@BuddhaI concur.

I say put it in the OOC.

We don't have secrets here.

@Renny How did you like your roast review?

@Buddha It made me cry, all the racist jokes were too much T_T

Nah, it was actually pretty informative. I might need some pointers regarding the jutsus tho, the idea was sudden asf. It was just something I thought would be cool and really battle effective.

All the other comments, I kinda left out on purpose. I didn't see him seeing his relationship as too important. So I didn't add it into his history. And umm, I knew they had shinobi in the village but his outlook was just kinda farmish I guess. Plus I wasn't sure how it all melded. How the Hamajo forces would interact with Ninja system. Hell, looking through his eyes it all felt kinda gray and grim. He was aware of the previous Kumogakure so I just guessed he'd dwell on the really bad things that happened and not the normality that surrounded it.

The whole apathetic/hopeful conflict in the review. Let's see if I can explain it to you squares. Deep down he's hopeful, really deep. He feels like things can change. But his mother's death and father's change afterwards sorta clouded it, causing him to outwardly portray, and kinda believe in his own disinterest in the well-being of others. . . I guess what I'm trying to say is only in the most important of situations does he reveal his true self. The rest of the time, he can be seen as more-or-less apathetic.

Either way, I'll work on improving his personality a little, making it a bit more believable. The rest, I'll attempt to get correct but I'm near-sure I'm going to fuck it up somehow lol.

@Renny I'm willing to let him through just fixing the jutsu, so do that first and look at the rest later, I guess.

@Buddha You spoil me so well lol.

@Renny It's called 'if you wanna play a stereotypical shonen guy, be my guest'

Showing my interest here, I will try to get up a cs tonight.

@Renny. If you want I might have a solution for your jutsu. Note that I am just throwing a idea out, up to you what your do with it.

What you can do have 2 versions of mercury. First of is the gaseous form (normally it would take heat of around 220 degrees Celsius for this, but woot for chakra to convert it to that :D), the vapor itself is highly toxic if breathed in. A small dose could lead to nausea, loss of balance/equilibrium, memory loss, etc. Large doses can effect the nerve system and lead to organ failure. In game terms I would think 1 round of exposure small impairment to fighting ability, second round major impairment, third severe impairment/almost unable to act due to pain and other effects, fourth round is death. Although after the second d and third round you will need medical attention within a reasonable time.

Second is the solid form, mercury has a melting point of -39 degrees Celsius, meaning only really cold temperatures can freeze it. What you could do instead is have it bind with a different metal (zinc, silver and gold are common variants). This would form a amalgam, which isn't toxic. Atleast not for combat purposes, but it could easily be formed and used without dangers for your character. For example you could use earth chakra to add iron and carbon to the mercury compound, which could make a weapon as strong as iron (roughly).

Like Unsaid before it's just a idea. And if you want I could expand my explanation, when I am not at work and on my phone :D.

@mochin I love you already.

@mochinYou're gonna get an app up in such a short time AND toss in a well thought suggestion regarding your fellow RPers application? A-are you an angel? Is this God's way of telling us things are gonna get better?

@Buddha Stereotypical! *gasp*

Maybe I'll think about giving him a overhaul...

Nah I won't lol. He'll become his own character eventually.

@mochin Thank youuu!

@Renny Ey man, he's pretty stereotypical, but then again so is Yamato and so is Akumako, so...

@Buddha I'll finish it up in the morning. I have to work tonight so I'm about to knock myself out real quick.

@Renny nice nice

Backing out of this. Sorry and good luck.

@Krot@Renny@Buddha I don't mind helping :D. Besides if science is involved, I like it even more :P.

But making the cs is taking longer then expected, but I should have it done tomorrow night. I really should go to sleep now.

@mochin Well, the prime reason for RP's dying is always a lack of dedication (either from GM or the players) and since I am quite dedicated as is my GM team, we need more dedicated RP'ers. So showing initiative and being helpful to others is always a +1.

Hey folks. If there is still room I'd be interested in joining this Rp.

@Evil Snowman Yes! There's still room. Just get a CS up.

@Buddha sweet will start one when I get home from work.