That turned out a bit bigger than I though, but intros are always the hardest. I really hope I did it in a way that properly portrayed the twins as they are supposed to be. Two and at the same time one.

If there's any confusion regarding them, do tell me. I have some experience with twins (it's one of my favorite tropes) but it can get get confusing to others if not done well. Please, tell me if you need me to make it more clear.

Either way, I'm going to sleep now.

See ya!

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Perhaps give each sister a different colour when they're speaking so we know which one is speaking? :D

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Well, I can color the text, yes. But I always think that it's more of a matter of writing skill than visual effects that helps make characters distinct.

At least for me, I just put color on character speech because I find it pretty, nothing else

"Hah! Wow, that was hella gay, Onee-Sama! Where'd ya learn that? Strawberry Panic?"

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I wasn't expecting this

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You did write it extremely well, I've got to applaud you on that, 'cause frankly I'm jealous ha. I did notice a couple of typos, though, but that's just me being nitpicky haha.

I generally use colour to make it easy to skim-read what's going on, and to make it pretty.

I think @chiru got burned.

isn't Maiko the only one in the air soft club
what a loner

isn't Maiko the only one in the air soft club
what a loner