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And post is up, hope it's good. Once again, sorry for hte delay with getting it up, hope it's okay that i had Khosin goign along with the vehicle as well.


The only thing I noticed with the post was how did Khosin know about Iosif being a former slave?
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The only thing I noticed with the post was how did Khosin know about Iosif being a former slave?


This, and it was a good post, but please take the time to proofread it. There's a lot of typos.
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The only thing I noticed with the post was how did Khosin know about Iosif being a former slave?


He has a barcode with Batarian numbers/letters tattooed on the nape of his neck. Back at the start of the RP when Khosin went to tell Dex about the engine, he noticed that and freaked out a little.

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This, and it was a good post, but please take the time to proofread it. There's a lot of typos.


Awww, shit, thought I had catches all the typos. Sorry Dervs, will proofread it once again.

EDIT: Allright, proofread it again and think I caught most of the typos. Sorry for that, not sure how they went past me when I proofread it the first time.
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Clearly, because all batarians are slavers and automaticlly have built in slave-detection instinct /racistassumptions.

In all seriousness I think in one of his earlier posts Khosin noticed the barcode on Iosif's neck and quickly picked up on it. I'm fine with just assuming that the barcode has numerals on it that suggested he was placed on Aratoht but yeah.
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He has a barcode with Batarian numbers/letters tattooed on the nape of his neck. Back at the start of the RP when Khosin went to tell Dex about the engine, he noticed that and freaked out a little.

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Awww, shit, thought I had catches all the typos. Sorry Dervs, will proofread it once again.

EDIT: Allright, proofread it again and think I caught most of the typos. Sorry for that, not sure how they went past me when I proofread it the first time.


No worries! I know it's tricky because English is a second language, I've just seen you have some largely error free posts before so I know it's in you. :P

Clearly, because all batarians are slavers and automaticlly have built in slave-detection instinct /racistassumptions.

In all seriousness I think in one of his earlier posts Khosin noticed the barcode on Iosif's neck and quickly picked up on it. I'm fine with just assuming that the barcode has numerals on it that suggested he was placed on Aratoht but yeah.


Iosif clearly just likes the style. Kind of like how white teenagers are all about Asian characters that translate to "Dumpster Slut" and "Stinky Hamburger" instead of "Strength" and "Hope" like they were told.

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Clearly, because all batarians are slavers and automaticlly have built in slave-detection instinct /racistassumptions.

In all seriousness I think in one of his earlier posts Khosin noticed the barcode on Iosif's neck and quickly picked up on it. I'm fine with just assuming that the barcode has numerals on it that suggested he was placed on Aratoht but yeah.


Yep, that's correct, in one of my earlier posts I had Khosin notice the barcode in Iosif's neck and he put two and two together. Even so, hope it's not much of a bother that i had Khosin pick up on that fact, should have asked you beforehand if that was ok.

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No worries! I know it's tricky because English is a second language, I've just seen you have some largely error free posts before so I know it's in you. :P


Hahaha, yeah, I do was rather surprised by the amount of typos to be honest, guess I was a bit mroe tired than I thoguht when I proofread that post.

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Clearly, because all batarians are slavers and automaticlly have built in slave-detection instinct /racistassumptions.

In all seriousness I think in one of his earlier posts Khosin noticed the barcode on Iosif's neck and quickly picked up on it. I'm fine with just assuming that the barcode has numerals on it that suggested he was placed on Aratoht but yeah.


It's a character connection really. Though the funny bit, Vellios has similar scars from his own slave collar, though he lacks the numbers for obvious reasons. :p
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I wish... IT was the weekend again!

Dervish, waiting for you on the pad sweetheart! <3
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I wish... IT was the weekend again!

Dervish, waiting for you on the pad sweetheart! <3


Oh, in that case, I'll take another day off writing. :'D
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Hey friends on the right!

Anybody working on anything, or should we hammer out a collab? I feel like we can start to wrap this up like leftover dinner and move onto less shooty stuff.
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Hey friends on the right!

Anybody working on anything, or should we hammer out a collab? I feel like we can start to wrap this up like leftover dinner and move onto less shooty stuff.


I'd be up for doign a collab, but might be a ltitle distracted since I have to do some reading.
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As far as Dex is concerned she'll stick close to watch the area until she's caught or pulled back by the rest of the team. If you guys want we can do a big ole collab to reflect the ensuing chaos.
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Is what Kasy said about callously killing civilians over the team intercoms?
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Is what Kasy said about callously killing civilians over the team intercoms?


Same thing with Haze @DJAtomika
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Just the local I'd say. If everyone's comments were going over the whole teams comm net all the time it'd be very confusing. So I'd assume only those in the collab heard the casually killing civilians remarks....
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Also finished Tanya's playlist. I'm still working on Khosin's, I'm having trouble with the odd song ;~;

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Also finished Tanya's playlist. I'm still working on Khosin's, I'm having trouble with the odd song ;~;

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@Mortarion: you can likely tell Tricks some stuff about Khosin, that usually helped her a bit. A few things I can think of are what what his prime motivation for what he does? His relationship with those around him, etc? Stuff that's not plotwise, but focused on the PC and not stated on the CS. I told Tricks a lot about Vellios, both plot and character wise from his life as a child to what happened and will happen to him that she got a good image of it.
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@Mortarion: you can likely tell Tricks some stuff about Khosin, that usually helped her a bit. A few things I can think of are what what his prime motivation for what he does? His relationship with those around him, etc? Stuff that's not plotwise, but focused on the PC and not stated on the CS. I told Tricks a lot about Vellios, both plot and character wise from his life as a child to what happened and will happen to him that she got a good image of it.


Well, when we did our collab I actually told her about khosin, his backstory and why he was gathering money. The only thigns I didn't say were those I left out of the bio on purpose. Though I didn't get too much into relationships and stuff liek that so I suppose there's that. But yeah, you are right, I suppsoe I should tell Tricks a few more stuff abotu Khosin's past and waht will, or oculd, happen to him.
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Well, when we did our collab I actually told her about khosin, his backstory and why he was gathering money. The only thigns I didn't say were those I left out of the bio on purpose. Though I didn't get too much into relationships and stuff liek that so I suppose there's that. But yeah, you are right, I suppsoe I should tell Tricks a few more stuff abotu Khosin's past and waht will, or oculd, happen to him.


Indeed hun. I just yammered on about Vellios really as she enjoys learning about characters, how they work, why they work that and more. To her, it's like exploring the mental and physical facets of an individual. She learned Vellios was a massive trainwreck with loyalty to his dead family, playboy tendencies and a heart to some extend. It was sweet really.
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