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Have I ever mentioned how much I enjoy Margrave updates?


Maybe, but either way, I'm glad I could make it enjoyable!
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@Spiffy@yoshua171@AngelofOctober@Gardevoiran@TheRedWatcher@Keksalot

Hai! GM call out here. It's been 21 days since the last update, by myself, in that entire situation. The MM are a main team, which does make this a "main encounter", and we've given it a little extra given the fact Pro and I were switching back off on who got to update them.

If y'all could begin progression again, it would be appreciated. Kthnxbai <3
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I do believe we are waiting on Bomberman in this event. I would post but it wouldn't make sense in the world.
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@Keksalot After some investigation and communication with everyone involved in the Minutemen/explosion event going on right now, it's been determined that at this point everyone is currently waiting on you to post with Master Blaster. Please note that everyone has been waiting for multiple weeks at this point. As you have been active in the Discord chat, I can only assume that you have had time to post. Ergo, you have just under 3 days (until Monday midday) to get that situation moving, or this, coupled with your various Discord strikes, means you are permanently kicked from the game.
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Welp, the time has come and gone. @keksalot, due to failure to post on time after being given a deadline, holding up other players for weeks at a time, constantly needing reprimanding in the Discord chat, and inconsolable creative differences, you are hearby removed from Capes of Denver effective immediately, and blacklisted from every RP of mine from here on out.
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After having read through the entirety of Worm last week, I was delighted to find a roleplay on the subject. Made myself a character below, hope he's okay.

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@thewizardguy Firstly I want to thank you for your interest in my game. I'm always happy to have new players join the fold. :) That said, there are a number of issues that need to be addressed on this character before it's ready to be approved.

First is the appearance section, which is, well, completely missing. I'm not sure why there is no appearance but it is absolutely mandatory. I was considering not even reading the rest of the CS until you finished it, that's how much emphasis I place on being able to properly describe how your character looks.

Second is your history, in particular the affiliation with the Community. It's clear you haven't read through the IC (not that I expect you to, considering its length) but Patriarch's power has been discovered in character (though it hasn't spread to public knowledge just yet). Suffice it to say that if he were part of the Community at any point that's it for him. He's in for good because he no longer has a choice in the matter.

Last but definitely least, since it appears to be grammar and minor classification discrepancy, is his power. He has no breaker state. A "breaker" is a change in his physical state that he "switches" on and off that completely breaks how his body reacts to physics. Absorbing and integrating matter to his cells doesn't exactly fit that description because it's well within scientific understanding to integrate foreign material into cells. If he physically transformed into the material he absorbed then that's a whole other story (how can a person be made of iron and function as a living person? Etc.). However since he has to touch something to absorb it, that does classify him as a striker. And finally you will want to proofread what you have written. There's a line that says "nonliving objects cannot be absorbed," which would mean he only absorbs the living, but that feels to be a typo.

Fix these problems and I'll look him over again. I know the history will need a pretty major overhaul because of that one crucial detail.
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I was certain that I'd put stuff in the appearance section before I posted. Not sure how I managed to overlook that. Oh well.

I'll try and rework his history, knowing that. Might take a day or so, cuz I'll have to rethink the character a bit.

I considered it a 'breaker' power because it's more similar to spatial warping than producing a material. But I suppose you're correct, I'll update that while I'm at it.

That is indeed a type, I meant that it can't absorb living things. Prevent him from becoming made of hamsters or something.
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... Whelp. If Sheila ever ends up needing to distract Margrave for some reason, remind me to not have her taunt him. That attack came out of nowhere and caught me wide-eyed. Hah.
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So, like it always happens. No none informs that the net bill isn't paid. I am supposedly expected to have it back sometime this week, but felt like informing everybody. So they don't think I went dark on purpose.
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Le official poke in regards to "React to BoomBooms!"

Aka, Pro would like updates for the MM to occur sooner than later at this stage.

I believe that means we also need to see movement from @TheRedWatcher and (maybe?) @AngelofOctober with them either retreating with Swarm or what have you.
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I'm still new to this, so I'll just post my character here...

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I'm still new to this, so I'll just post my character here...



Sorry it took so long to get around to this, things have been hectic. That said, great thanks to my appointed co-GMs @Old Amsterdam and especially @Eklispe for staying on things and working with you over Discord. So here's the critiquing of the alpha and omega of this game, the final word.

Firstly, I'd highly suggest adding some sort of mask or facial covering to his costume. Changing eye color and replacing hair with leaves is only going to go so far for identity concealment. Clark Kenting is definitely not gonna cut it in this world, especially when there's an entire classification of powers for pulling secret information out of your ass.

Secondly, I need a more detailed explanation of how the mental connection to plants works. You describe it as giving him heightened awareness and tracking by moving his mind through plants, but how does this sensory awareness actually manifest? Obviously plants can't see and share little to no senses with animals, so how does it actually function? Does it create a new sense of sight/hearing etc. in the plant he's observing through? Or does he experience the surroundings in a completely different way? This portion of the powers definitely needs more detail.

But apart from these observations things are looking good. History is well written, concept is solid, just a little more refining and he's good. Let me know when you're all set and I'll look at those bits again.
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Given you've covered those points Pro brought up, I'm going to go ahead and Approve you. Feel free to post the CS into the Character Tab and enter the world of Denver. Since you're in Discord with us, feel free to contact any of us GMs there if you'd like assistance in getting involved somewhere or getting your own little side show started.
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How about we never, ever remind me about that terrible fail I just committed. Yeah? Okay. Good.
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Yes, phone, I love being made into more of a fool. >>


I do want to go ahead and mention that this was a really, truly annoying night.


And a friendly reminder that we do always accept NPC sheets (even if we might not use them) and ideas. ^°
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It's still a bit of a WIP, namely the equipment section, so please note that.

Edit - Alignment and limitations.
Edit2 - Amputation for Accumulation, Master Specifics, and History Tweak
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So, this looks like fun. Any chance of another member of the Minutemen? I'm thinking of something along the lines of Blaster/Shaker with a sort of elemental manipulation ability (throwing fireballs, causing localized earthquakes, etc.) that mainly works offensively, if that would work. I'm also a bit unsure on what sort of event could cause that sort of power to trigger, so suggestions are welcome. I'll try to read through the IC a bit later if you'll have me.
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The Minutemen are in a bit of an odd state at the moment so joining them would probably be a little unfeasible. However there are plenty of other independents floating around you can interact with. As for your character we'd be more than willing to help you hash out the details, as Worm trigger's are a bit special. Would love to chat with you in the discord linked in the OP or here.
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