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@EurmalEye
No worries. There's no rush here as long as nobody is waiting for you.

You can put a few more spaces between first and last name of the character. Put 'Research' instead of 'Research Division (Medical Specialization)'. Your character's chosen interests will become apparent in the story.

Here's the big one, though: the augmented eyes due to Stigma. Spirits possess humans to stay away from harm and weakness. If a person has been infected once, that person will never possess spirits. This is why a few, select people get such a huge influx of them. However, there are two ways we can sell this to the people in charge in my head! 1. The augmented eyes were a personal choice rather than due to Stigma. 2. Jomen got infected through the eyes era, but he or someone else was fast enough to gauge his eyes out and prevent further infection. The details for the rest would have to be up to you, through flashbacks.
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Updated the Combat section with revised and new Added Effects: roleplayerguild.com/posts/4378640
Added a few non-player characters: roleplayerguild.com/posts/4378645 (Design inspired by lovely @Rockette)
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@EurmalEye@71452K@Rizza Below is what I put in my Kinship section, let me know if you want me to change anything or if you want to expand on anything further. Once character sheets are approved and in the character sheet section, I'll link to them directly. Feel free to copy paste and reuse, or put your own characters opinion/twist on it.


@Prisk I changed my ideology section some. It is below in the hider. Lemme know what you think.


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@Mr Rage For your kinship post I think you got it just about down - lemme write a quick corresponding one just to ensure we are on the same page

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A J A X: While training at school, Jomen was approached with a large man from with warfare who seemed to have long, rich history of getting injured. This was, of course, Ajax. To Jomen, he seems a useful training partner as the large variety of injuries gave Jomen plenty of live practice to hone his talents to where they are now. In addition, without Ajax's warfare based insight, Jomen would have had a far diminished capacity to defend himself. Jomen respects his ability and skill on the battlefield, but thinks of Ajax as too unprofessional to reach his full potential in the warfare division. Out of respect and gratitude (though Jomen is unlikely to admit it), Jomen attempts to sway Ajax to a more professional attitude in order ensure that the future soldier has a better career later. Jomen, also constantly reminds Ajax that his name is not "Green Eyes", in the most professional way possible. He has also yet to laugh at any of Ajax's jokes.
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I've been really swamped lately but I'm going to work on my character soon!
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So, I thought I'd go through Celise's kinship here, briefly, and make some suggestions based on posted character sheets. If I don't see any clear connection, I'll just leave it at "known by name". As in, she knows your character's name and what your character looks like, but nothing beyond that, as it is with all Guardians at the academy.

@Mr Rage
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I figure that Ajax is the kind of guy that would spend a considerable amount of time at the academy gym or obstacle courses. Celise would most likely frequent such places, but not as often perhaps. Maybe she has received some advice on workouts and diets, and spotting by Ajax during heavy lifts? It would be an isolated acquaintance, though. Thoughts?

@71452K
No ideas sprung to mind with Montero, so I'll leave it as known by name for now! If you have any other suggestion, do tell!

@deadpixel101
I see a bit of antonyms in Roland and Celise. Roland seems to be focused on the collective and greater good, while Celise is the direct opposite. Perhaps they've clashed in previous debates during lectures? They're in different divisions, so they wouldn't have seminars together. Or, this could be something to expand upon in the story.

@WanderingSpirit
I hope you're still with us! So, Celise and Robert are in the same division, which means that they're bound to know each other more than just by name alone. Maybe they've done some group projects together and such?

@Rizza
I'm thinking Celise and Duke will be mostly by name. She'll definitely know who he is because of the distinct physical appearance. If you have any other suggestions, fire away!

@EurmalEye
We spoke earlier about this! All settled.

@Panko
No worries! We're in no rush here.

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@EurmalEye sounds perfect to me!

@Prisk Seems likely. I'll throw a thing in my profile about it. Did you take a look at the other adjustments I made to my sheet?
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I'm good with that, it's unlikely they will know each other too well and my character's not a medic, he knows a little anatomy and chemistry that could help medically ...but that's just about it. :/. @Mr Rage

I'm not the kind to mind playing a character that isn't well known or very popular, I am cool with the idea of having nothing to do with your character until they are put on a mission together. I mean,
at most I just have nothing meaningful to post meanwhile! :D. @Prisk

My internet got interupted for the past few days, server is complete nonsense. I don't think I have a starbucks nearby either to steal internet from. But I'm back!

I think it's best to leave my character's relationship post sparse, then build impressions off on the first time he meets anyone. It gives me a chance to write. This is the reason why I've been avoiding reading other's profiles (other than the very basic things like index, division and pressence) so far, I don't want it influencing. I also think no one really wants to relate to him OOC so far, so that works out.

There's always that one quiet guy at school, yeah?

Time to get to work on those changes (intend to change his strife to something else), right?
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THERE DONE!



BTW, will they be put on field work based on their own choosing or what the school roster thinks is best? Granted, if missions are early plot situations - if not, I shall whip out my solo fiddle and play the night away. ...that came out wrong
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@71452K Given that we are both in the research division, it is entirely possible our characters know each other. Would you like to establish a more detailed kinship or leave it at they have seen each other once or twice?
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I have maybe some ideas, but honestly, would your rather sociable character have a good relationship with someone like Montero Creepy McJudgerson? I myself wouldn't. :S.

...jokes aside, I'd like to hear your ideas. :).

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@71452K Lol you massively overestimate my characters sociability. The other kinships my character has are from others approaching him or offering him a fantastic deal. Honestly with the personality I have in mind your personality would not really matter to him so long as you were competent. Plus he would respect the way you interact with your spirits.

But if you want to develop it later in game that's cool too just lemme know or you can PM to discuss in further detail.
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@Mr Rage
I did! I think I gave it a thumbs up. You can put your sheet in the character tab and work from there instead.

@71452K
Heh, you will be able to choose missions in the beginning. After that, the story will become increasingly linear. You can also put your sheet in the character tab and continue to work from there!

@EurmalEye
You too! Sheet into character tab. It will be easier to find and edit things from there.
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I opt to develope it, but our characters should meet soon so we can get to work on it. @EurmalEye

:)! Cheers! Btw, I can imagine someone like Celise in the school, such an adventurous spirit. @Prisk
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@Prisk Fixed to just Warfare and reworked his Strife. Sorry it took a while to get back, been helping a friend help his people move states and i haven't been able to focus. I'm back now though. As for Celise and Duke, she may have had a few encounters with him, if she's hung around Ajax. More so, if it involves training. Duke is the type that believes there is always something that could be improved. Thus, he is constantly training. Ajax is a valuable training partner because they can spar going all out. He is the only one who is suitable to be Duke's rival! Lol



As for the other guardians, I am open to ideas on how they know each other.
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Cool, we can work with that. What if Celise has timed Duke and Ajax's sparring session, maybe even broken things up when it has gone too far?

Very cool Strife section, by the way. Is that Doomfist from Overwatch? You can put your sheet into the character tab at your leisure.
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Time to make myself known!
I've gleaned and glanced over the characters thus far, nothing concrete in terms of some kinship, but I figure once I read in earnest, something will come about. Regardless, I know some naturally form within writing.
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@Rockette Just to make sure you cleared your character with Prisk?
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Oh absolutely. The first thing I noticed after comparing our characters was the polarity. I'd assume whenever/if ever they've spoken they might not get along the best lol They're driven by opposite ideals. I'm interested to see how they interact.
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@EurmalEye - Of course! I concluded such within a PM, I don't usually discuss concepts in 'public' for the sake of the reveal, unless requested otherwise.
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