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The only thing I noticed with the post was how did Khosin know about Iosif being a former slave?
He has a barcode with Batarian numbers/letters tattooed on the nape of his neck. Back at the start of the RP when Khosin went to tell Dex about the engine, he noticed that and freaked out a little.
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This, and it was a good post, but please take the time to proofread it. There's a lot of typos.
Awww, shit, thought I had catches all the typos. Sorry Dervs, will proofread it once again.
EDIT: Allright, proofread it again and think I caught most of the typos. Sorry for that, not sure how they went past me when I proofread it the first time.