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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Renny
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@Buddha I gotchu. Do you want to read-over the few changes I've made? or should I just post it into the char thread? The few changes I made weren't too major at all. A few word changes, some redirection in the personality.

A tid bit here and a tad there.
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@Buddha I gotchu. Do you want to read-over the few changes I've made? or should I just post it into the char thread? The few changes I made weren't too major at all. A few word changes, some redirection in the personality.

A tid bit here and a tad there.


Maybe I missed an edit, or I'm just not super observant, but I don't see much of a change from when I did a quick re-read yesterday. Again, there isn't anything that bugs me about it other than the kid's young ass dad, but otherwise I'd say it's safe to put in the character tab. My primary issue was just needing to be more specific about how the poison stuff functioned.
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If anyone missed it, I changed some details regarding Seichiro's backstory in order to suit his Jiyutai affiliation. I don't think it's caused any issues (it's a paragraph at it's best), but still one of the GMs might wanna check it out. The changes have been made in the "Backstory", "Dreams n'Fears" and naturally, "Affiliation".

Also, @Buddha, regarding the opening posts, does that mean we can get to have PC v. NPC boss fights/quasi-boss fights this early on?

Can't wait 'till the RP starts.
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@Renny Put it in the char bin.

@Krot I mean, probably not boss fights. You can fight chunin or some people of similar level but I wouldn't expect our characters to be kicking jonin ass this early.

That said, we're definitely gonna be frequently one upping our characters a bit to show that this will be a more.. 'Jiyutai are the heroes' approach, because we don't have the Hamajo vs. Jiyutai rivarly in PC's. So to balance that and keep interest we'll be mostly playing out hero characters.

Working on the IC with Ryoryoryoryoryoryoryoryoryo now.
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>.> @Savato

How are you sir?
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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Jolenta
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I'm sort of interested in joining this RP, do I just make a CS and post it up or is there no room left?
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@Jolenta Post it, and yeah sure, jump in o;
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I'll get an IC post soon. PC's hinky and I sure as hell am not gonna attempt writing something that ambitious in my shitty phone.
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I am also interested in prepping a CS, standby friends.
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@Deejay Go right ahead friendo.
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@Krot Worry not friend. We're prepared to take it slow.
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I was gonna deny it because blood manipulation sounds like some Avatar shit, but then I read it.

I'm very impressed. This has to be the most creative application of an otherwise standard KG 'idea' (I've seen blood manipulation more often than I have seen my own hands) and I am actually.. jealous of your creative abilities when it comes to creating a KG.


Aww thank you, I am almost blushing :P

Was going to review but I realized you're missing the history.

I only review complete CS'.


Fair enough, I have added my history now. So please take a look.

I will try to get up a IC post today, otherwise it will be tomorrow.
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I don't see nothing wroooooooong, with a little bump and grind

Good Afternoon crew o/
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@mochin It was good.

@Renny How about you stop yer damn 'bein fancy' and start 'bein postin' ya git.
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@Buddha *bows* As you wish you beautiful human being you.

Now that that's done I think I'm going to play some Fallout 4
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@Renny
Namely a short girl with unremarkable features. He thought he had heard others call her, Rin.

Just to point out Maema and Rin are the same height. But yeah compared to the other female giants in the room Rin is pretty short.
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@Hexaflexagon My bad I'll correct that in my post now.
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@Renny kek. 'You're short!' 'Ehhhhh.. buddy, we're exactly the same height.' 'FUCK YOU'
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@mochin Waiting for your post and then we can continue.
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