@Lady AmaltheaI'll wait until Satilla replied to Calanon, but just after that he'll be suggesting to play his Ocarina with Sana^^

@POOHEAD189 Then please do what I asked in the announcement - Tag said person so they know you are holding post for them.

@Lady Amalthea*salutes*

@rivaanI'll post just after you^^.

I will have a post ready and done in a few hours

Hi guys new to this how do I apply? Forgive me if this is completely in the wrong place?!

@solidsneek You're fine. ^_^ Welcome to the forum. ^_^ Check out the first OOC post here, and grab the CS. Once you fill it out, post it here in the OOC for review. It is really as simple as that. (Prewarning, my Cs's are a bit indepth but don't let that dissuade you. Great group of Rpers here and a fun RP)

[hider=Orac]



Name:(Orac Hundorn)
Aliases:(Hundorn)
Age: 25
Race: Moon Elve
Alignment: Neutral
Place of Origin: Isolated city of Evereska
Gender: Male
Class: Fighter

Though we will not be rolling dice for feats, this will give a base line to run off of for your character. Max for any stat is 20, average is 10. You have 75 stat point to assign between the six stats.

Strength: 15
Dexterity: 15
Constitution: 10
Intelligence: 10
Wisdom: 10
Charisma: 15


Height: 5'11
Weight: 160LB
Build: Average, Non toned
Eyes: Green
Hair: Brown to white
Skin Tone: Light
Racial Abilities: N/A
Tattoos/Scars/Piercings: Tattoo left hand, behind ear
Day To Day Attire: Hooded Leather coat, canvas trousers black, leather shoes (tattered)
Strengths: Survival (LIVING OFF RESOURCES), Arrow skill (SHOOTING,SNIPER), Ability to blend in to my surroundings.
Weaknesses: Cockiness, Business mind, Strength.

Trait * Trait * Trait * Trait

Sexuality: Male
Relationship Status: Widowed

Personality: I on the front appear cocky, bold, hasty and rash, but that just covers up the pain of losing my loved one and hides sadness. I am a lover of people and meeting new allies and foes whilst often cracking jokes and small talk to put off any particular battle. Aware that the world is full of people trying to make money with lies, deceit and pain. Orac shows no fear but deep down knows how much trouble he gets in to on a regular basis. Orac does not crumble when faced with difficult decision or tasks he will try and talk his way out of the situation or if not pull out his bow.

Orac lost his wife to a group of bandits so deep down there is a vile anger ready to explode at any minute, as you can imagine love does no longer interest him and would never break in to another relationship for as long as he may live. Unless there is a way to bring back his first and only love.

Habits: Drinking cider, talking too much.
Hobbies: Board games.
Fears: Dreaming of the day his wife was killed, Losing everything Money, weapons and possesions.
Likes: Money, weapons, friends, board games, clothing, hiding
Dislikes: Being seen (when fighting), politics, Rules, conformity, magic, bandits

• Archery: Able to fire an arrow through the eye of a needle.
• Pace: Able to run quickly to avoid enemies and keep up with allies and groups.
• Hiding: Able to blend in to surroundings when fighting or evesdropping to gain information and fight.
• Climbing: Able to scale buildings and smaller rocks to gain a height advantage.
• Jumping: Able to jump and traverse over walls and fences to gain a pace advantage and reach place some can't.
• Swimming: Able to swim in the harshest waters.
• Hunting: Able to hunt most animals.
• slight of hand: Being able to pocket almost anything from anyone.
• Eavesdropping: Able to hear whispers from a decent distance.

N/A



[*] Purse: To gather money, and small items.
[*] Belt: To hold purse and cloth etc.
[*] Hooded jacket: Contains pockets for extra space.
[*] Coins: Will gather more a long the way.
[*] Silver ring: A simple engraved ring with wife's name on it.

Weapons:

• Bow: Wooden handle, battle damaged.
• Arrows: Set of Arrows (obtain them from deceased)
• Holder: To holster arrows.
• Pocket knife: Just in case of close quarter combat.

Armor:
N/A

Animals:

N/A

Pack Contents: What do you carry in you pack when traveling

• Bread: Small snack a long the way.
• String: Just in case I need to tie a wound etc.
• Toolkit: In case I need to tinker.
• Bedroll: When I find a tavern or place to sleep.
• Flint & steel: To create a fire when wet and cold.
• Waterproof sheet: To cover myself when the weather turns nasty.
• Flute: To play a tune when bored.
• Dice: Available for any wagers I see fit.
• Fur coat: When the winter comes to be fully prepared.
• Water skin: To hold my water.
• First Aid kit: To repair me of any ailments.
• Map: To find my way of round.
• Water skin: To hold my water.
• Whetstone: To sharpen my tools and blade.
• Rations: 4 weeks worth of food and water (will pick more on the way).
• Needle and thread: To sow material or even stitch myself up.
• Bottles of cider: X4 bottles of cider.

Magical Items:

N/A

Creation Materials: Anything used to brew potions or for alchemy

N/A


Parents: Abandoned as a child left in the village bought up by village folk.
Siblings: None
Childhood: Abandoned as a child left in the middle of our village square by a well. Only to be found by the leader of our group.
Adulthood: Orac has grew up in to a feisty yet damaged character with no real close friends and not a lot to live for. Sets out on his way to make as much money, food, water and cause as much trouble as possible with the greater cause of helping people along the way.
Special Moments: Talking my way out of a group fight whilst also pocketing all the cash they had whilst not shooting an arrow.
Current Events: Revenge if you like, On a quest to try and locate the bandits that killed my wife.

⚜ High Ranking * ☯ Neutral * ☮ Friends * ♥ Crush * ⚤ Significant Other * ☠ Enemy

• ☠ Enemy: Bandit leader Joreon. Killed my wife and now hunting him down for revenge whilst questing along the way.

Character Quote: "Leave it to me"
Aura Color: Light Blue.
Scent: Nature, Leather
Anything Else: N/A

@solidsneek Yes, that would be the one. I suggest filling out in a pm to yourself or a writing program such as note pad or word on your computer. You are new, so it's no worries but most Gm's do not want to see a CS in the OOC until it is filled out or at least has something done to it.

One more week... :)

@Lady Amalthea Hi and thank you again!

I have filled it out on that post as much as I think possible is that ok?

@solidsneek I can fix the coding for you, but each space does have to be filled in to be considered. Like the traits listed out, history and such. Leaving out armors or spells is done, that is unique to each character and many don't need, use, or want them. Take a look at some of the other cs's to get an idea. You can take all the time you wish to finish the cs. There is no rush, just know it has to be on the cs to have it available. So things like materials to start a fire, a water skin, and so forth might be something you want to add to the list of possessions.

@The Grey Dust One more week of what?

Bah, I'm so sorry, overslept this morning, I will have something up after work.

@Lady Amalthea

Before I return to my comfy small apartment home back in the States (of Confusion?) :)
Where the A.C. unit isn't loud, and I'll be able to check up on my cacti :3

@Lady Amalthea I have updated this the only thing I am struggling with is the picture. Would this be okay?

Blarg! I can't be leave it feel asleep too! IMA SORRY?

@solidsneek Not having a picture is fine. The cs still needs a lot of work though, it's missing things that are required. My cogm @Sigil will be taking over to help you through the process.

@solidsneek

Hi! few things I'd like to discuss, concerning your CS.

Let's "last in, first out" the beginning of this. The picture - it's always been the hardest part for me to come up with, aside from character name. But maybe I misinterpreted your last post. Did you have one chosen that you weren't overly happy with, or were you asking to completely avoid choosing one?

Now, as for your CS: It is incomplete. Rules in the OOC clearly state that no partial CSs it to be put into the OOC. It gets confusing. Likewise, CSs should be tucked away in a hider. If you're unfamiliar with the coding, we can help. A good start would be to familiarize yourself with the Cheatsheet at the bottom of the page. (hit the Toggle button, it will explain much).

Personal difficulties I have with your character sheet:

Your skills do not seem to reflect the entirety of what you want your character to do. I would take the time to really look at your character's role in a group, or tactics while alone when addressing his skills. Further, you cannot use any other part of the CS to sneak in additional skills (i.e. the "Strengths" section toward the top of the CS lists him with nonspecific Survival, something that does not also show up in his "Skills" section.)

You are switching between the first and third person, a lot. Stick to the third person, and past tense, when dealing with your character. Mixed perspective and tense really throws things off.

Color Coding - It is required that you pick a text color, personalized to your character. This color cannot be the same as (or too similar to) anyone else's character. It is used in your headers in the IC, and is the color of his dialogue.

You also have not made the changes that Lady A requested, including filling out the entirety of the CS. You've got a few sections that are sparse, notably History, and a couple that are completely blank, like Psychological Traits.

Another note - You have him listed as a Fighter, but the abilities you have listed put him more in the area of Ranger or Rogue.

Again, if you're unsure where to start with this, drop me a PM. I can more effectively communicate with you, without cluttering up the OOC. In any case, please throw your CS in a hider. If you are unaware as to how to do that, click the Toggle button at the bottom right of the page, and scroll down to where it says "Hiders".

Best of luck here in roleplayerguild.com; it gets easier with practice.

Sorry it took me spooling to get that up, and it's back to work I go :)

I will be posting later today do Krya with what is going on to unfold the story some more. And probably Sana as well just for grins and giggles.

@Sigil @Dragoknighte @rivaan @POOHEAD189 @Lucius Cypher @IcePezz @The Grey Dust

Okay peeps, remember the counter was reset 4 days ago. Those that have not posted since the reset are now on day 4 of 5 on you counter.