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@Evil Snowman Cheers mate.
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So, just for everybody's information, we're looking at getting this show started by the end of this weekend.
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So I finally got the Jutsu worked out . . . I think. Anyway, take a look at it, roast me some more, and when I wake up tomorrow I'll get to work on revamping his personality a bit.

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So I finally got the Jutsu worked out . . . I think. Anyway, take a look at it, roast me some more, and when I wake up tomorrow I'll get to work on revamping his personality a bit.



Not too many complaints on my end on the non-combat stuff. My fellow GMs have covered that well enough. Overall, it's a lot of minor fixes from my perspective.
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I know the RP's gonna air some time this weekend, but I'm still interested to know what variant of the RP I'll be participating in; the Jiyutai-centric one @Buddha said we'll opt for if the character quota isn't filled, or the original concept?

I'm pretty sure I know the answer - I just wanna be extra sure. If it's the former, I'll have to tweak my CS a little bit.
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So it seems my weekend has been much busier than I expected.

Sorry for the wait everyone, might get this CS done by Monday or Tuesday.
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So it seems my weekend has been much busier than I expected.

Sorry for the wait everyone, might get this CS done by Monday or Tuesday.


Well you win this bet, @RyoRyoRyoken.

-Hands him 5 euros-

My friend, what's blocking you with the CS? It's a chuunin CS so it can't be that long.
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I know the RP's gonna air some time this weekend, but I'm still interested to know what variant of the RP I'll be participating in; the Jiyutai-centric one @Buddha said we'll opt for if the character quota isn't filled, or the original concept?

I'm pretty sure I know the answer - I just wanna be extra sure. If it's the former, I'll have to tweak my CS a little bit.


As much as I hate to say it, we're going to be going the Jiyutai-centric route unless we end up with a sudden flood of CSs for both sides. However, that's not to say that there won't be opportunities for players to create Confederates later on down the line if they're feeling froggy.
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<Snipped quote by Krot>
feeling froggy.


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@Krot sadly 'tis true. Not enough people to fill both slots.
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I've corrected the few that was mentioned.
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@Renny Most of it is fine, if issues come up ICly we can always deal with them accordingly case by case. Poison is always a bitch to deal with, yes.

But one thing bothers me: The clone jutsu. Basic kage bunshin is B rank. I've ranked Goo clones as B due to their more passive secondary effect. However your secondary effects allow them to use most jutsu in your arsenal PLUS deliver a rather game changing infection. I'd argue it to be A rank while the Sasori-tail rip-off would be B rank (I mentioned it'd be either high B or low A, so yeah treat it as a B rank technique in terms of strength if you go with this proposition).

I approve with this done.

Vuur will judge personality and all that BS.
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@Savato I'll change those ranks up and now that I've got the jutsu approved, I'll be revamping his personality and history. I guess I slacked off on it. I'll see what I can come up with.
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@Savato I'll change those ranks up and now that I've got the jutsu approved, I'll be revamping his personality and history. I guess I slacked off on it. I'll see what I can come up with.


I'm sure the other two GMs agree, but I appreciate that you've been a good sport about the reviews/revisions.
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@Buddha@RyoRyoRyoken@SavatoDecided to forgo PM stuff because I simplified everything well enough. Most of it was just adding unneeded improtance to the Ryuuga clan.
Here's my character, so have at him and I'll address all the concerns when I can. just something to I feel like I should mention, however, is that I originally planned to include the clan sheet with this, but right now, I just want to get the judging done with, plus I lack the time to write it in time because i'm going fishing and I ahve to meet up with people at 4 in the morning . . . and it's Midnight, so this'll be fun.

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@BuddhaAlso, I have an idea for an Confederate Uchiha Medic(-ish) character in the works, just in case that tips things back in favor.
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@Raijinslayer I am way too tired to judge this right now, but I just wanna point out that motherfucker stole the horns from the Osuushi clan.
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@Buddha@RyoRyoRyoken@SavatoDecided to forgo PM stuff because I simplified everything well enough. Most of it was just adding unneeded improtance to the Ryuuga clan. good
Here's my character, so have at him and I'll address all the concerns when I can. just something to I feel like I should mention, however, is that I originally planned to include the clan sheet with this, but right now, I just want to get the judging done with, plus I lack the time to write it in time because i'm going fishing and I ahve to meet up with people at 4 in the morning . . . and it's Midnight, so this'll be fun.



Most of it is fine. Check with the remarks I made on the jutsu and don't spam the custom bomb tags. Otherwise I'll have to ban some usage, and that'll be boring.

Approved when these are resolved.

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@BuddhaAlso, I have an idea for an Confederate Uchiha Medic(-ish) character in the works, just in case that tips things back in favor.


Feel free to make this character, I'd love to see it, but I don't think it'd make the scales tip into the favor in balance..

This Kekkei Genkai has two affects, one that occurs passively from birth, and another that is activated through the use of the Ryuuga Hiden Jutsu. Passively, this Kekkei Genkai turns all of the Ryuuga into Super-specialists, giving them all extremely strong Affinities with a single element, Lightning in Takashi's case. These affinities even manifest when Chakra is separated into Spiritual and Physical energy, meaning that even non-elemental jutsu become charged with Elemental chakra. It also alters their body so that, depending on their affinity, they have set strengths and weaknesses that they can't overcome. In Takashi's case, he has a strong Lightning affinity, great agility, dexterity, reflexes, and most of all, speed, but he's more fragile than most and doesn't have any true physical striking power. Essentially, he's a designated 'Glass Cannon' from birth. The second affect is that, by focusing their chakra, they can activate the Draconic blood within their veins in order to evoke a number of aspects in their safe, making them stronger in some shape or fashion through their clan's Hiden Jutsu.


So if I understand correctly he's basically rly good at these things but at the same time he's weaker physically. That'd be ok but then you say 'draconic blood' makes them stronger, so that kinda negates that doesn't it?

And you're gonna give him draconic blood anyway so why bother mentioning it as a weakness if he can just ignore it anyway? Seems kinda stupid.
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@Krot@Hexaflexagon Said we'd start today but change of plans since I'm going out to get drunk tonight. I'll start the RP tomorrow. The opening sequence will be an attack on Amegakure by the Jiyutai (since Krot is switching his character) and you'll be fighting NPC's. I'm not a nazi GM so I'll let you come up with your own NPC fights as long as it's kept within reason, and otherwise you can just stick close to Senhime.
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