Damn. Writing is pretty tough. What can I do to improve?
Damn. Writing is pretty tough. What can I do to improve?
It is moving pretty rapid-fire, right?
Couldn't you arrive by some character that's on their own rather than entering with something that basically takes over the entire scene? >_>;
@Raineh Daze@Lmpkio
When the battle is over make sure to roll up a newspaper and (lightly)hit gojira-san with it.
A quick spritz from a spray bottle is fine too.
Just make sure you do it immediatly after this so she relaizes what she did was wrong, if you wait too long she won't assosciate her actions with the punishment.