@Liriia In my defence, I only see three GM tags at the top. XP Haha

@Shadow Daedalus Well, if you had read the rules and the first post of the OOC you may have noticed my name! But don't worry, I don't hold grudges 😇 LMAO jkjk

@StitchesMy Char is a regular artist at the Gallery, but he's not very social.

I don't usually sort out relationships with people who haven't been accepted, but looking at the personality it looks like Abigail would probably ignore James. She doesn't have a lot of patience for people who aren't looking to be friends with her, because she can be a bit of a handful. Either way, they'd be acquaintance-friends at best.

@Liriia Someone's salty. _{^{But there, are you happy? I tagged you first.}}

this shouldn't have taken me this long but here it is

@Liriia@McHaggis@Undine@Roosan

Got some apps to discuss...

@Chicogal Hey, Chicogal! There are just a few things you need to fix before we can accept Rain! First, please keep in mind that Verona is literally in the middle of nowhere; it's a small town with a convenient Community College, not a University. Changing that and Primary School to Elementary (ages 5-10) or Middle (ages 11-13) School will be needed because Verona, Washington is in the United States, after all. Next, we just require you add a bit more to her personality section-- it's a bit too small for our liking and we believe you could really add more life to this character with a bit more details thrown in.

Finally! We just need you to putt a bit more work into the Weakness section of her powers. Personally, the GMs and I thought it would be better to take out her ability to conjure water and instead require her to be near water in order to take control of it. Doing this will result in a balanced and interesting weakness for her, which would be great! Also, it could replace the weakness of her being weak to fire as usually water beats fire in most cases.

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@Shadow Daedalus Shadow! How's it hanging? James is looking pretty decent, but we just need to you tweak a feeew things before we can accept him into our lovely cast. Number one: we feel as though you can add more to his looks and personality sections. Adding a bit more about his actual appearance, like the shape of his eyes or his hair color or something, will really help beef up his looks section a bit. Also, we would love to know more about James than just his anti-social tendencies.

And number two: Powers! We just need you to limit a few things to make his abilities more balanced. His ability to negate others would be better touch-based at first, and perhaps while his character grows his power can grow into more ranged-based skills. With this, in the beginning, he will only be able to negate powers while grabbing on to someone. As for mental protection from telepaths, we say take that out. It does not make sense with his negation abilities until he is able to negate powers through range. Finally, he should be able to be hurt by ascendant powers, merely because an ascendant's abilities become physical once let loose. A fireball does not equal someone's ability to manipulate fire-- it 's still gonna hit him not matter what. Anyway, make those few fixes and James should be good! Thank you!

Next two will be done soon!

@McHaggis@Undine@Roosan@Liriia Heres my character sorry for the lateness of my character.

I got Cal's intro up :) Gonna wait a little before Charlie's goes up :)

I'll have a post up either tonight or tomorrow!

Got some apps to discuss...

@Chicogal Hey, Chicogal! There are just a few things you need to fix before we can accept Rain! First, please keep in mind that Verona is literally in the middle of nowhere; it's a small town with a convenient Community College, not a University. Changing that and Primary School to Elementary (ages 5-10) or Middle (ages 11-13) School will be needed because Verona, Washington is in the United States, after all. Next, we just require you add a bit more to her personality section-- it's a bit too small for our liking and we believe you could really add more life to this character with a bit more details thrown in.

Finally! We just need you to putt a bit more work into the Weakness section of her powers. Personally, the GMs and I thought it would be better to take out her ability to conjure water and instead require her to be near water in order to take control of it. Doing this will result in a balanced and interesting weakness for her, which would be great! Also, it could replace the weakness of her being weak to fire as usually water beats fire in most cases.

My thought in conjuring water wasn't so much creating it as drawing it up from the soil or the air, and I thought it'd make for a development in her powers later on. But if that's not okay, I'll change it to what you've suggested :P

Done everything else!

EDIT: I was also thinking about her not having discovered her powers yet. Would that be alright?

I'll try to get my post up tomorrow, if not, I'll definitely have one up by Friday. Excited to start!

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Orrrrrr not, these things can always be done IC too

@McHaggis I kind of had a feeling about that, as far as she has done with 'experimenting' would have been cutting herself (not in the emo way) she wouldn't want to experiment that far with it lol but I can edit that bit out if you'd like.

@McHaggis Any ideas on what I can add to my personality section? It's easier to think about it if I have specific questions to answer...

@McHaggis Was haggling with the power. I'll completely change it, no problem!

I sort of meant with substitue gym teacher that if the teacher position opened up, he could quit as forest ranger and then pick up the gym teacher role. Just a little something-something but right now he's Forest Ranger and only that. I'll try to clear that up.

@McHaggis Should I move her over to the character tab or should I wait word from the other lovely GMs? :)

Edited - let me know :P @McHaggis @Roosan @Liriia @Undine