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Or just got close enough to touch him. That'd suck pretty hard.
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Or just got close enough to touch him. That'd suck pretty hard.


right, the real trick would be getting close without being turned into human slurry.
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Unrelated to that: Necro should just keep throwing the bodies at Arsenal and mostly ignore Zach. The zombie minions he's got right now could soak enough bullets to keep Necro alive and it isn't like Zach is a real threat to him. All he has to do is sidestep the attack Zach is doing right now and let the dumb kid full-force a crowbar against the concrete. It'd be pretty easy to get away at that point with Zach hurting himself and Arsenal shooting dead people instead of Necro. He'd just be down a few zombies and take a blow to his dignity.
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@j8cob Damn kid, you like bringing in the Bratva to all sorts of things, don't ya? Well as things stand, I believe we can approve of Cassidy Hendricks. If she were to ever go off the deep end though, hoo boy the massive collateral damage she could cause. She may or may not become a person of interest for a certain murder happy band of assholes. A group that enjoys slaughter? Maybe about nine of them, perhaps?

Anyway, Cassidy is approved, just remove the Shaker category from her. She doesn't affect the environment at all, just people's perception of the environment.
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Wow, that is almost exactly word for word. Man, I thought I was being original by juicing up the standard invisibility, but now that's kind of demoralizing.
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I only glanced through it, but 2 things. 1) That's pure stranger, no significant master component. 2) A character in the book has the exact same power. Her name in Imp.

Edit: Her wiki entry: worm.wikia.com/wiki/Aisha%20Laborn
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Not quite, as I see it he doesn't make people forget him. Perhaps just my interpretation.
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Hence me saying I only glanced through it. That said, they're still functionally the same thing.

Anyway, I'll give it a more thorough read through soon as I have the opportunity.
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@The Wild West After giving it a full read through, I'm prepared to approve this character. Looks good. It'll be hilarious if he and Sabotage ever team up. Nobody's valuables will be safe! Hahahahaha. I do want to address one thing before you slap him over on the approved tab though. Video and audio recordings. If he's got his power active and he's being recorded, how will these recordings interact with the people watching/listening to them? You distinctly state that it messes with a person's ability to perceive him via the brain, which is awesome, but if he's recorded will the power work through the recording and leave a blank spot where he should be, or is that a way around his power?
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Huh, now that is something I haven't thought of during the creation. Should have really thought of that while making a thief character, but I think I have an idea now. I would say that his power could be recorded through those means, allowing another limitation to his power in a present state. Though, if a person was actively recording him, like someone holding a video camera to his face, I would think that the person wouldn't be able to see him through their eyes or the camera screen, but once a good distance away the effects would wear off and they would notice him in the recording.
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Sounds great! Slap him on over and I'll get him added to the roster!
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Still somewhat in a prototype phase. Please be gentle.

Edit: Semi-Identical and added Derangement.
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@Banana Ok, I've read the sheet in full, and my primary issue is that it's a little sparse (pun definitely intended), but I think that just comes with the territory of this being a rough draft. Basically I'd like most everything to be expanded on and in greater detail. The fact that this is essentially two characters in one means that detail and length are especially important as you'll need to fully detail both the twins. The places that are most lacking in more detail I'd say are appearance and skills. The two individuals need to have a fully fleshed out skill base for each one, after all. As of now they are both only good at a single thing (and "police officer" isn't a skill either, it's a profession which involves a myriad of different skill sets, so that in particular needs far more detail).

But like I said, all this is no doubt just a symptom of being a prototype rough draft. I look forward to seeing the final copy, as it is definitely an interesting idea.
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Sorry for the delay on my end. ill be trying to get something up tomorrow.
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Still slightly prototyped. If it's accepted how it is I'll move it to CS, but I personally don't think it's complete.

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- Skills are now more diverse.
- Information about the telepathic bonds is now more prevalent.
- A few minor edits.

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@solokolos, the bone prison wouldnt be super durable. enough to slow you down for a minute but it wouldnt actually trap you if you where determined to get out.
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Sirens could be heard approaching fast, from every direction. Cops no doubt were about to show up, but more than that those still around could hear the unique sirens of the PRT mixed in with the hulabaloo. Anybody with an arrest order or considered a danger had best flee, fast...


Already running for my life lol!
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If Sofia's room has a computer she's probably going to learn how to use it and look up some other stuff how guns work, other than that I'll probably either have her take a nap or wander around the city running into other people XD
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