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@NarcissisticPotato Ah gomen homen! ^///^ Sure thing!
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@JustYui There, I made you look like a dark Chino.



Dark hair, dark spider.

Except, your spider isn't alive and it doesn't talk... does it? :P
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That turned out a bit bigger than I though, but intros are always the hardest. I really hope I did it in a way that properly portrayed the twins as they are supposed to be. Two and at the same time one.

If there's any confusion regarding them, do tell me. I have some experience with twins (it's one of my favorite tropes) but it can get get confusing to others if not done well. Please, tell me if you need me to make it more clear.

Either way, I'm going to sleep now.

See ya!
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That turned out a bit bigger than I though, but intros are always the hardest. I really hope I did it in a way that properly portrayed the twins as they are supposed to be. Two and at the same time one.

If there's any confusion regarding them, do tell me. I have some experience with twins (it's one of my favorite tropes) but it can get get confusing to others if not done well. Please, tell me if you need me to make it more clear.

Either way, I'm going to sleep now.

See ya!


Perhaps give each sister a different colour when they're speaking so we know which one is speaking? :D
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Perhaps give each sister a different colour when they're speaking so we know which one is speaking? :D


Well, I can color the text, yes. But I always think that it's more of a matter of writing skill than visual effects that helps make characters distinct.

At least for me, I just put color on character speech because I find it pretty, nothing else
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Well, I can color the text, yes. But I always think that it's more of a matter of writing skill than visual effects that helps make characters distinct.

At least for me, I just put color on character speech because I find it pretty, nothing else


You did write it extremely well, I've got to applaud you on that, 'cause frankly I'm jealous ha. I did notice a couple of typos, though, but that's just me being nitpicky haha.

I generally use colour to make it easy to skim-read what's going on, and to make it pretty.
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Alright guys. Here's my REAL character.


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Ooooh, so Faye gets the honor of the twins right off the bat? ;)

My little Frenchie got lucky... twice. Bahahaha
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I honestly need to make edits before posting..

Oh whale
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"Hah! Wow, that was hella gay, Onee-Sama! Where'd ya learn that? Strawberry Panic?"

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I think @chiru got burned.
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@LowKey123 You have yet to see how savage Tohru can get! >:D
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You did write it extremely well, I've got to applaud you on that, 'cause frankly I'm jealous ha. I did notice a couple of typos, though, but that's just me being nitpicky haha.

I generally use colour to make it easy to skim-read what's going on, and to make it pretty.


Thanks. The odd typos escape me sometimes. Nevertheless it's good to know that my writing is on a decent level.
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I think @chiru got burned.


rip in pieces sayuri
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isn't Maiko the only one in the air soft club
what a loner
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isn't Maiko the only one in the air soft club
what a loner

If we're allowed more than one character a pop, I could fix that. @Rusalka what's your verdict, bossman?
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isn't Maiko the only one in the air soft club
what a loner


Being forever alone is not that bad, at least you get a lot of space for yourself.
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Mm, She's actually in the kenjutsu club. Since no ones there, she decides training by herself. Either way, she already is good in history

she prefers to bother people during a practice anyway
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Tohru's in airsoft club too, just so she can hurt people. XD

But sure, you got the go ahead!
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@Rusalka if that's the case I'm editing Miako's club then
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