here is an example of a finished profile. Your’s doesn’t have to be formated like this with all the colors and headers and what not, but it’ll give you an idea on the amount of likes and dislikes you need and what the theme song area should look like.
@Delta44 I do love Ryoki, but I'm sure whatever other character you make will be great too! I'm playing a different girl this season, but I’m gonna keep Nori in the background for the boss, since he thinks she's neat. ;)
As for the time skip, @Dynamo Frokane said that it's summertime now, so I believe it’s been four to five months since the last season.
@Haeo I sort of glossed over the weatherman in Nori’s updated CS, but he was apprehended and there are no more serial killers in Shine City, nor will there be anything like that this season! Shine City Investigation Services only deals in petty criminals, catching cheating spouses, and finding lost pets now. XD