And post is up, hope it's good. Once again, sorry for hte delay with getting it up, hope it's okay that i had Khosin goign along with the vehicle as well.

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The only thing I noticed with the post was how did Khosin know about Iosif being a former slave?

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The only thing I noticed with the post was how did Khosin know about Iosif being a former slave?

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This, and it was a good post, but please take the time to proofread it. There's a lot of typos.

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He has a barcode with Batarian numbers/letters tattooed on the nape of his neck. Back at the start of the RP when Khosin went to tell Dex about the engine, he noticed that and freaked out a little.

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Awww, shit, thought I had catches all the typos. Sorry Dervs, will proofread it once again.

EDIT: Allright, proofread it again and think I caught most of the typos. Sorry for that, not sure how they went past me when I proofread it the first time.

Clearly, because all batarians are slavers and automaticlly have built in slave-detection instinct /racistassumptions.

In all seriousness I think in one of his earlier posts Khosin noticed the barcode on Iosif's neck and quickly picked up on it. I'm fine with just assuming that the barcode has numerals on it that suggested he was placed on Aratoht but yeah.

Clearly, because all batarians are slavers and automaticlly have built in slave-detection instinct /racistassumptions.

In all seriousness I think in one of his earlier posts Khosin noticed the barcode on Iosif's neck and quickly picked up on it. I'm fine with just assuming that the barcode has numerals on it that suggested he was placed on Aratoht but yeah.

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No worries! I know it's tricky because English is a second language, I've just seen you have some largely error free posts before so I know it's in you. :P

Clearly, because all batarians are slavers and automaticlly have built in slave-detection instinct /racistassumptions.

In all seriousness I think in one of his earlier posts Khosin noticed the barcode on Iosif's neck and quickly picked up on it. I'm fine with just assuming that the barcode has numerals on it that suggested he was placed on Aratoht but yeah.

I wish... IT was the weekend again!

Dervish, waiting for you on the pad sweetheart! <3

Hey friends on the right!

Anybody working on anything, or should we hammer out a collab? I feel like we can start to wrap this up like leftover dinner and move onto less shooty stuff.

Is what Kasy said about callously killing civilians over the team intercoms?

Also finished Tanya's playlist. I'm still working on Khosin's, I'm having trouble with the odd song ;~;

Counting All the Assholes in the Room

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@Mortarion: you can likely tell Tricks some stuff about Khosin, that usually helped her a bit. A few things I can think of are what what his prime motivation for what he does? His relationship with those around him, etc? Stuff that's not plotwise, but focused on the PC and not stated on the CS. I told Tricks a lot about Vellios, both plot and character wise from his life as a child to what happened and will happen to him that she got a good image of it.

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Well, when we did our collab I actually told her about khosin, his backstory and why he was gathering money. The only thigns I didn't say were those I left out of the bio on purpose. Though I didn't get too much into relationships and stuff liek that so I suppose there's that. But yeah, you are right, I suppsoe I should tell Tricks a few more stuff abotu Khosin's past and waht will, or oculd, happen to him.