Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by FujiwaraPhoenix
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@Rune_Alchemist: Alright, but you might have to rethink oni. You'll see why in a moment.

@Sabotage, @General Scales: Alrighty, then.

@VitaVitaAR: Since we took to PMs and discussed this for... A while... Just make the corresponding edits and we should be k.

@Heyitsjiwon: Well, for one, you're missing appearance. But let's put that to the side for now...
We have a mage and an alchemist who will eventually sub into a mage, if what I'm reading is correct. So having another mage added onto that... Aren't you putting a bit too much onto the guy's plate there? Merching skills, swordsmanship, carpentry, and latent magic... Though he isn't a specialist in anything, he's also got the ability to fit a lot of stuff, and that's kinda worrying. Three as a jack-of-all-trades is fine, but... No magic.
That's more or less all the issues I have there.

Oh, right, I should be giving a character as well.


I'll push an OoC up in a few.
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Made the edits.
Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Heyitsjiwon
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@PKMNB0Y He isn't meant to be a dedicated mage. I should have made it clearer, but the basic idea is that he is half demon as his mother was a succubus. So, that's a part of the reason why he has been really successful as a merchant cause this entire life he has had innate magic that makes him more... convincing. But, he doesn't know that so I left it vague when describing it cause he doesn't even know that he can use magic. But, other than that, he doesn't really use magic. Maybe he can branch out later and learn illusion magic? But I haven't planned on it. Also, the only real skill that he know is being a merchant and how to protect himself with a sword. He doesn't really know carpentry. Just basic knowledge, which I think most people would have. That said, I'll make it clearer and edit my post.

Also, yes. Missing an appearance. Trying to find a suiting image, but nothing is coming up so far. If it continues to be unfruitful, then I'll resort to just describing with words.
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The characters that have been posted so far seem interesting. I've been working on my CS on and off, it's actually coming along quicker than I thought it would. I might have to rethink the guy I'm making because almost everyone seems to have some kind of power and I was planning on RPing a human, but we'll see.
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@Heyitsjiwon: Well, the way magic works is a bit complex in this setting, so idk about that...
But the edits seem fine.

@Zapdos: Really? I mean, I'm all for diversity, but it's not as if everyone's going to have their own abilities. Sometimes, vanilla is good.
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I had an idea for a character from an insect like race. Is that okay, or should I stick to the more traditional races?
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@Decker126: As you please.

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