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The One The Only One!
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You worthless scum aren't worth my time.
Name: Prince Ali Sekhemi
Age: 20
Height; Weight: 6 Ft
Stripes: Grade 1
Reason for Admission: Because Sekhemi's parents wanted him to make friends.
Years Admitted: Just started.
Special Abilities: He controls fire and darkness.
Physical Strength: He is quite powerful, better at cqc.
Mental Strength: He isn't the brightest, but he isn't stupid either.
Weaknesses: He is arrogant and over confident.
Restrained?: Yes
Details: When the collar activates, the collar puts him in the mind set of a slave.
Background Info: I'll work on this later!
Interests: Being the top, the best, respected.
Other: Personality.
Personality:
Sekhemi cannot feel pain or emotions, thanks to this, he is considered to be very selfish, and very mean. He doesn't care about life at all, he doesn't find any worth in it. He cares for nothing, so much so, he doesn't even care about himself. He has suffered many battles thanks to this, taking a very high risk and going up on the front. He does what he wants, not what others want him to do. If somebody tells him to do something, he will just refuse to do it, and will probably do the opposite, though, reverse psychology doesn't work on him either. He is very stubborn, once he decides on something, there is a little chance of him changing his mind.
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h o ol lyly l , ,, shIT ,, ,, ok ,,, hold on,, , , i just speed drew a fuckin
i mad e a neW chaRACTER,, WHY THE FUCK iS THE CHAraCTER shEET SO LOGN, ,, --- ok lets get down 2 business
@Undine the chuuni npc is gonna see her as his manic pixie girl n itll b hot n embarassin bc le ts b real, ,, real life is, ,,
@The One If the only thing that you'll be editing is the background, I might suggest taking a step back and scrapping the whole thing, because honestly this is unacceptable. I'll let the age slide and let him have a moment of a doubt that he was held back, and arguably having a 20 year old prince knee deep in elementary school kids who are a hassle could be hilarious, but the rest of the profile makes it seem like this will be the opposite of a joke fest-- which, as I have made very clear, this RP is supposed to be.
This RP is comedy first, badass second. So, to have a guy who was admitted solely because "his parents wanted him to make friends" is unacceptable because why, in heaven's sake, would a king and queen or whatever other royal court, send their son into a prison school of delinquent to make friends? Not only will they be a bad influence for what already looks to be a shitty and arrogant son, but the image would be terrible for whatever country, with the news that the prince is playing nice with possibly the worst kids in the world. He would be better off playing protagonist in a better rich school with better rich superpowered kids.
Furthermore, me making this dissertation on your character sheet probably already has a higher word count than your sheet itself which is a problem. Nevermind the OPness of your character's ability (controlling both light/fire and darkness? What RP universe do you live in where such a combination is allowed?), the fucking Restraint is... less than desirable. If you took even a two second glance at other sheets you can see that Restraints have to do at least with the Power they have-- which it doesn't, and is making me think holy shit you probably won't read this because there's too many words.
I'm gonna cut this short because I just had that realization and basically- scrap the whole idea, start from the bottom. I can deal with an asshole, but I need an asshole with depth. Bakugou from BNHA is a huge dick, but is believable because he's more than a one sentence description. If you need assistance in making a sICK character with depth and decency, feel free to talk to me, I have honestly been playing with this idea for years and I am not about to let it suffer because you want to play someone OP as fuck.
Also please change the image. This is last because it's more personal taste than anything.
i mad e a neW chaRACTER,, WHY THE FUCK iS THE CHAraCTER shEET SO LOGN, ,, --- ok lets get down 2 business
@Undine the chuuni npc is gonna see her as his manic pixie girl n itll b hot n embarassin bc le ts b real, ,, real life is, ,,
@The One If the only thing that you'll be editing is the background, I might suggest taking a step back and scrapping the whole thing, because honestly this is unacceptable. I'll let the age slide and let him have a moment of a doubt that he was held back, and arguably having a 20 year old prince knee deep in elementary school kids who are a hassle could be hilarious, but the rest of the profile makes it seem like this will be the opposite of a joke fest-- which, as I have made very clear, this RP is supposed to be.
This RP is comedy first, badass second. So, to have a guy who was admitted solely because "his parents wanted him to make friends" is unacceptable because why, in heaven's sake, would a king and queen or whatever other royal court, send their son into a prison school of delinquent to make friends? Not only will they be a bad influence for what already looks to be a shitty and arrogant son, but the image would be terrible for whatever country, with the news that the prince is playing nice with possibly the worst kids in the world. He would be better off playing protagonist in a better rich school with better rich superpowered kids.
Furthermore, me making this dissertation on your character sheet probably already has a higher word count than your sheet itself which is a problem. Nevermind the OPness of your character's ability (controlling both light/fire and darkness? What RP universe do you live in where such a combination is allowed?), the fucking Restraint is... less than desirable. If you took even a two second glance at other sheets you can see that Restraints have to do at least with the Power they have-- which it doesn't, and is making me think holy shit you probably won't read this because there's too many words.
I'm gonna cut this short because I just had that realization and basically- scrap the whole idea, start from the bottom. I can deal with an asshole, but I need an asshole with depth. Bakugou from BNHA is a huge dick, but is believable because he's more than a one sentence description. If you need assistance in making a sICK character with depth and decency, feel free to talk to me, I have honestly been playing with this idea for years and I am not about to let it suffer because you want to play someone OP as fuck.
Also please change the image. This is last because it's more personal taste than anything.
sakurasan you don't know how to wash your shoes
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@LetterA Edited~ ^^ I was going to change that pic before since you had put not too anime-ie :P but yea! All hail devianart gems~ also added more crap, deleted crap, and details.
Name: Mary Augustine
Age: 17
Height; Weight: 5'4", 132
Stripes: 12
Reason for Admission:
-Violence. Yep. She was bullied for a very long time and got fed up with it and hospitalized 6 kids (May have put one in a tiny coma). What did the teachers see? Her licking blood off her nails with the kids on the ground. Where the hell were the teachers when she was getting shoved around?
-Ditched classes a lot. But she had a reason. Sort of.
-Foul language towards the teacher apparently.
Years Admitted: Newbie~
Special Abilities:
-A lot of people think it's super strength. If they've fought with her. But it's not. With her/someone else's blood, she can make herself a weapon. Typically a sword but on rare occasions, a gun. However, it only hurts people if she wants it to. If she's not battling someone or fighting for her life, the pain will only be for about 5 seconds. That said, she has a habit of stabbing people and catching them off guard. If she stabs them, a large hole is usually formed in their stomach before returning to its previous state 5-10 seconds later. The pain? Ummm... It doesn't feel good b-but it only lasts for 5-8 seconds! Usually!
-She doesn't really use this all that much since she's fine with just using her physical strength if she snaps.
Physical Strength: Fast and strong. Look weak? Good. That's what she's pretty much aiming for. Fuck with her? I recommend you to not. Her physical strength is to the point that people think she's some sort of monster or a superhuman.
Mental Strength:
-Her mental strength? Tough bitch. In front of people, Mary can be seen with a smile when people insult her. She's cynical and loves to make plans in her mind. Logic is something that she loves. Unless it involves math because she can't really find the logic in that stuff. Mary doesn't break easily but she isn't positive about herself mentally either..
-Great at science. Reading? Meh, sure. Math?...No. Just no. Her average in math is usually around a D and if she's lucky, a C.
Weaknesses:
-Once she's snapped, she's practically a different person. Can't really control herself when she gets angry and some have said it was a multiple personality disorder because she goes sadistic as fuck usually.
-Hates/scared of mice. They're terrifying. The squeaky noises that come out of their little mouths.
-Hates bubbles. They... don't listen. They go wherever they like and when they pop and get into your eyes, they hurt you!
-Borderline crazy(?)
-Good or bad thing, you decide. She adores- no, loves the taste of blood.
Restrained?:
Yep.
Details:
If she actually hurts someone, she will start coughing up a bunch of blood. I don't know, they think it'll bother her I guess.
Background Info:
Her parents died when she was younger in a car accident. She was about 10 years old at the time.
Taken in by a high-middle class family that was very strict and hated showing their actual emotions, she was used to dealing with crap.
--Blah, blah, she was bullied practically all of her life since she looks like bait.--
Got transferred to Greenwing.
Interests:
-Sunshine, smiles, gumdrops, oh my! Hah... Yeeeeeah. Sure.
-Sweets! Cheesecake? She already had one today. Apple pie? What do you think she ate for breakfast? Vanilla cupcake? Ummm... It's in her hand right now.
A major sweet lover, but don't worry! She eats veggies too! Just not really in front of people.
-Reading. She loves to read and could do so for more than 5 hours. Nerdy? Sure. You might be a little creeped when you see what she's usually reading about.
-Blood. Give her your blood to drink and she'll adore you. Dracula? Nope.
-The violin. She's been playing practically all her life.
-Adventures. Ooooh~ A dare devil? Or not?
Other:
-She can be seen smiling often. When is she actually happy?
-A violin prodigy~
-Oh god. Her + chemicals + she hates you? Be careful and don't eat or drink anything she's given you because she knows her way around poison.
-Weapon lover. Especially poison and guns~ <3
-She eats sweets practically everyday. People often wonder how the hell she isn't overweight. Well, you know, because she lifts weights.
-A dog lover. They usually listen. Obedient animals are the best animals. Of course, she likes other animals too but cats are... not that high up on her list.
-Her parents have now practically disowned her since they don't like how much of a "failure" she is acting like.
"Am I sweet? Do I look sweet to you~?"
Name: Mary Augustine
Age: 17
Height; Weight: 5'4", 132
Stripes: 12
Reason for Admission:
-Violence. Yep. She was bullied for a very long time and got fed up with it and hospitalized 6 kids (May have put one in a tiny coma). What did the teachers see? Her licking blood off her nails with the kids on the ground. Where the hell were the teachers when she was getting shoved around?
-Ditched classes a lot. But she had a reason. Sort of.
-Foul language towards the teacher apparently.
Years Admitted: Newbie~
Special Abilities:
-A lot of people think it's super strength. If they've fought with her. But it's not. With her/someone else's blood, she can make herself a weapon. Typically a sword but on rare occasions, a gun. However, it only hurts people if she wants it to. If she's not battling someone or fighting for her life, the pain will only be for about 5 seconds. That said, she has a habit of stabbing people and catching them off guard. If she stabs them, a large hole is usually formed in their stomach before returning to its previous state 5-10 seconds later. The pain? Ummm... It doesn't feel good b-but it only lasts for 5-8 seconds! Usually!
-She doesn't really use this all that much since she's fine with just using her physical strength if she snaps.
Physical Strength: Fast and strong. Look weak? Good. That's what she's pretty much aiming for. Fuck with her? I recommend you to not. Her physical strength is to the point that people think she's some sort of monster or a superhuman.
Mental Strength:
-Her mental strength? Tough bitch. In front of people, Mary can be seen with a smile when people insult her. She's cynical and loves to make plans in her mind. Logic is something that she loves. Unless it involves math because she can't really find the logic in that stuff. Mary doesn't break easily but she isn't positive about herself mentally either..
-Great at science. Reading? Meh, sure. Math?...No. Just no. Her average in math is usually around a D and if she's lucky, a C.
Weaknesses:
-Once she's snapped, she's practically a different person. Can't really control herself when she gets angry and some have said it was a multiple personality disorder because she goes sadistic as fuck usually.
-Hates/scared of mice. They're terrifying. The squeaky noises that come out of their little mouths.
-Hates bubbles. They... don't listen. They go wherever they like and when they pop and get into your eyes, they hurt you!
-Borderline crazy(?)
-Good or bad thing, you decide. She adores- no, loves the taste of blood.
Restrained?:
Yep.
Details:
If she actually hurts someone, she will start coughing up a bunch of blood. I don't know, they think it'll bother her I guess.
Background Info:
Her parents died when she was younger in a car accident. She was about 10 years old at the time.
Taken in by a high-middle class family that was very strict and hated showing their actual emotions, she was used to dealing with crap.
--Blah, blah, she was bullied practically all of her life since she looks like bait.--
Got transferred to Greenwing.
Interests:
-Sunshine, smiles, gumdrops, oh my! Hah... Yeeeeeah. Sure.
-Sweets! Cheesecake? She already had one today. Apple pie? What do you think she ate for breakfast? Vanilla cupcake? Ummm... It's in her hand right now.
A major sweet lover, but don't worry! She eats veggies too! Just not really in front of people.
-Reading. She loves to read and could do so for more than 5 hours. Nerdy? Sure. You might be a little creeped when you see what she's usually reading about.
-Blood. Give her your blood to drink and she'll adore you. Dracula? Nope.
-The violin. She's been playing practically all her life.
-Adventures. Ooooh~ A dare devil? Or not?
Other:
-She can be seen smiling often. When is she actually happy?
-A violin prodigy~
-Oh god. Her + chemicals + she hates you? Be careful and don't eat or drink anything she's given you because she knows her way around poison.
-Weapon lover. Especially poison and guns~ <3
-She eats sweets practically everyday. People often wonder how the hell she isn't overweight. Well, you know, because she lifts weights.
-A dog lover. They usually listen. Obedient animals are the best animals. Of course, she likes other animals too but cats are... not that high up on her list.
-Her parents have now practically disowned her since they don't like how much of a "failure" she is acting like.
@LetterA
done
Name:
Age:
Height; Weight:
Stripes:
Reason for Admission:
Years Admitted:
Special Abilities:
Physical Strength:
Mental Strength:
Weaknesses:
Restrained?:
Details:
Background Info:
Interests:
Other:
done
"Oh Jesus, are you even trying?"
T H E . O R I G I N A T O R
Name:
Robin Lowe
Age:
Sixteen
Height; Weight:
5'5"; 149lbs
Stripes:
Ten
Reason for Admission:
- Flooded the boy's bathroom with ink and doodles... Three separate times.
- Sent little, scary drawings into the girl's locker room on multiple occasions.
- Started one too many scarps in the school yard (that smile of his started wars, one of the teachers had said).
- Sent little, scary drawings into the girl's locker room on multiple occasions.
- Started one too many scarps in the school yard (that smile of his started wars, one of the teachers had said).
Years Admitted:
Four
Special Abilities:
Art Manipulation
Physical Strength:
Hideously weak. No, seriously, Robin bruises easier then a peach and sometimes has trouble even opening a door. He isn't unhealthy in the slightest, in fact he's quite harsh on himself when it comes to eating right and exercising, but in the end he just finds himself with lack luster muscles and an inability to change this fact about himself. He's quick but not extremely so, and seems to have two left feet. Overall rating: 3/10
Mental Strength:
What Robin lacks in physicality he makes up for in smarts. Brute strength is replaced with brute honesty, wailing fists pushed aside for startling, harsh commentary. He is a little spitfire, a smiling manic with a mouth he obviously keeps unfiltered to rile people up. Robin has the eyes of an artist (albeit, a bad artist) and he uses his observant nature to point out various flaws and insecurities of people, places, or things. His bad mouth has often gotten him into trouble, and his excuse for all the horrid yet intellectually accurate words he spews is normally "I don't like lying to people's faces, ya know?" Due to his mental-oriented nature, he is relatively well off in the ways of mental fortitude. Overall rating: 9/10
Weaknesses:
- Drawing: Yes, an art manipulator with the inability to draw (draw well at least). Even if Robin is aware of his sucky art he never lets on. Sometimes he'll draw a scribble and look proud, but in the end it's just a scribble that will eventually leap off the page to wreak havoc and nothing more.
- Fighting: Robin likes to stay on the analytical side of things and often lets his drawings do the dirty work for him. He bruises easy and isn't a fan of violence in general, even if his words say otherwise.
- Observant People: People who can see through his smiley facade scare him, greatly.
- Water: Like, really. Water gets all his papers soaked and all the colors bleed together to make an even bigger mess than before. It's a real mess when Robin and water collide.
- Women: Gynophobia, the fear of women in a social and physical sense. Spurred from Robin's awful mother, he often has trouble talking to and approaching women in public, and will at times scurry away in an effort not to see any at all.
Restrained?:
Yes
Details:
Robin's restriction is literally censorship. Yep, when his words or drawings get too out of control, his collar puts into act a various amount of bleeps or blurs to ensure that Robin can no longer speak out with his horrid words or draw anything too big and deadly-looking.
Background Info:
Robin liked drawing. Ever since he was young he made hideous attempts at art and showed it off like masterpieces. The first time his power came into action he was five and he had just drawn a huge bunny-cat combo. It leapt off the page with vigor and trotted across his room savagely, spurred by the boy's imagination alone. Robin had to squash it with a book to get it to vanish. He drew more creatures after that and honed his powers. His mother called him a freak. His father called him a genius. Robin called himself "an artist".
Robin didn't like his mother. She was the opposite of a war; she was boring and chilling and lazy. Her voice gave Robin nightmares and he eventually grew a fear of all women because she was either overbearing or nothing at all.
He went to public school and did well in most classes, besides gym. He always got caught trying to sneak out in gym. The extra punishment laps never helped him like the class any better.
Robin hung around as the head of a small school gang once. They enjoyed his plots and followed his word like monkeys. He liked them. They ended up not liking him after a certain smile and harsh set of language and devised to bully him one day in the boy's restroom. That was the first instance of ink and doodles running rampant. The entire first floor men's restroom was coated with ink stains for the rest of the year. Robin looked pleased rather then apologetic.
This accident happened many more times after that.
The second time it happened Robin was skipping class. The third time was Robin getting some relief from his boredom. The fourth incident happened when one of the taller girls got too close and scared the hell outta him. The last incident happened when he sent a few naughty scribbles out to rile up some upperclassmen. He was locked sent away for good after that.
Robin didn't like his mother. She was the opposite of a war; she was boring and chilling and lazy. Her voice gave Robin nightmares and he eventually grew a fear of all women because she was either overbearing or nothing at all.
He went to public school and did well in most classes, besides gym. He always got caught trying to sneak out in gym. The extra punishment laps never helped him like the class any better.
Robin hung around as the head of a small school gang once. They enjoyed his plots and followed his word like monkeys. He liked them. They ended up not liking him after a certain smile and harsh set of language and devised to bully him one day in the boy's restroom. That was the first instance of ink and doodles running rampant. The entire first floor men's restroom was coated with ink stains for the rest of the year. Robin looked pleased rather then apologetic.
This accident happened many more times after that.
The second time it happened Robin was skipping class. The third time was Robin getting some relief from his boredom. The fourth incident happened when one of the taller girls got too close and scared the hell outta him. The last incident happened when he sent a few naughty scribbles out to rile up some upperclassmen. He was locked sent away for good after that.
Interests:
- Mischief: Robin's one true love. His words are normally meant to stir the waters in an effort to spawn some issues or playful problems. Of course, they're also the reason he often ends up with black eyes and bloody noses.
- Drawing: Even if he's god awful at it, drawing still helps Robin unwind and his creations are helpful, even if they're a bit harder to control.
- People Watching: "It's not perverse, it's just a hobby!" Robin enjoys looking out for peoples weak spots, and people watching is just how he does so.
- Graffiti: Though Robin is god awful at sketching and painting, he is surprisingly adept at graffiti, and when given the time and place and items he'll gladly put his tag up (in record time to boot!)
- Smiling: Robin's snarky grins have earned him a reputation of being a "fake ass". He'll smirk even when he's putting down another poor soul with his harsh words. Sometimes a more sadistic light can be caught shining between his teeth, but for all intents and purposes they're just regular, seedy smirks. And he loves making them, for some reason.
- Cooking: Robin's a killer chef, and he adores making food as much as he enjoys eating it.
Other:
- Estranged from his mother
- Really likes animated movies
- Really hates sweets
HalfOfLancelot What's worse: being heartbroke or roachbit?
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HalfOfLancelot What's worse: being heartbroke or roachbit?
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<Snipped quote by HalfOfLancelot>
When did i say that i was going to stop you
well, in that case
ma'am, would you like to hear about our lord and savior, RuPaul?
or WOULD U LIKE TO BURN IN THE BOWELS OF CISHET HELL?!
GM
sh it its midnight n i barely finished perri's profile but ofc i gotta make up a shitty long ass history in the middle of class as the icin on the cake--
ok, ,, , goo o d news, ppl who r accept ed can post their sheets o n the character tab ,, ,, mmm m mm m,, ok now in oRDer
@Undine she's fucking depressing n awful and like sasu ke,,, but plushies rainin on her head while ur talkin 2 her,, , ,, thinkin murderous thougths has never been cuTEr ;0 accepted
@sakurasan I saw this hours ago and ever since then you have been continuously updating it which is good, never be pleased with your work, always strive for perfection but like... you're literally... i'll. , ,, explain l8r jst scroll down, ill put it in a hider so it doesnt make a fukin wALL, ,, , whe Eze-- unaccepted
@McHaggisa rarity! the status of bein unrestrained while bein a fucki n g idiot will no doubt come in2 conversation in the rp, , ,,, , ni c e, tmhumb spups accepted
@Liriia thmbubs up, , ,, good job, ,, i hav nothin 2 say bc all has ben said,, , acpepetped.
ok i hav essay 2 do and like 50 art projects to masturb8 2 goodn i g ht u shitS
ok, ,, , goo o d news, ppl who r accept ed can post their sheets o n the character tab ,, ,, mmm m mm m,, ok now in oRDer
@Undine she's fucking depressing n awful and like sasu ke,,, but plushies rainin on her head while ur talkin 2 her,, , ,, thinkin murderous thougths has never been cuTEr ;0 accepted
@sakurasan I saw this hours ago and ever since then you have been continuously updating it which is good, never be pleased with your work, always strive for perfection but like... you're literally... i'll. , ,, explain l8r jst scroll down, ill put it in a hider so it doesnt make a fukin wALL, ,, , whe Eze-- unaccepted
@McHaggisa rarity! the status of bein unrestrained while bein a fucki n g idiot will no doubt come in2 conversation in the rp, , ,,, , ni c e, tmhumb spups accepted
@Liriia thmbubs up, , ,, good job, ,, i hav nothin 2 say bc all has ben said,, , acpepetped.
Okay, let's get to it! The picture change is nice, I appreciate it especially after the huuuuge change in obvious faceclaim to just a generally much nicer aesthetic image. Now that's out of the way, and also because it's midnight, I haven't slept in a while, and in general the whole way you handled this was poor, I'm going on a deeper analysis of why I don't like your character and you need to start over. It's a simple case of trying to shove all this shit into a suitcase and realizing "fuck, wow, none of this shit will fit" and taking everything out and organizing it so shit will fit.
To begin with, you bringing my attention to the fact you edited your sheet is like, a sort of shorthand for saying, "my character is finished, please give it a once over and determine whether or not I can be accepted in this rp." And I did look at your character from the time you first posted it ten hours ago, and I gave it a look over and found problems that I couldn't put down due to being on mobile so I put it on the back of my head. I came over several times afterwards in the middle of creating my own character, to see that you had and were continuously updating and changing what I'd assumed was already a finished fleshed out character. I'm not saying this is a problem per se, to edit your character, but it's a problem if you've sort of implied that they were done being edited with.
Not only that, however, but the way you edited your character without waiting for a 'go' from me at any point during your process has not only failed to prevent unacceptable content from appearing in your sheet, but has also continued to pile it on. Your continuous editing without waiting for a word in from me has not helped you in creating a decent character sheet-- if you read my last dissertation on The One's sheet and tried to learn from that, that's great!!!!! I approve learning from others' mistakes!!! But if all you read from that was, "Oh, he mentioned not having enough words" and decided to continue to add more words and look past all the other crap I vomited about BEING OP, then you are not learning from others' mistakes, you are simply twisting it in hopes I'll overlook it for you.
So, then, wherein lie the problem? If you have not realized yet, your original post in the first page is still the same one that you said was the edited version ten hours ago on this second page, and in comparing them, anyone can see that you gave your CS the sheet equivalent of a boobjob. A pimp my ride version of character sheets, except I am looking at all these hardcore attachments that just don't need to be there and I don't know where to start. First, you aged her down(though that was a more recent edit, given it wasn't that way thirty minutes ago), which wouldn't necessarily be a problem, but you somehow thought this was okay after giving her literally an arsenal of skills and talents not even an anime protagonist would have two episodes into a series unless that series was sao which everyone agrees is awful.
Your ability is confusing and can be worded a bit differently, but I didn't mention that earlier and I take fault in that, especially since it is one of the few things to remain unchanged. The one thing that needed changing and you didn't, and I'm sorry it took me only now instead of sooner to bring it up. That was my fault.
Her physical strength barely indicates what she can or cannot do. From the mess that is the abilities section I gather that her strength is partially reliant to her ability, but then you don't explain what she is physical-wise without the Ability. You say she is fast and strong, but is that because of her power, or something she has developed?
I don't know why you changed her childish mental state into a tough bitch because that was one unique trait that I was willing to pass off for her. Her having been childish fit in with the "weak" image she was trying to portray but now, the way you forced the tough bitchiness on loses the little yandere vibe you had earlier and barely fits in with the rest of the forced puzzle pieces you were trying to put together. (also wtf how does she lov logic but not lov math like,, , ,, ??? ?? ? ?? math is the most universal thing along w music, which btw,, , , is also math ., , ,, , )
The topic of drastically changing her mental age being confusing plays in to the weakness section because a childish girl who was just like "Lalala" turning into wild blood bitch is a sick image, but a girl who's cold and calculative turning sadistic is sort of just a disappointing, "well, okay."
The Restrained portion has me miffed probably because I offered you a great idea and you took it-- but only sort of. Coughing up blood while harming someone isn't a bad enough repurcussion-- my earlier suggestion of literally vomiting blood while using the power at all is not only hilarious if she uses the ability in serious situations, but also serves as a humanizing point that will help others this literal mary-sue is somewhat human and will die if they use their power too much because holy FUck she is vomiting blood. You tried to make it your own, though, but you tried weakly. Put your strength in the important things and not the small stuff like the other section(which, don't worry, I will get to.)
The background didn't change which sucks because it needed a revamping. You can't tell a half assed angst story like that and expect me and others to just be like "well, okay!!! sounds good!" If she was such a tough bitch and, good looking to boot, why was she such bully fodder?
Now we get to the main part of the problem and holy fUCK i've spent a number of characters on you, I condensed that shit above and if you want a more in depth analysis feel free to message me. But the bulk of my problem lies in literally the two kind of unimportant sections of any character sheet which you somehow decided was the focal point of the piece. The interests and the Other section got the most tit in the titjob metaphor I mentioned earlier on because holy cow did they make a big change. And the thing is, in the times I've seen you editing your profile, it was only for these two ones you kept returning to-- which again, why? Your bio still needed work? You have "blah blah" in there, I kinda thought that meant you were gonna edit it??
Only because it is almost 1am and I spent forty minutes writing this in a half-asleep stupor, I am gonna boil the last part down into main points. First of all, have you ever heard of a Mary Sue? I'm just realizing this now, is this actually a deep prank to make me go on a huge rant and have ryo run into this and think I'm fucking insane for going off? Am I being punked? Because oh my God your character which was at the "chuuni" level earlier on just nosedove into mary-sue territory. Short break, I just refreshed the page again and you added the sunshine and gumdrops in-- but why, what was the point---
Back to the broadcast, here is a list of additional specialties you have given this now 17yo girl- violin prodigy, mastery in poison, gun expert, dog whisperer, disowned adopted orphan(and this is just me pulling it out of my ass because I still don't know was she adopted, did family just take her in I don't know). Basically, look at this list here. Realistically, do you think a seventeen year old would have all of these abilities? Just a normal seventeen year old, no powers. And if you think, realistically, that a normal seventeen year old girl with those special set of skills does exist, then that poses this question: with all those things tucked under her belt plus the weird blood power thing, what the fuck is she doing in a school? How is she not harley quinning her ass through the cities and causing terror because apparently she is more than capable to do so?
my eyes r gettin weird i cant continue this but pm me 2morro after school n work n we'll discuss u scrappin this character entirely (whcih sucks bc i bet u worked mad hard on her, but also no it doesn't suck bc this character is awful and the only development we'll get out of her is nothing) and makin a new one which will hopefully b less of a mary-sue
god i hope im not bein punked
To begin with, you bringing my attention to the fact you edited your sheet is like, a sort of shorthand for saying, "my character is finished, please give it a once over and determine whether or not I can be accepted in this rp." And I did look at your character from the time you first posted it ten hours ago, and I gave it a look over and found problems that I couldn't put down due to being on mobile so I put it on the back of my head. I came over several times afterwards in the middle of creating my own character, to see that you had and were continuously updating and changing what I'd assumed was already a finished fleshed out character. I'm not saying this is a problem per se, to edit your character, but it's a problem if you've sort of implied that they were done being edited with.
Not only that, however, but the way you edited your character without waiting for a 'go' from me at any point during your process has not only failed to prevent unacceptable content from appearing in your sheet, but has also continued to pile it on. Your continuous editing without waiting for a word in from me has not helped you in creating a decent character sheet-- if you read my last dissertation on The One's sheet and tried to learn from that, that's great!!!!! I approve learning from others' mistakes!!! But if all you read from that was, "Oh, he mentioned not having enough words" and decided to continue to add more words and look past all the other crap I vomited about BEING OP, then you are not learning from others' mistakes, you are simply twisting it in hopes I'll overlook it for you.
So, then, wherein lie the problem? If you have not realized yet, your original post in the first page is still the same one that you said was the edited version ten hours ago on this second page, and in comparing them, anyone can see that you gave your CS the sheet equivalent of a boobjob. A pimp my ride version of character sheets, except I am looking at all these hardcore attachments that just don't need to be there and I don't know where to start. First, you aged her down(though that was a more recent edit, given it wasn't that way thirty minutes ago), which wouldn't necessarily be a problem, but you somehow thought this was okay after giving her literally an arsenal of skills and talents not even an anime protagonist would have two episodes into a series unless that series was sao which everyone agrees is awful.
Your ability is confusing and can be worded a bit differently, but I didn't mention that earlier and I take fault in that, especially since it is one of the few things to remain unchanged. The one thing that needed changing and you didn't, and I'm sorry it took me only now instead of sooner to bring it up. That was my fault.
Her physical strength barely indicates what she can or cannot do. From the mess that is the abilities section I gather that her strength is partially reliant to her ability, but then you don't explain what she is physical-wise without the Ability. You say she is fast and strong, but is that because of her power, or something she has developed?
I don't know why you changed her childish mental state into a tough bitch because that was one unique trait that I was willing to pass off for her. Her having been childish fit in with the "weak" image she was trying to portray but now, the way you forced the tough bitchiness on loses the little yandere vibe you had earlier and barely fits in with the rest of the forced puzzle pieces you were trying to put together. (also wtf how does she lov logic but not lov math like,, , ,, ??? ?? ? ?? math is the most universal thing along w music, which btw,, , , is also math ., , ,, , )
The topic of drastically changing her mental age being confusing plays in to the weakness section because a childish girl who was just like "Lalala" turning into wild blood bitch is a sick image, but a girl who's cold and calculative turning sadistic is sort of just a disappointing, "well, okay."
The Restrained portion has me miffed probably because I offered you a great idea and you took it-- but only sort of. Coughing up blood while harming someone isn't a bad enough repurcussion-- my earlier suggestion of literally vomiting blood while using the power at all is not only hilarious if she uses the ability in serious situations, but also serves as a humanizing point that will help others this literal mary-sue is somewhat human and will die if they use their power too much because holy FUck she is vomiting blood. You tried to make it your own, though, but you tried weakly. Put your strength in the important things and not the small stuff like the other section(which, don't worry, I will get to.)
The background didn't change which sucks because it needed a revamping. You can't tell a half assed angst story like that and expect me and others to just be like "well, okay!!! sounds good!" If she was such a tough bitch and, good looking to boot, why was she such bully fodder?
Now we get to the main part of the problem and holy fUCK i've spent a number of characters on you, I condensed that shit above and if you want a more in depth analysis feel free to message me. But the bulk of my problem lies in literally the two kind of unimportant sections of any character sheet which you somehow decided was the focal point of the piece. The interests and the Other section got the most tit in the titjob metaphor I mentioned earlier on because holy cow did they make a big change. And the thing is, in the times I've seen you editing your profile, it was only for these two ones you kept returning to-- which again, why? Your bio still needed work? You have "blah blah" in there, I kinda thought that meant you were gonna edit it??
Only because it is almost 1am and I spent forty minutes writing this in a half-asleep stupor, I am gonna boil the last part down into main points. First of all, have you ever heard of a Mary Sue? I'm just realizing this now, is this actually a deep prank to make me go on a huge rant and have ryo run into this and think I'm fucking insane for going off? Am I being punked? Because oh my God your character which was at the "chuuni" level earlier on just nosedove into mary-sue territory. Short break, I just refreshed the page again and you added the sunshine and gumdrops in-- but why, what was the point---
Back to the broadcast, here is a list of additional specialties you have given this now 17yo girl- violin prodigy, mastery in poison, gun expert, dog whisperer, disowned adopted orphan(and this is just me pulling it out of my ass because I still don't know was she adopted, did family just take her in I don't know). Basically, look at this list here. Realistically, do you think a seventeen year old would have all of these abilities? Just a normal seventeen year old, no powers. And if you think, realistically, that a normal seventeen year old girl with those special set of skills does exist, then that poses this question: with all those things tucked under her belt plus the weird blood power thing, what the fuck is she doing in a school? How is she not harley quinning her ass through the cities and causing terror because apparently she is more than capable to do so?
my eyes r gettin weird i cant continue this but pm me 2morro after school n work n we'll discuss u scrappin this character entirely (whcih sucks bc i bet u worked mad hard on her, but also no it doesn't suck bc this character is awful and the only development we'll get out of her is nothing) and makin a new one which will hopefully b less of a mary-sue
god i hope im not bein punked
ok i hav essay 2 do and like 50 art projects to masturb8 2 goodn i g ht u shitS
HalfOfLancelot What's worse: being heartbroke or roachbit?
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Name:
Age:
Height; Weight:
Stripes:
Reason for Admission:
Years Admitted:
Special Abilities:
Physical Strength:
Mental Strength:
Weaknesses:
Restrained?:
Details:
Background Info:
Interests:
Other:
slowly finishing this but it's like 5am haha. just, um, tell me if I'm ever trying too hard and i'll tone my dumbness down a bit
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"There's a gay agenda?! I knew I was forgetting something. Where can I order one?"
Name:
Atticus Dipper Hill
Age:
18
Height; Weight:
5'9"; 188lbs
Stripes:
12
Reason for Admission:
Tagged a pervert after losing control of a tentacle after being forced to watch 'Two girls; one cup' by his school's loudmouth asshole. After trying to wrestle it back to the dimension it arose from, one of the suctions snagged the teacher's outfit and ripped it clean off. It left soon after and Dipper was left staring in shame at his naked teacher. They quickly coaxed the whole 'how do you get these hentai-fuel monsters?' because being gullible is probably one of his prime traits. After that, woosh off to Greenwing.
Years Admitted:
2 years
Special Abilities:
Fucking Tentacles? but not like... that kinda fucking - well, if anything were ever correctly labeled, this one would probably be it. A power with a flimsy control mechanic tied to certain thought patterns rip tentacles from another dimension to be used under Dipper's control for a limited amount of time. These thought patterns revolve around... sexual fantasies and not just his own sexual fantasies, but sexual fantasies that absolutely repulse him.
The tentacles range in size and color, but mainly stay the same in functionality (so no crazy razor tentacles or robo-tentacles with laser beams; but they can sometimes looks super gross and slimy). They mostly stay under the average guidelines of a regular tentacle: thick, suctiony, rubbery, mildly durable, stronger than the average human (can lift up to 300 pounds and can pack quite a wallop, like getting punched in the face by a giant tentacle - wait, no - like getting punched in the face by Arnold Schwarzenegger wielding boxing gloves). They also taste quite delectable, like sashimi coated with wasabi and dipped in eldritch power - the taste of a million souls skewered onto a shishkabob waiting to be assimilated into the giant mass of horror fROM WHENCE IT CAME. OUT OF THE DEPTHS OF TARTARUS - FROM THE SACRED LANDS OF R'YLOTH - IN THE MAW OF AZATHOTH - BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD AND SKULLS FOR HIS SKULL THRONE - SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE- [insert intermittent coughing] Ahem, sorry... uh.. ANYWAY:
They last from a mere few seconds to a few minutes at a time and are hard to control under most circumstances. It's like trying to grab something while your entire arm's numb and dead to the world after having laid on it for a good eight hours. It feels weird and disembodied for Dipper and fine motor control with even just one tentacle is currently impossible. A lot of the time, if he does something successfully that isn't just swinging it around like a fucking giant dildo, it's out of sheer luck.
A therapist once asked what he thought about when summoning one of these long, suction cupped beasts. His answer, meek and timid was, "Grandma and her [brief and mild mouth vomiting interruption here] ovi - no I can't say it - okay fine - no please I don't - ovipositionfetishpleasedon'taskmetoexplainit. D-don't tell her I told you that."
The tentacles range in size and color, but mainly stay the same in functionality (so no crazy razor tentacles or robo-tentacles with laser beams; but they can sometimes looks super gross and slimy). They mostly stay under the average guidelines of a regular tentacle: thick, suctiony, rubbery, mildly durable, stronger than the average human (can lift up to 300 pounds and can pack quite a wallop, like getting punched in the face by a giant tentacle - wait, no - like getting punched in the face by Arnold Schwarzenegger wielding boxing gloves). They also taste quite delectable, like sashimi coated with wasabi and dipped in eldritch power - the taste of a million souls skewered onto a shishkabob waiting to be assimilated into the giant mass of horror fROM WHENCE IT CAME. OUT OF THE DEPTHS OF TARTARUS - FROM THE SACRED LANDS OF R'YLOTH - IN THE MAW OF AZATHOTH - BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD AND SKULLS FOR HIS SKULL THRONE - SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE- [insert intermittent coughing] Ahem, sorry... uh.. ANYWAY:
They last from a mere few seconds to a few minutes at a time and are hard to control under most circumstances. It's like trying to grab something while your entire arm's numb and dead to the world after having laid on it for a good eight hours. It feels weird and disembodied for Dipper and fine motor control with even just one tentacle is currently impossible. A lot of the time, if he does something successfully that isn't just swinging it around like a fucking giant dildo, it's out of sheer luck.
A therapist once asked what he thought about when summoning one of these long, suction cupped beasts. His answer, meek and timid was, "Grandma and her [brief and mild mouth vomiting interruption here] ovi - no I can't say it - okay fine - no please I don't - ovipositionfetishpleasedon'taskmetoexplainit. D-don't tell her I told you that."
Physical Strength:
Physical capacity: 5/10
Mental Strength:
Mental capacity: 3/10 (on a good day 7/10; it's a big leap, but you underestimate how gullible this fuck is)
Weaknesses:
Restrained?:
Yes
Details:
Anytime Dipper thinks of anything sexual, whether he means to summon the tentacles or not, the collar immediately sends his mind into a haze and turns the image he'd been conjuring up on its head. Mostly it's just desexualizing it, turning genitalia into harmless dogs or elephants or... uh... things that aren't uh... well, you get the gist of it.
A harmless effect in its own right that's actually pretty beneficial aside from the fact that, while desensitizing his mind, it simultaneously causes Dipper to go into a weird catharsis where he can't talk. Instead he just moans very obscenely without actual sexual stimulation - he gets nothing from this, just moans uncontrollably. He's consciously aware of this effect and it often causes him to go into a panic where he tries to stop the noises from coming out and instead just makes it worse.
On weird occasions, the collar will short circuit and cause Dipper to speak the language of the Old Ones announcing the arrival of an Elder God as he chants the words of power in a menacing, deep monotone. He's eventually stopped before the ritual can be finished as the collar shorts again before rebooting and he goes back to moaning like a cat in heat (caterwauling that's what the term is. caterwauling). Even if he were to finish the lines, there are a million other checks before any summoning could actually take place... haha right?.
A harmless effect in its own right that's actually pretty beneficial aside from the fact that, while desensitizing his mind, it simultaneously causes Dipper to go into a weird catharsis where he can't talk. Instead he just moans very obscenely without actual sexual stimulation - he gets nothing from this, just moans uncontrollably. He's consciously aware of this effect and it often causes him to go into a panic where he tries to stop the noises from coming out and instead just makes it worse.
On weird occasions, the collar will short circuit and cause Dipper to speak the language of the Old Ones announcing the arrival of an Elder God as he chants the words of power in a menacing, deep monotone. He's eventually stopped before the ritual can be finished as the collar shorts again before rebooting and he goes back to moaning like a cat in heat (caterwauling that's what the term is. caterwauling). Even if he were to finish the lines, there are a million other checks before any summoning could actually take place... haha right?.
Background Info:
Interests:
Other:
slowly finishing this but it's like 5am haha. just, um, tell me if I'm ever trying too hard and i'll tone my dumbness down a bit
sakurasan you don't know how to wash your shoes
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@LetterA fffffuuuuu- sorry. I made this during class and totally didn't realize what a Mary sue bitch I was making. I'll change it up and when I'm OFFICIALLY done, and only then, will I mention you to tell you that. I really appreciate that you took so much time on me >>
GM
@HalfOfLancelot i m fuCkiNg piSSing mysElf this is hilarioUs shI T but whE e Ze ok,,, , u finish ur thing up,, Consider m e hyP e--- n ur probably gonna expand on this l8r but if u could js include more info on the physical n mental strengths lik e, , speed strength n stamina,,, y e s
@sakurasan !!!!!! i am glad u r not discouraged!!!! nothin i adore more in a person than someone willin 2 push em selves n improve (((((((': i hope u think things over n surprise me w somethin rly cool !!!!!! i kno u got it in u ((((:
@sakurasan !!!!!! i am glad u r not discouraged!!!! nothin i adore more in a person than someone willin 2 push em selves n improve (((((((': i hope u think things over n surprise me w somethin rly cool !!!!!! i kno u got it in u ((((:
Traitor under cardiac arrest
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4 yrs ago
I heard this place needs a trap.
Is there a trap yet!
Do you still need a trap!!
(No seriously though, with the amount of CSs already floating around this is more like a careful poke to see whether it'd be cool to trap a trap. With traps. Just for the awful pun.)
Is there a trap yet!
Do you still need a trap!!
(No seriously though, with the amount of CSs already floating around this is more like a careful poke to see whether it'd be cool to trap a trap. With traps. Just for the awful pun.)
GM
@Traitori was gonna make trap bc i lov e traps but I already got my quota fiLL E D SO YE S pleAse makE a traP this rp n e e DS a traP
n if i end up makin a trap l8r in life they can n friends (((((':
n if i end up makin a trap l8r in life they can n friends (((((':
Traitor under cardiac arrest
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In that case I am happy to announce that I have a brilliant idea for a character that I will get to finish until tomorrow. It involves the second best kind of traps, too:
BEAR TRAPS
Wicker daughter of ash and rust
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just letting y'all know i'm still fully intending on getting my character up soon! felt kind of nauseous, yesterday, so i basically fell into sleep hell for way longer than what's probably healthy lmao
sorry for any inconveniences this might cause!!!!
sorry for any inconveniences this might cause!!!!
GM
@Traitor im @ work so i can't poorly draw it but,, , thaT is nO t the be a r trap THA t firs T cam e in 2 my H. E A D
@Wickerno it's OkaY!!!!!! SlEeP is GOOD E Sp comiNg froM me ,, , whO loVes SlePe i still appreci8 ur presence and thank u 4 assurin me ur still here ((((': take ur time i hope u feel better:0!!
@Wickerno it's OkaY!!!!!! SlEeP is GOOD E Sp comiNg froM me ,, , whO loVes SlePe i still appreci8 ur presence and thank u 4 assurin me ur still here ((((': take ur time i hope u feel better:0!!
sakurasan you don't know how to wash your shoes
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@LetterA Ok. So, i'm done~ WHOA. Yeah. So I changed a lot in this CS. >> I hope I did good. If I edit something, it'll be grammar. If I need to edit anything else, i'll PM you. But... IREAALLY NEED TOSTUDY SO BYE!
[Edit] Sorry. I'll edit the power to something more simple for now and get back to it later. :(( I don't know what's wrong with me.
Age~
17
Height and weight~
5’4”, 132
Reason for admission~
Years admitted~
1 year
Special abilities~
Mary is a weapon girl and she got a weapon as her ability.
Physical strength~
First of all, she’s strong. Her strength isn’t something to underestimate. At all. She can lift a car if she feels like it and kick a soccer ball so hard that it goes off the field. Look weak? Good. That’s what she likes. No one can tell that she is this strong from her appearance. I mean, look at her! She looks like someone could just snap her in half. Her physical strength is to the point that people think she’s some sort of monster of superhuman. But nope, she’s just Mary. Her speed isn't too bad but pretty average.
Mental strength~
Mary is mistaken for someone that has a tough mental state. Someone that doesn’t let anything affect her. They’re wrong. She is extremely hard on herself in actuality and can’t stand the fact that she’s a failure. But at the same time, she chooses to hold everything inside of her until it all bursts out. She may seem like the kind of girl that is cutesy and non-sensitive but she’s cutesy and sensitive to the point of insults hitting her hard. She will try her best not to seem hurt but when she’s alone or with someone she trusts (which is practically no one), she may be different.
-Great at science. Reading? Meh, sure. Math?...No. Just no. Her average in math is usually around a D and if she's lucky, a C.
Weaknesses~
Restrained?
Nope
Details~
[backstory-
Interests~
Other~
[Edit] Sorry. I'll edit the power to something more simple for now and get back to it later. :(( I don't know what's wrong with me.
"Am I sweet? Do I look sweet to you~?"
Mary Augustine
Age~
17
Height and weight~
5’4”, 132
Reason for admission~
- She isn’t a violent person. She says. Mary was often bullied and finally had enough of it, hospitalizing 6 kids (May have put one of them into a tiny coma). What did the teachers see? Her licking the blood off her nails with a cutesy smile.
- Ditched class. She only did it 20 times in high school! Seriously! Only 20 times and she was bored so what was she supposed to do? Plus, it was math class and… fuck that.
- Foul language towards the teacher. Her reason is that “W-well… he was looking at me with dirty eyes.” but it happened more
Years admitted~
1 year
Special abilities~
Mary is a weapon girl and she got a weapon as her ability.
Physical strength~
First of all, she’s strong. Her strength isn’t something to underestimate. At all. She can lift a car if she feels like it and kick a soccer ball so hard that it goes off the field. Look weak? Good. That’s what she likes. No one can tell that she is this strong from her appearance. I mean, look at her! She looks like someone could just snap her in half. Her physical strength is to the point that people think she’s some sort of monster of superhuman. But nope, she’s just Mary. Her speed isn't too bad but pretty average.
Mental strength~
Mary is mistaken for someone that has a tough mental state. Someone that doesn’t let anything affect her. They’re wrong. She is extremely hard on herself in actuality and can’t stand the fact that she’s a failure. But at the same time, she chooses to hold everything inside of her until it all bursts out. She may seem like the kind of girl that is cutesy and non-sensitive but she’s cutesy and sensitive to the point of insults hitting her hard. She will try her best not to seem hurt but when she’s alone or with someone she trusts (which is practically no one), she may be different.
-Great at science. Reading? Meh, sure. Math?...No. Just no. Her average in math is usually around a D and if she's lucky, a C.
Weaknesses~
- Borderline crazy when she snaps. Remember, borderline, ok? She isn’t the one that says this about herself. I mean, she doesn’t think of herself as crazy but others were argue differently if they’ve ever pissed her off.
- She can’t really control herself when she gets angry or something. She turns into practically another person even though it just might be another side of her.
- Hates/scared of trucks. They’re big, scary, and have an aura of death in her eyes. She’ll turn around if there’s a truck in front of her and retreat back to wherever she was.
- Hates bubbles. They’re annoying. They go wherever they like and they don’t listen. Plus, when they pop in your eyes, they hurt!
- Good or bad thing? You decide. The love- no. Adores the taste of blood.
- When she’s tired, she’s out. She’ll fall asleep in less than 10 seconds but sadly, is awoken quite easily.
Restrained?
Nope
Details~
[backstory-
Interests~
- Sunshine, smiles, gumdrops, oh my! Hah... Yeeeeeah. Sure.
- Sweets! Cheesecake? She already had one today. Apple pie? What do you think she ate for breakfast? Vanilla cupcake? Ummm... It's in her hand right now. A major sweet lover, but don't worry! She eats veggies too! Just not really in front of people.
- Baking because sweets.
- Fighting
- Reading. She loves to read and could do so for more than 5 hours. Nerdy? Sure. But she has very specific types of books that she'll read.
- Dolls and dark rooms. Yep, she's not emo. She just finds dolls cute and dark rooms comforting.
- Blood. Give her your blood to drink and she'll adore you. Dracula? Nope.
- The violin. She's been playing practically all her life.
- Adventures. Ooooh~ A dare devil?
Other~
- She can be seen smiling often. When is she actually smiling sincerely?
- Oh god. Her + Chemicals + she hates you? I don’t recommend drinking anything she gives you. Food? Go ahead. She doesn’t poison food ever since she might feel like eating and end up taking a bite. It’s happened before.
- Extremely good at playing the violin. This might not matter, but it makes her happy to play the violin. And mad at the same time. The only types of songs she can play are fast songs.
- She loves dogs. They’re so obedient and cute!
- What could calm her down? Candy. No, not cheesecakes. Hard candy. Stuff like gumdrops and jolly ranchers. Childish? Sure.
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