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THIS THREAD IS A WIP. EXPECT HEAVY CHANGES (24/02/14)

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Of Sweet Night, One Faint Kiss


Nazeek Thorne said The world grows tumultuous and I fear this fact is revealed to me all too late. I serve you, Selene, however, my years in this world have taught me that little of what comes easily is true and that life's secrets come with struggle. Léva is a vast and beautiful land with unparalleled histories. Yet, tucked between the years of culture and advancement hide transgressions sewn deep as if to the bone of this very land. How many hints at the reality of things have passed these eyes without notice? We talk about this great threat, too afraid to even properly mark the name, but did the threat ever pass? I don't believe so.

Excerpt from Journal of Nazeek Thorne, 409 4E

Index
I. Regions of Léva
1. Léve, "Mystical Forest"
2. Lémuria, "Floating Isles"
3. Nebel, "Dark Lands"
4. Annwn, "Underlands/Desert"
5. Himlan, "Spine of Léva"
6. Sanctum, "Seat of the Empire"
7. Selvia Oscura, "Shadowed Forest"
II. The Arts & Mythos
1. Art of Lef
2. Art of Logos
3. Mythos
III. People of Léva
1. Organizations
2. Night Kiss Roster
3. People of Note

I.
Regions of Léva

Léva is one continent, but its share of concerns befits a world's. The land is believed by some to have a special connection to Lef, the magick of life, so one must never be surprised at what wonders hide in the furthest reaches. Ours is also a land of surprising variance. A thick forest with seemingly endless fog might quickly dissipate into barren tundra quicker than elsewhere. Most regions are known for their unique qualities, and if well researched, one should know what may be to come. Finally, Léva is an old land with scars and myths mysterious to even the learned. Without this history to guide and to build from we are lesser than we might be. Always keep an eye for answers to our great mysteries.

All descriptions are current as of the present, Autumn, 415 of the 4th Era

Léve, the Forest of Lef _________________________________________________________________________________


Lémuria, the Floating Isles_________________________________________________________________________________


Nebel, the Dark Lands_________________________________________________________________________________


Annwn, the Lands Above & Below_________________________________________________________________________________


Himlan, the Spine of Léva_________________________________________________________________________________


Sanctum, Seat of the Empire_________________________________________________________________________________


Selvia Oscura


II.
The Arts & Mythos

Art of Lef_________________________________________________________________________________


Art of Logos_________________________________________________________________________________


Mythos_________________________________________________________________________________

III.
People of Léva

Organizations_________________________________________________________________________________
Night Kiss


Empire of Sanctum


Night Watchers


Followers of Logos
Followers of Lef

People of Note_________________________________________________________________________________
Empress Hila Diane Rodham of Sanctum (b. 365) Empress of Sanctum (circa 395), Retired General under last Emperor, Third to Rule Sanctum
Elven Elders (Est. 1st Era) Council made up of centuries old Elves who remain in Léve forgoing death and freedom to serve Léva as non-partisan advisers, scholars, and sometimes spiritual leaders
Patriarchs of Annwn (Est. Early 4th Era) Four Dwarven Kings with respected familial lines who share power over Annwn through a deeply patriarchal system
Queen Malala 'Iron Lady' Tuff of Lémuria (b. 380) Queen of Lémuria (circa 404), ...
Nazeek Thorne (b. ???- 415 (?)) Master Assassin under Night Kiss

Night Kiss Roster_________________________________________________________________________________


Sogna of Sweet Night, Fall 370
Simeon Cythera of Sweet Night, Spring 399
Rhus Lancia of Sweet Night, Spring 409
Samantha, the Wisp of Sweet Night, Winter 410
Dez, the Shadow of Sweet Night, 411
Arin the Black-Blooded of Sweet Night, Winter 414
Rose Thorned One of Sweet Night, Autumn 415

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Mission Difficulty_________________________________________________________________________________
I'll be straight with all of you. I have GMed a handful of roleplays since 2009 and many were built around the idea of choice and how it might effect everyone involved. Choice is the greatest tool we have in a roleplay, as it defines our characters, and it marks a precise decision to act in a way that may clearly benefit or cut down others. When cornered and left to choose between one's own benefit, perhaps their very survival, in reality this choice is monumental and separates some from others. Roleplay is difficult to display this same, palm-sweating sort of point. To remedy the issue I have included the use of dice/stats in a very simple form. Here's the Standard Model for rolling below with a brief example of how it can play out. The rolls are meant to help guide creativity and lock in a few general ideas for outcomes. You roll shit consistently, then you know this isn't going to be your day. You can decide to become wounded, to be separated, and this can inspire you to greater 'what-ifs' along the way. As an example, I am not a dice guy, but I rolled about a minor decision for a character of mine in Apocalyptica, and it ultimately led to his being captured and sold into slavery. The same possibilities are here. Revel in them!

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Hm, you've got a really strange land to explore that you've set out for us, though I do wish we had a map. I'll read through most of this and wait for a CS, which I should have done within' a day or two.

I already have a few ideas brewing, too.
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I agree. Even if just a rough sketch with the names of the regions written in. You've given great description, but some people are more visual (*cough* me *cough*) and wouldn't want to misstep because it's difficult to describe what one can't fully grasp.

I've read the whole thing and already like where this is going. The lands are especially interesting. I don't think they're too long, personally.
Once the CS is up, I should have it done in a jiffy (of course not a literal jiffy, but I've already noted some things about the character I'm thinking about, so it shouldn't take me long).

TL;DR - I love it, but a map might be helpful to the visually inclined.
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Jiffy is now a measurement of time.
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Thought I mentioned this before, apologies -- the map and graphics for each category are on the way. I usually create maps myself and commission graphics, but in this case, am doing all that (as far as I can tell). I knew everyone could read, obviously, so I focused on this and will do the CS next as time allows. From there I'll work on the map and onto Organizations and so on... looks like I forgot to add Races and the like under there too, but that too. Expect a non-traditional CS. As with Apocalyptica, another project I'm on, I've seen the value avoiding the basic résumé style sheet. Should be fun and help you get in their heads!

Glad you're all enjoying it thus far! I tried to leave some room outside major cities within each region for people to build their own. It's totally plausible to live in any region, granted Himlan is probably rocky territory (pun!). You're welcome to come up with your own villages and towns and the like, but if you plan something big just fly the idea by me here. Others will benefit from hearing your ideas.
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HURR DURR.
HOW REED?!

That sounds good, I always like an original character sheet, shakes things up a bit. I might come up with a few ideas for towns and what not, but I'll have to wait and see.
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Character Sheets have been added under Night Kiss Roster. May the submissions begin!
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I am Fate's Strike unexpectedly come, I come too soon and am before their time, I am reaper, predator, and I swear this Oath before Selene. I, Darius Boretto of Sweet Night, One Faint Kiss. Amongst Night's Chosen, I shall be Rhus Lancia .

The Chosen are my kin, I am servant to Selene for She is my patron, my Divine. Through my kin, I offer my skills to Selene. I offer the skills that I can call to my name. My ability to kill, as I swagger my way through the enemy, using dagger and wine to defeat my foes. I give my knowledge of the many different brews known to man, allowing myself to fool Selene's foes, I hide within' plain sight, being generous and kind before I claim a life. I thank Selene for my face, not many know it, and that I use to my advantage. My last gift is a crooked tongue, like that of a snake, to ever weaken my foes. . I submit my greatest flaws: my lack of strength in battle, for without my tools, I become but a simple man, defenseless against a sword or rifle. I also submit my... blinded dreams of love, for women are a blessing on this world, and I submit to temptations so eagerly, so that my kin might aid me in my time of need. I recognize the Sweet Night knows no politics and declare mine openly to shed temptation. I regret that I absolutely despise the many races of this world, for all are inferior to humanity. But, as I join, . may my kin aid me should I stumble as I shall do so for them.

Openly I declare with neither pride nor shame-- for Sweet Night knows neither-- my past as kin may know. I was born but a simple child, neither destined for nobility, nor destined for war. I chose a different side, that of the shadows and thievery. I regret that I did what I did to survive, taking from others, much of a bully as I was a child. It was easier back then, for children do not house the rage and anger that many people do. Of course, adults only need know the taste of a good wine to spill their secrets... and blood. All it took for children was a quick push and a shove, maybe a blackened eye, and suddenly I had a few coins, or a meal for the night. I did what I could for my mother, who, after my father died down in the deep dark of the mines, took to the brew to keep down her fears and sadness. I took care of her, but, she died when I was finally turned six and ten years.

After that, I had a meager life. Forced to work in the same tunnels that my own father had worked and died in. I fled, one day, to finally realize my purpose. All it took to bring down the head of the Mine was a swift tongue, a few flagons of ale, and a quick knife to the throat. It was surprisingly easy to penetrate the thin flesh as we walked down an alleyway, and the way the way the brew foamed out of the newly added hole as he choked to death... still leaves me with excitement every time I see it.


I do not hide from the gaze of my kin. Do not fret if I ask you for a drink, for as a man, I succumb to the taste as any other, it is both my tool, and what allows me to get through the day. Of course, I've grown a tolerance over the years, I've drunken many fine ales and wines, some simply awful, some that danced on my tongue, like a maiden in your trousers. I also admit my love for the fairer sex, as even I some times can not control myself, and become like a dog in heat, looking for a leg to hump. But, I am not a horny old man, I am a suave gentleman, and will control myself if I can.

Expect me to be of little use in a straight on fight, I did not get past the push and shove and onto the clashing of swords and smell of gunpowder that is today. I can hold my own, at least, but not very well. I do not use a sword, but a knife. Those are not as easily revealed as a dagger, hidden in one's boot or coat. And, all it takes is a quick stab, and a job well done with a dagger.


Truly as I am Rhus Lancia and amongst Night's Chosen, I seal my Oath. Of Sweet Night, One Faint Kiss. Early Spring, 409, of the 4th Era.

--Attached is a drawn portrait of Rhus.
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SirBeowulf Welcome to the fold. You posted first and reminded me to add the date, so it's in there now right under the general topic 'Regions of Léva. Go ahead and put it in. For now I imagine your character as someone with quite a bit of experience in life, regardless of in Night Kiss, I see someone in their early to mid thirties. Very interesting character. You seem to be on the same vein I normally might follow. I could see Darius as a practising apothecary, but think the strengths you chose are a good balance of Charisma, Intimate Killing, and Expert Brewer (an interesting choice). To be clear, your weaknesses are Lack of Strength, Easily Swayed by Temptation/Lust. I like it and the history. You left a bit of a gap as to how Darius joined up, but I suspect this may be related to your not having a date reference. I'll be building a character in the near future, if you'd like, they can be related to your entrance. Feel free to PM me if you fancy that.

Oh, I'll just throw out there, while I watch a couple anime here and there like any other, you are dealing with someone who'd prefer not to see it describing characters. See anime is great for how easily acceptable it is to the eye. Each expression is big and clear, even when we barely know them. Here we're developing the characters and writing all those expressions. That furrowed brow that seems to rest like an excited, if uneasy V could be better served left to the written word or another type of image. I'll say you've at least chosen a better image as far as that area is concerned for this. So, that said, if you find another image please do switch them out, but it's not top priority.

Krauxis You BeoWulf may now gloat of your position. Just to be clear, you must've made at least three excuses for your CS before I even opened the hider. Not the best way to present your work, right? Have some faith and don't apologize for what you create. You were excited to make this and that should come with no shame.

The youth and the possession seem solid. I was a bit suspicious in the earlier bits, but your writing in the history sold me that you'd give this some thought and would play it with excitement. Rosa is possessed and will likely gain knowledge given time in the IC as well as being strangely effected by what lands manipulate Lef. Severity of these effects can be determined between us as we go, but dice will probably have some part in it (I don't do dice/stats much, so it's gonna be easy). Just know that.

Your strengths are Excellent in Close-Combat, Energy Drain, and Fierce Loyalty. Weaknesses include Violent Stubbornness and Perpetual Hunger. First, she's young and I'd prefer if you clicked Excellent-anything to Intermediate -- can hold her own, but could use further training as she will get with Night Kiss. Let's talk about the latter. You made Energy Drain require the will and need to eat, but you always need to eat -- possessed or not. I'm going to aim for more precise language here just so what I expect you to give into the possession is clear. If Rosa does not drain regularly then she losses mass, her body fat and muscle are literally consumed as energy for Beezelbub. Why not instead change your weakness of Perpetual Hunger to the life-threatening need to regularly feed off others' mass. I'd also use your explanation at the end to more clearly explain that the mass is converted to energy to sate the demon and sustain you. It's beyond you taking their Lef, you're sort of ignoring that and going right for the meat -- similar to taking plasma and not blood. I imagine the person literally looking gaunt and starved as you do this, probably suffering some weakness along the way. Your 1/10 of their mass per hit idea is also a good move toward balance, but still, you're talking about taking 20 pounds in a glancing blow from a thick man. Also, if they wear armour, does it consume that's mass -- if so, does it physically change the armour like moths eating cloth? Finally, easiest concern to resolve, I like the demon of gluttony, but would you mind creating your own demon or pulling one less commonly known? Other myth stories are just fine, but the standard Christian Demon of Gluttony is so popular already I'd prefer we create/use another. That demon will probably have a cult so-- oops, spoilers.

Those are a lot of questions and me pointing to areas that could use some work. Here's my advice: Rosa has some potential with Himlan as a lonely youth being consumed and left to her own. Instead of just having her learn from the demon, I am open to Rosa waking up/being guided to one of the hidden Temples of Myth (and only one) and being brought up by the monks/priests there. We can build the temple together and the occupants, if you like. That'd enrich your backstory some and give Rosa some guidance, perhaps being taught Corrupt Lef there. I'd also consider replacing Loyalty with an adept knowledge of the chakras/energy flow. This would mean instead of scoring 1/10 mass from any hit, Rosa could pinpoint her attacks (seemingly basic punches) to pressure points and areas of the body known to store energy -- taking mass from these areas easiest. It would allow Rosa to be a small person who has the knowledge to be effective. In short, this would make Energy Drain more balanced (you could roll on if you hit a pressure point and how well, if I ask you to), would highlight her Combat skills, and would give Rosa a little bonus perk. Just a suggestion, feel free to PM me if you'd like.
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I'm about to head to bed, so I'll think on your suggestions a bit more and come back to it tomorrow after work. I'll definitely clarify her combat ability and tweak her power, and I'll change the demon around. I fell back on common things because I wanted to get something down on paper more than I wanted to expand the world at that time, so I'll make some edits for sure.

One thing I can clarify right away is that, while I like the idea of sucking a person's mass and making them gaunt, etc, the idea I had in mind was more of a magical idea, where it would almost affect their molecular density or something rather than their actual body mass. Like, making them lighter and me heavier without altering our forms too much. I may change that to more of what you said, for the realism factor, and less of a loose metaphorical idea, but I'll think on it more. I'll also come up with separate terms for her need for human food with nutrients and vitamins separately from her need to consume energy due to her possession.

I may PM you a few things, since I don't want to load up the CS itself with a whole lot of unnecessary information (like building the whole Temple, if that's the route I decide to take) and we'll take it from there. Otherwise, I'll come back with more thoughts and edits when I get the chance. Thanks for your extensive input, I wasn't expecting so much criticism, but there's no doubt it'll make everything better in the end :D

As a last footnote, I realize my picture's anime-styled too, but I wouldn't get my hopes up of me finding another picture if I were you. I have no idea how to get good pictures of any other kind, at least ones that suit my tastes and needs. I'm open to direction, and it's not like I'm completely attached to the design, but I'd sooner be able to write five pages of text than to find a suitable image. It's just beyond my usual realms. If it becomes necessary to change up, then I'm open to direction of course, just like anything else. Of course if text is the better option, that's definitely within my expertise.
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I get what you're saying with the image, and I think I've come up with a way to accurately solve the problem, just make sure to check the image in a little bit, as I've added a bit of a 'Wanted' description to it. Its also funny the character I chose for my portrait. Ladd Russo, from the anime Baccano! is the choice of mine. Of course, you'd have to watch the anime to actually know the man, but he's fairly different from Rhus so far. I also prefer not to use anime pictures... well, mostly. As long as its not too Uguu~ Kawaii~ Senpai~ filled, I'm okay with it.

As for your character, I'd be delighted to see if they knew each other. You can send me a PM, if you want.
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I'd like to know the races available to be played and maybe something about the technology level of the world, but those are perhaps minor quibbles.

Other than that, I'd like to declare my interest in this RPG. It looks awesome.
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Alright, edited my post. To summarize my changes, other than balance changes (which you're free to add dice or something to as the situation demands, but I left that out of the CS) I added the bit about being found at one of Himlan's Temples of Myth (I'll PM you about the details a bit later when I collect my thoughts a little more on that.) I changed the demon around, but decided to keep her power the same as I had originally envisioned in my head, and added the scientific principle I based the power around in hopes that it would clarify things a little further. I also added clarity about the differences between her human food consumption and her demonic energy and mass consumption.

Lastly, I decided to take out the anime picture and add a short text description.

A lot of the nitty-gritty details are things I didn't put in the CS, for brevity's sake, and because they'd be expanded upon more in IC, so if you have any concerns about that, PM me or bring them up and I'll gladly clarify some more.

Edit: SirBeowulf, I wouldn't mind having a connection, but since a lot of Rose's time was spent in seclusion or entirely in the wilderness, I'm not sure how such a connection would have come about, especially with a more city-dweller type character like yours. Keep in mind that my character is a new recruit, so they wouldn't have known each other from the Night's Kiss in the past either. You may have to settle for getting to know each other ICly :p
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I've been PMed by three additional people who are interested and likely to apply. Adding that to Legion (should they), that'll give us 4 expected applicants. I do have a bit of a crew I work with who may or may not check this out, but once we get a few of those 4 I mentioned, we'll get the ball rolling IC.

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I'd like to know the races available to be played and maybe something about the technology level of the world, but those are perhaps minor quibbles.Other than that, I'd like to declare my interest in this RPG. It looks awesome.


Technology is described in the Art of Logos section. If you read a bit about separate regions they should give you a good idea of places apt to have more technology, with Lémuria being the clockwork-powerhouse. The variance here means that while Lémuria is a clockwork city with some self-drawn carts and other useful bits, another region may be no different from a medieval land. Again, do read Art of Logos as it points out some of the history to this and the drawbacks.

I declared earlier in the Interest Check that there would be other species (I assume you meant this, and not other racial-ethnic groups). If you read each section for the Regions at the bottom they'll say who are the major populations or at least the founders of that land. I have not created drawbacks and benefits to each race, and may not, but I think some of the basic Tolkien or Skyrim can be assumed: Elves are attuned to Magic, Dwarves are excellent craftsmen, Orcs are no different from men except for the physical appearance and their more brutal culture, etc. I'll let you know if you cross the bounds in your CS and we can talk it through.

Throw up a CS! I'm working on the OOC thread, sure, but it's nothing mandatory to start the IC. We're just waiting on our interested members to submit.

@Kraxius: I shot you a PM.
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@Alouette, Arin will fit well in this company. That said, I'm going to go over what I understand to be your strengths/weaknesses and generally just pick out anything that seems a wrinkle across otherwise smooth silk.

Arin's strengths include: Her Poison Blood, Sharp Intellect, and her Upper Class Charms. For weaknesses her Immune System is Weak and her Intellect causes her to manipulate all, indiscriminately. Otherwise, she's a woman from a rich background cast out of Lémuria for her disease and reactions to it who has now taken to metal, prosthetic limbs that feed off her poisoned blood -- how or how often, we are not told. We could assume she's picked a bit up off the apothecary she stayed with and she has a touch of experience killing, albeit on accident. This is largely a woman who was prettied and pampered until taking ill. She's tasted blood, and was briefly fascinated, but we don't know much more beyond that reaction. Maybe she likes killing or finds complex schemes the stuff of games, maybe that's what brought her here.

I don't have much for this one except for two suggestions: Upper Class Charms seems a shoddy way of describing your last strength, but ultimately, besides the ability to read and write this what came to mind. That said, perhaps its the use of those charms and skills that highlights her Intellect? In other words, I would accept if those Charms are but a tool of her Sharp Intellect and not a standalone strength. Every character can be assumed to have more than 3 skills, but these are the most honed and apparent in their works. Given an open slot, I'd suggest a skill less commonplace and more combat oriented considering your character is as you said, 100% Non-Physical. Arin is from Lémuria, for example, you could've dared to suggest she has a basic understanding of Clockwork engineering with that mind of hers, using it to maintain her limbs and perhaps a Lémurian wheel-lock pistol. This would highlight the Logos features involved in her prosthetics as well as the bit that sucks energy from her inspired blood. Otherwise, simply being a strong archer (granted this requires a good bit of strength) would give her some means to protect herself. The second suggestion is simpler. With Krax her character is rather young, and therefore also rather new to the Night Kiss. Your character is in her mid to late twenties (I'm hoping later, as too many RPs are full of 20 somethings), has more or less been without a home a while now, but has only joined Night Kiss less than a year ago. Have you considered giving her a few more years experience with them? Seems to me it would fit well enough with her background.
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Krauxis, when I said I wouldn't mind having a character connection, I was talking about what Shon said,

I'll be building a character in the near future, if you'd like, they can be related to your entrance. Feel free to PM me if you fancy that.

Sorry for the mix up, matey.
And, I guess I'll just keep the relation to myself, then, since you already created your character, Shon. Also, since we're getting a good amount of players, can we get an ETA on the IC?
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