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I don't know any of those characters. I'm so behind O.O
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Just one for now.
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@Crimson Lion Another good example.
@jynmi88 How many characters are we allowed?
Just one for now.
Hope you are still accepting characters just threw this character together hope it works for this.
Appearance:
Name: Bakuto Hokori
Age: 150
Personality:
Bakuto has a rather eccentric personality, while during 'official business' he tries to seem stern, respectful and the kind of person who follows the rules and order of the soul society, when alone to do what he returns to his true personality. He is slightly unstable, and a bit quirky. Doing things the right way isnt his way, if he can get a job done better doing it another way then he will whether it be a harder way or easier.
Bakuto loves to fight hollows, and being surrounded by them just so he can kill more of them. The more hollows he has to fight the happier he is. While he does like fighting other soul reapers he prefers fighting hollows as he doesnt feel like he have to hold back and he can fight without worrying about killing an ally. Bakuto also likes a good competition whether it be gambling or some sort of physical sport to just plain fighting. Bakuto is very competitive and hates losing.
Bakuto always likes to keep 'updated' on what happens in the world of the living, always trying to find some reason to go there even if it is a very petty reason. Bakuto has a slight dislike to kido based zanpakutos. While he does find them impressive he believes the sword should be used like a sword and not like a magical wand or something along those lines.
Bakuto is a bit 'broken' from time to time he will go from being normal to very aggressive. He also is a bit unstable often doing things thought to be 'crazy' or abnormal.
Backstory:
Bakuto isnt a 'Genius' but he possesses the genius gene.
Bakuto was brought into the acadmey at the age of one hundred and forty, he died from the world of the living at the a very young age but it wasnt until one hundred years later he was found and put in the acadmey.
Bakuto was eaten by a Gillan level Menos and survived three days inside the hollow's stomach. The hollow was killed and he fell out of the hollow out of the suprise of many soul reapers.
Bakuto's own spirit pressure kept him alive but yet he felt more like a hollow after this day. His spirit pressure was very simlar to that of a hollow and he couldnt. What was differnt he possessed the gene that the project was drafting soul reapers for.
He was watched when he entered the acadmey as it was worried he might turn into a hollow but he didnt. He was found to excell in brute force and rash thinking and throwing around spirit pressure. He lacked in a lot of other areas, Kido being the main thing he was terrible at. He also cant sense spirit energy very well but he can track hollows better then most. He was put into the 'genius' program and he was at the bottom of his class. Bakuto finds it funny remembering back to this he was the 'dumbest' person in his class and now he is in this 'genius' program.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
strengths- Expert at hand to hand combat, weapons expert and moderate spirit pressure control. Scythe Master Great Endurance. Great cook
Weaknesses- Cannot sense normal spirit pressure, cannot use kido expect for his zampakuto's own attacks. Terrible sense of direction gets lost easly if not directed by someone else who knows where they are going.
Zanpakuto
Name: Chūkū no shi
Release Command: Hunt Chuku no Shi
Shikai Appearance: Bakuto's Zanpakuto Chūkū no shi, The hollow reaper, a zanpakuto in a unreleased state is a normal soul reaper sword but when released it combines with the sheath to create a deadly scythe. A weapon that devours reishi, breaks any reishi and absorb it feeding the power that is Bakuto's Zanpakuto.absorb reishi that is below or equal to the spiritual pressure of the user and capibile of firing that energy back or store it for later.
Shikai Ability: The shikai breaks down the bonds of reshi of whatever it hits and absorbs it temopoarly giving the user a boost of spirtual power to Bakuto as long as he is holding Chuku no shi. The zampakuto's limit is how much power Bakuto has. He can only break down the reashi and spirit energy of that is weaker then him at the time he tries to absorb it.
Chuku No Shi is more powerful within the soul socitity or anywhere the air is more filled with reashi. As the scythe swings through the air it can absorb and break the bonds of reashi in the air itself. Bakuto and Chuku No Shi has a limit to how much it can absorb he can only absorb enough energy equal to his own to double his own strength. He has to either use the energy or release it, any more and it starts to have a destructive effect on Bakuto and starts to eat away at his own body
Techniques:
Bakuto has two techniques or rather just one used in two ways the ability is known as Devil's/demon's Slash. Using the asborb reshi Bakuto can fire back a slash way equal to what he has absorbed. The other is Devil's/Demon's sheild. Spinning the scythe in a circle Bakuto can create a small barieer the size the scythe in a circular shape that has the power to block whatever comes at it with the energy level of that what Bakuto has absorbed.
Name: Bakuto Hokori
Age: 150
Personality:
Bakuto has a rather eccentric personality, while during 'official business' he tries to seem stern, respectful and the kind of person who follows the rules and order of the soul society, when alone to do what he returns to his true personality. He is slightly unstable, and a bit quirky. Doing things the right way isnt his way, if he can get a job done better doing it another way then he will whether it be a harder way or easier.
Bakuto loves to fight hollows, and being surrounded by them just so he can kill more of them. The more hollows he has to fight the happier he is. While he does like fighting other soul reapers he prefers fighting hollows as he doesnt feel like he have to hold back and he can fight without worrying about killing an ally. Bakuto also likes a good competition whether it be gambling or some sort of physical sport to just plain fighting. Bakuto is very competitive and hates losing.
Bakuto always likes to keep 'updated' on what happens in the world of the living, always trying to find some reason to go there even if it is a very petty reason. Bakuto has a slight dislike to kido based zanpakutos. While he does find them impressive he believes the sword should be used like a sword and not like a magical wand or something along those lines.
Bakuto is a bit 'broken' from time to time he will go from being normal to very aggressive. He also is a bit unstable often doing things thought to be 'crazy' or abnormal.
Backstory:
Bakuto isnt a 'Genius' but he possesses the genius gene.
Bakuto was brought into the acadmey at the age of one hundred and forty, he died from the world of the living at the a very young age but it wasnt until one hundred years later he was found and put in the acadmey.
Bakuto was eaten by a Gillan level Menos and survived three days inside the hollow's stomach. The hollow was killed and he fell out of the hollow out of the suprise of many soul reapers.
Bakuto's own spirit pressure kept him alive but yet he felt more like a hollow after this day. His spirit pressure was very simlar to that of a hollow and he couldnt. What was differnt he possessed the gene that the project was drafting soul reapers for.
He was watched when he entered the acadmey as it was worried he might turn into a hollow but he didnt. He was found to excell in brute force and rash thinking and throwing around spirit pressure. He lacked in a lot of other areas, Kido being the main thing he was terrible at. He also cant sense spirit energy very well but he can track hollows better then most. He was put into the 'genius' program and he was at the bottom of his class. Bakuto finds it funny remembering back to this he was the 'dumbest' person in his class and now he is in this 'genius' program.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
strengths- Expert at hand to hand combat, weapons expert and moderate spirit pressure control. Scythe Master Great Endurance. Great cook
Weaknesses- Cannot sense normal spirit pressure, cannot use kido expect for his zampakuto's own attacks. Terrible sense of direction gets lost easly if not directed by someone else who knows where they are going.
Zanpakuto
Name: Chūkū no shi
Release Command: Hunt Chuku no Shi
Shikai Appearance: Bakuto's Zanpakuto Chūkū no shi, The hollow reaper, a zanpakuto in a unreleased state is a normal soul reaper sword but when released it combines with the sheath to create a deadly scythe. A weapon that devours reishi, breaks any reishi and absorb it feeding the power that is Bakuto's Zanpakuto.absorb reishi that is below or equal to the spiritual pressure of the user and capibile of firing that energy back or store it for later.
Shikai Ability: The shikai breaks down the bonds of reshi of whatever it hits and absorbs it temopoarly giving the user a boost of spirtual power to Bakuto as long as he is holding Chuku no shi. The zampakuto's limit is how much power Bakuto has. He can only break down the reashi and spirit energy of that is weaker then him at the time he tries to absorb it.
Chuku No Shi is more powerful within the soul socitity or anywhere the air is more filled with reashi. As the scythe swings through the air it can absorb and break the bonds of reashi in the air itself. Bakuto and Chuku No Shi has a limit to how much it can absorb he can only absorb enough energy equal to his own to double his own strength. He has to either use the energy or release it, any more and it starts to have a destructive effect on Bakuto and starts to eat away at his own body
Techniques:
Bakuto has two techniques or rather just one used in two ways the ability is known as Devil's/demon's Slash. Using the asborb reshi Bakuto can fire back a slash way equal to what he has absorbed. The other is Devil's/Demon's sheild. Spinning the scythe in a circle Bakuto can create a small barieer the size the scythe in a circular shape that has the power to block whatever comes at it with the energy level of that what Bakuto has absorbed.
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Yes, there's still space.
However, there area few issues with your CS.
1. The Grammar is a little bad. Normally, I don't mind, because this is only a casual level rp, and everybody makes mistakes, but some of this is a bit difficult to read.
2. Regarding the part where you character is inside a hollow. While for the most part this is fine, there is one thing I want to make clear. Currently, none of the characters have any unique potential to be vizards. Yes, there is a possibility that somewhere down the line a "vizarding" situation will occur, that's not case now. So at the most, all could be said about the event was it left psychological damages.
3. I'm going to have to say no on the shikai ability. While I'm open to some bankai being able to manipulate Reishi, later on, it's a hard no on shikai which are capable of doing this. As it's just too broken of an ability for too early on in the series.
3.5 Also, for future record, I'm going to say that no single ability is going to be able to mess with all forms of Reishi. At the most lenient It'll either be basic reishi or sentient reishi(the kind associated with a spiritual entity and yes this does include kido)
Hope you are still accepting characters just threw this character together hope it works for this.Appearance:
Name: Bakuto Hokori
Age: 150
Personality:
Bakuto has a rather eccentric personality, while during 'official business' he tries to seem stern, respectful and the kind of person who follows the rules and order of the soul society, when alone to do what he returns to his true personality. He is slightly unstable, and a bit quirky. Doing things the right way isnt his way, if he can get a job done better doing it another way then he will whether it be a harder way or easier.
Bakuto loves to fight hollows, and being surrounded by them just so he can kill more of them. The more hollows he has to fight the happier he is. While he does like fighting other soul reapers he prefers fighting hollows as he doesnt feel like he have to hold back and he can fight without worrying about killing an ally. Bakuto also likes a good competition whether it be gambling or some sort of physical sport to just plain fighting. Bakuto is very competitive and hates losing.
Bakuto always likes to keep 'updated' on what happens in the world of the living, always trying to find some reason to go there even if it is a very petty reason. Bakuto has a slight dislike to kido based zanpakutos. While he does find them impressive he believes the sword should be used like a sword and not like a magical wand or something along those lines.
Bakuto is a bit 'broken' from time to time he will go from being normal to very aggressive. He also is a bit unstable often doing things thought to be 'crazy' or abnormal.
Backstory:
Bakuto isnt a 'Genius' but he possesses the genius gene.
Bakuto was brought into the acadmey at the age of one hundred and forty, he died from the world of the living at the a very young age but it wasnt until one hundred years later he was found and put in the acadmey.
Bakuto was eaten by a Gillan level Menos and survived three days inside the hollow's stomach. The hollow was killed and he fell out of the hollow out of the suprise of many soul reapers.
Bakuto's own spirit pressure kept him alive but yet he felt more like a hollow after this day. His spirit pressure was very simlar to that of a hollow and he couldnt. What was differnt he possessed the gene that the project was drafting soul reapers for.
He was watched when he entered the acadmey as it was worried he might turn into a hollow but he didnt. He was found to excell in brute force and rash thinking and throwing around spirit pressure. He lacked in a lot of other areas, Kido being the main thing he was terrible at. He also cant sense spirit energy very well but he can track hollows better then most. He was put into the 'genius' program and he was at the bottom of his class. Bakuto finds it funny remembering back to this he was the 'dumbest' person in his class and now he is in this 'genius' program.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
strengths- Expert at hand to hand combat, weapons expert and moderate spirit pressure control. Scythe Master Great Endurance. Great cook
Weaknesses- Cannot sense normal spirit pressure, cannot use kido expect for his zampakuto's own attacks. Terrible sense of direction gets lost easly if not directed by someone else who knows where they are going.
Zanpakuto
Name: Chūkū no shi
Release Command: Hunt Chuku no Shi
Shikai Appearance: Bakuto's Zanpakuto Chūkū no shi, The hollow reaper, a zanpakuto in a unreleased state is a normal soul reaper sword but when released it combines with the sheath to create a deadly scythe. A weapon that devours reishi, breaks any reishi and absorb it feeding the power that is Bakuto's Zanpakuto.absorb reishi that is below or equal to the spiritual pressure of the user and capibile of firing that energy back or store it for later.
Shikai Ability: The shikai breaks down the bonds of reshi of whatever it hits and absorbs it temopoarly giving the user a boost of spirtual power to Bakuto as long as he is holding Chuku no shi. The zampakuto's limit is how much power Bakuto has. He can only break down the reashi and spirit energy of that is weaker then him at the time he tries to absorb it.
Chuku No Shi is more powerful within the soul socitity or anywhere the air is more filled with reashi. As the scythe swings through the air it can absorb and break the bonds of reashi in the air itself. Bakuto and Chuku No Shi has a limit to how much it can absorb he can only absorb enough energy equal to his own to double his own strength. He has to either use the energy or release it, any more and it starts to have a destructive effect on Bakuto and starts to eat away at his own body
Techniques:
Bakuto has two techniques or rather just one used in two ways the ability is known as Devil's/demon's Slash. Using the asborb reshi Bakuto can fire back a slash way equal to what he has absorbed. The other is Devil's/Demon's sheild. Spinning the scythe in a circle Bakuto can create a small barieer the size the scythe in a circular shape that has the power to block whatever comes at it with the energy level of that what Bakuto has absorbed.
Yes, there's still space.
However, there area few issues with your CS.
1. The Grammar is a little bad. Normally, I don't mind, because this is only a casual level rp, and everybody makes mistakes, but some of this is a bit difficult to read.
2. Regarding the part where you character is inside a hollow. While for the most part this is fine, there is one thing I want to make clear. Currently, none of the characters have any unique potential to be vizards. Yes, there is a possibility that somewhere down the line a "vizarding" situation will occur, that's not case now. So at the most, all could be said about the event was it left psychological damages.
3. I'm going to have to say no on the shikai ability. While I'm open to some bankai being able to manipulate Reishi, later on, it's a hard no on shikai which are capable of doing this. As it's just too broken of an ability for too early on in the series.
3.5 Also, for future record, I'm going to say that no single ability is going to be able to mess with all forms of Reishi. At the most lenient It'll either be basic reishi or sentient reishi(the kind associated with a spiritual entity and yes this does include kido)
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Name: Saishu Yoake
Age: 70 Years.
Personality: Much of his past has followed Saishu to Soul Society. Most being his mannerisms, quirks, and overall tendencies from before his death. Saishu while not an overachiever is a resolved man that despises being told "he can't" do something. That hasn't changed since his death. Though it had been mostly strangled upon his rebirth. Rukongai gave him a certain edge. It made him street smart and crude, a bit pessimistic but mostly pragmatic. While being carefree can come off as lazy to his peers, he has refused to adhere to anything he doesn't agree with, which meant, yes sometimes breaks were necessary and other times they were deserved. For some reason, too much work really leaves a bad taste in his mouth.
Backstory: Saishu Yoake fought his ability to sense the supernatural during his time in the living. Up until he died himself and was reborn in the Soul Society. As a young spirit learning the ins and outs, he had been under the impression that dreams rarely came to those in the Rukongai. So when he was approached by a maiden soul reaper of the 12th Division he was skeptical. All his afterlife he was told soul reapers were protectors of the natural order. He felt insanely lucky just to bump into one. Even more to discover he was being scouted for his "youth and reiryoku" which was whispered to have been uncanny.
Two years later and he was finally emitted into Gotei 13 academy.
Strengths/ Weaknesses: As a soul reaper in the Gotei 13 Saishu is an exemplary warrior for his age. He excels mostly at Zanjutsu and Hoho, must preferring to strike as fast and hard as possible. On the other end of the spectrum he has absolutely no skills in Hakuda and only marginal abilities in Kido. He's been told to focus more on his Kido and to give Hakuda atleast a try but he's stuck to mastering Zanjutsu and Hoho, if only to make his presence on the battlefield that much bigger.
"How feeble my love for you is. You who is so imperfectly formed, half understood, and poorly cherished. You whose soul I share."
Name: Yidrias (イドリアス, First Son)
Release Command: "Revolt,"
Shikai Appearance: Upon speaking Yidrias' release command a black aura surges down the blade and up the hilt respectively. Once the energy fades a long jian, its blade shining of a cobalt material, rests in Saishu's hands. It crackles white lightening from its double-edged blade at all times. Oddly enough along with the guardless jian comes a gauntlet of the same make. On his shoulders rests a rugged, black, cowl that falls to his mid-back.
Shikai Ability: Yidrias is a unclassified-type Zanpakuto that doubles the physical strength of his armored arm and allows him to use lightning-based attacks.
Techniques:
- Techniques
- Rebellion King's Spear - Saishu swings his blade in shoots an arc of lightning towards his opponent.
@jynmi88 Sorry for disappearing. I was taken on a two day excursion lol. I'm back now.
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@Renny
Hey! Welcome back. To be honest, was a bit worried you lost interest. So it's good to see you're still interested.
As for your CS, there's a couple issues.
1. All our characters are starting off at about the same place, which will be just before graduating from the Shinigami academy. Which causes a bit of issue with your character's background since it states that he's already working in the 12th division.
2. I'm a bit confused on what your character's shikai does. I get the part about revolting, as in rebelling, and how flight would fit in, but I'm not sure how it would incorporate doubling your character's physical abilities. Is it based on revolt in some way like it increases the amount he's capable of pushing something away from him, or?......
Name: Saishu Yoake
Age: 70 Years.
Personality: Much of his past has followed Saishu to Soul Society. Most being his mannerisms, quirks, and overall tendencies from before his death. Saishu while not an overachiever is a resolved man that despises being told "he can't" do something. That hasn't changed since his death. Though it had been mostly strangled upon his rebirth. Rukongai gave him a certain edge. It made him street smart and crude, a bit pessimistic but mostly pragmatic. While being carefree can come off as lazy to his peers, he has refused to adhere to anything he doesn't agree with, which meant, yes sometimes breaks were necessary and other times they were deserved. For some reason, too much work really leaves a bad taste in his mouth.
Backstory: Saishu Yoake fought his ability to sense the supernatural during his time in the living. Up until he died himself and was reborn in the Soul Society. As a young spirit learning the ins and outs, he had been under the impression that dreams rarely came to those in the Rukongai. So when he was approached by a maiden soul reaper of the 12th Division he was skeptical. All his afterlife he was told soul reapers were protectors of the natural order. He felt insanely lucky just to bump into one. Even more to discover he was being scouted for his "youth and reiryoku" which was whispered to have been uncanny.
Two years later and he was finally emitted into Gotei 13. Just a year later he graduated and was placed almost unanimously into the 12th Division. Where, for all his skills, he was left a regular soul reaper officer told only to refine and commune until his calling was ready to receive him.
Strengths/ Weaknesses: As a soul reaper in the Gotei 13 Saishu is an exemplary warrior for his age. He excels mostly at Zanjutsu and Hoho, must preferring to strike as fast and hard as possible. On the other end of the spectrum he has absolutely no skills in Hakuda and only marginal abilities in Kido. He's been told to focus more on his Kido and to give Hakuda atleast a try but he's stuck to mastering Zanjutsu and Hoho, if only to make his presence on the battlefield that much bigger.
"How feeble my love for you is. You who is so imperfectly formed, half understood, and poorly cherished. You whose soul I share."
Name: Yidrias (イドリアス, First Son)
Release Command: "Revolt,"
Shikai Appearance: Upon speaking Yidrias' release command a black aura surges down the blade and up the hilt respectively. Once the energy fades a long jian, its blade shining of a cobalt material, rests in Saishu's hands. It spittles a black, white splattering aura from its double-edged blade at all times; exudes a choirs' hymn with every twist and swing. Oddly enough along with the guardless jian comes a gauntlet of the same make. On his shoulders rests a rugged, black, cowl that falls to his mid-back.
Shikai Ability: Yidrias is mainly a melee-type Zanpakuto that doubles his physical abilities. Saishu has discovered by communing that its abilities revolve heavily around rebelling.
Techniques:
- Techniques
- Flight - Yidrias grants Saishu the ability to fly unaffected by natures' laws of gravity or friction.
@jynmi88 Sorry for disappearing. I was taken on a two day excursion lol. I'm back now.
Hey! Welcome back. To be honest, was a bit worried you lost interest. So it's good to see you're still interested.
As for your CS, there's a couple issues.
1. All our characters are starting off at about the same place, which will be just before graduating from the Shinigami academy. Which causes a bit of issue with your character's background since it states that he's already working in the 12th division.
2. I'm a bit confused on what your character's shikai does. I get the part about revolting, as in rebelling, and how flight would fit in, but I'm not sure how it would incorporate doubling your character's physical abilities. Is it based on revolt in some way like it increases the amount he's capable of pushing something away from him, or?......
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Just a head's up you guys. We'll probably get started in the next couple of days. I'm just trying to hold out a little bit more for the people who're still working on their CSs
Just a head's up you guys. We'll probably get started in the next couple of days. I'm just trying to hold out a little bit more for the people who're still working on their CSs
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@jynmi88 I fixed the first mistake. As for the abilities, its not adhering to a single class of Zanpakuto. I did change his enhanced strength to be restricted to his armored arm though. And also switched up his Shikai ability.
Let's try this again.
Sorry about the grammar mistakes, My grammar does suck from time to time. I do improve though or at least I try to as I go. Always trying to reread things before posting them, but yeah, this is far from the best character I have created. Hopefully with the changes i made to the ability of the shikai will be better now.
As for your other conserns, the number 2 point, I wasnt planning on making Bakuto a vizard. The hollow stuff I added isnt suppose to lead to being a vizard it is to explain his more chaotic personality and to explain why he might have quirks as the rp starts to move.
As for the third consern, I changed the zanpakuto's shikai ability as i said before.. Going with something hopefully a bit more acceptable. Going for a more of a wind enhanced zanpakuto instead of the reashi manipulating one that was before. Going to leave room for the characer to grow as the rp goes on hopefully
Sorry about the grammar mistakes, My grammar does suck from time to time. I do improve though or at least I try to as I go. Always trying to reread things before posting them, but yeah, this is far from the best character I have created. Hopefully with the changes i made to the ability of the shikai will be better now.
As for your other conserns, the number 2 point, I wasnt planning on making Bakuto a vizard. The hollow stuff I added isnt suppose to lead to being a vizard it is to explain his more chaotic personality and to explain why he might have quirks as the rp starts to move.
As for the third consern, I changed the zanpakuto's shikai ability as i said before.. Going with something hopefully a bit more acceptable. Going for a more of a wind enhanced zanpakuto instead of the reashi manipulating one that was before. Going to leave room for the characer to grow as the rp goes on hopefully
Appearance:
Name: Bakuto Hokori
Age: 150
Personality:
Bakuto has a rather eccentric personality, during 'official business' he tries to seem stern, respectful and the kind of person who follows the rules and order of the soul society, when alone to do what he returns to his true personality. He is slightly unstable, and a bit quirky. Doing things the right way isnt his way, if he can get a job done better doing it another way then he will whether it be a harder way or easier.
Bakuto loves to fight hollows, and being surrounded by them just so he can kill more of them. The more hollows he has to fight the happier he is. While he does like fighting other soul reapers he prefers fighting hollows as he doesnt feel like he have to hold back and he can fight without worrying about killing an ally. Bakuto also likes a good competition whether it be gambling or some sort of physical sport to just plain fighting. Bakuto is very competitive and hates losing.
Bakuto always likes to keep 'updated' on what happens in the world of the living, always trying to find some reason to go there even if it is a very petty reason. Bakuto has a slight dislike to kido based zanpakutos. While he does find them impressive he believes the sword should be used like a sword and not like a magical wand or something along those lines.
Bakuto is a bit 'broken' from time to time he will go from being normal to very aggressive. He also is a bit unstable often doing things thought to be 'crazy' or abnormal.
Backstory:
Bakuto isnt a 'Genius' but he possesses the genius gene.
Bakuto was brought into the acadmey at the age of one hundred and forty, he died from the world of the living at the a very young age but it wasnt until one hundred years later he was found and put in the acadmey.
Bakuto was eaten by a Gillan level Menos and survived three days inside the hollow's stomach. The hollow was killed and he fell out of the hollow out of the suprise of many soul reapers.
Bakuto's own spirit pressure kept him alive but yet he felt more like a hollow after this day. His spirit pressure was very simlar to that of a hollow and he couldnt. What was differnt he possessed the gene that the project was drafting soul reapers for.
He was watched when he entered the acadmey as it was worried he might turn into a hollow but he didnt. He was found to excell in brute force and rash thinking and throwing around spirit pressure. He lacked in a lot of other areas, Kido being the main thing he was terrible at. He also cant sense spirit energy very well but he can track hollows better then most. He was put into the 'genius' program and he was at the bottom of his class. Bakuto finds it funny remembering back to this he was the 'dumbest' person in his class and now he is in this 'genius' program.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
strengths- Expert at hand to hand combat, weapons expert and moderate spirit pressure control. Scythe Master Great Endurance. Great cook
Weaknesses- Cannot sense normal spirit pressure, cannot use kido expect for his zampakuto's own attacks. Terrible sense of direction gets lost easly if not directed by someone else who knows where they are going.
Zanpakuto
Name: Kazeyoke
Release Command: Wind, rises and tears the sky to sunder Kazeyoke
Shikai Appearance:
Shikai Ability: Kazeyoke is a wind zampakuto, this sword or rather scythe in cases itself with wind enhancing its damage and destructive power, with the amount of destruction wind can cause. The only thing Bakuto can do is coat his sword in wind to enhance its current power.
Techniques:
Flash Step/Shunpo
Name: Bakuto Hokori
Age: 150
Personality:
Bakuto has a rather eccentric personality, during 'official business' he tries to seem stern, respectful and the kind of person who follows the rules and order of the soul society, when alone to do what he returns to his true personality. He is slightly unstable, and a bit quirky. Doing things the right way isnt his way, if he can get a job done better doing it another way then he will whether it be a harder way or easier.
Bakuto loves to fight hollows, and being surrounded by them just so he can kill more of them. The more hollows he has to fight the happier he is. While he does like fighting other soul reapers he prefers fighting hollows as he doesnt feel like he have to hold back and he can fight without worrying about killing an ally. Bakuto also likes a good competition whether it be gambling or some sort of physical sport to just plain fighting. Bakuto is very competitive and hates losing.
Bakuto always likes to keep 'updated' on what happens in the world of the living, always trying to find some reason to go there even if it is a very petty reason. Bakuto has a slight dislike to kido based zanpakutos. While he does find them impressive he believes the sword should be used like a sword and not like a magical wand or something along those lines.
Bakuto is a bit 'broken' from time to time he will go from being normal to very aggressive. He also is a bit unstable often doing things thought to be 'crazy' or abnormal.
Backstory:
Bakuto isnt a 'Genius' but he possesses the genius gene.
Bakuto was brought into the acadmey at the age of one hundred and forty, he died from the world of the living at the a very young age but it wasnt until one hundred years later he was found and put in the acadmey.
Bakuto was eaten by a Gillan level Menos and survived three days inside the hollow's stomach. The hollow was killed and he fell out of the hollow out of the suprise of many soul reapers.
Bakuto's own spirit pressure kept him alive but yet he felt more like a hollow after this day. His spirit pressure was very simlar to that of a hollow and he couldnt. What was differnt he possessed the gene that the project was drafting soul reapers for.
He was watched when he entered the acadmey as it was worried he might turn into a hollow but he didnt. He was found to excell in brute force and rash thinking and throwing around spirit pressure. He lacked in a lot of other areas, Kido being the main thing he was terrible at. He also cant sense spirit energy very well but he can track hollows better then most. He was put into the 'genius' program and he was at the bottom of his class. Bakuto finds it funny remembering back to this he was the 'dumbest' person in his class and now he is in this 'genius' program.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
strengths- Expert at hand to hand combat, weapons expert and moderate spirit pressure control. Scythe Master Great Endurance. Great cook
Weaknesses- Cannot sense normal spirit pressure, cannot use kido expect for his zampakuto's own attacks. Terrible sense of direction gets lost easly if not directed by someone else who knows where they are going.
Zanpakuto
Name: Kazeyoke
Release Command: Wind, rises and tears the sky to sunder Kazeyoke
Shikai Appearance:
Shikai Ability: Kazeyoke is a wind zampakuto, this sword or rather scythe in cases itself with wind enhancing its damage and destructive power, with the amount of destruction wind can cause. The only thing Bakuto can do is coat his sword in wind to enhance its current power.
Techniques:
Flash Step/Shunpo
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@Renny
The backstory is good to go now, but there's still issue with the shikai's ability.
Of course, a shikai doesn't have to fall into a single type, but usually they do tend to have one core ability from which all secondary abilities are derived. From what I can gather, your character's shikai has three. Revolt, dark fire clones, and increased strength in his sword wielding arm.
Now, I'm fine with the increased strength section because it's so basic and is limited to one arm, but the revolt and dark fire clones are two different abilities that each have potential to branch out over a wide area. So I'm going to have to ask that you select one of those, or find a way to make it so one of the abilities falls in with the other.
@BladeSS4
Okay. Your character is accepted now. Just try and keep an eye on the grammar from this point on and things should be good.
@jynmi88 I fixed the first mistake. As for the abilities, its not adhering to a single class of Zanpakuto. I did change his enhanced strength to be restricted to his armored arm though. And also switched up his Shikai ability.
Name: Saishu Yoake
Age: 70 Years.
Personality: Much of his past has followed Saishu to Soul Society. Most being his mannerisms, quirks, and overall tendencies from before his death. Saishu while not an overachiever is a resolved man that despises being told "he can't" do something. That hasn't changed since his death. Though it had been mostly strangled upon his rebirth. Rukongai gave him a certain edge. It made him street smart and crude, a bit pessimistic but mostly pragmatic. While being carefree can come off as lazy to his peers, he has refused to adhere to anything he doesn't agree with, which meant, yes sometimes breaks were necessary and other times they were deserved. For some reason, too much work really leaves a bad taste in his mouth.
Backstory: Saishu Yoake fought his ability to sense the supernatural during his time in the living. Up until he died himself and was reborn in the Soul Society. As a young spirit learning the ins and outs, he had been under the impression that dreams rarely came to those in the Rukongai. So when he was approached by a maiden soul reaper of the 12th Division he was skeptical. All his afterlife he was told soul reapers were protectors of the natural order. He felt insanely lucky just to bump into one. Even more to discover he was being scouted for his "youth and reiryoku" which was whispered to have been uncanny.
Two years later and he was finally emitted into Gotei 13 academy.
Strengths/ Weaknesses: As a soul reaper in the Gotei 13 Saishu is an exemplary warrior for his age. He excels mostly at Zanjutsu and Hoho, must preferring to strike as fast and hard as possible. On the other end of the spectrum he has absolutely no skills in Hakuda and only marginal abilities in Kido. He's been told to focus more on his Kido and to give Hakuda atleast a try but he's stuck to mastering Zanjutsu and Hoho, if only to make his presence on the battlefield that much bigger.
"How feeble my love for you is. You who is so imperfectly formed, half understood, and poorly cherished. You whose soul I share."
Name: Yidrias (イドリアス, First Son)
Release Command: "Revolt,"
Shikai Appearance: Upon speaking Yidrias' release command a black aura surges down the blade and up the hilt respectively. Once the energy fades a long jian, its blade shining of a cobalt material, rests in Saishu's hands. It spittles a black, white splattering aura from its double-edged blade at all times; exudes a choirs' hymn with every twist and swing. Oddly enough along with the guardless jian comes a gauntlet of the same make. On his shoulders rests a rugged, black, cowl that falls to his mid-back.
Shikai Ability: Yidrias is a unclassified-type Zanpakuto that doubles the physical strength of his armored arm and allows him to create fiery black clones to attack, defend, and support with during combat. Saishu has discovered by communing that its abilities revolve heavily around rebelling or limit-pushing.
Techniques:
- Techniques
- Seven Rebellious Sages - Yidrias grants Saishu the ability to create up to seven cloned swords. These swords are capable of levitating and is just as durable as Yidrias. They can be moved by his will.
@jynmi88 Sorry for disappearing. I was taken on a two day excursion lol. I'm back now.
The backstory is good to go now, but there's still issue with the shikai's ability.
Of course, a shikai doesn't have to fall into a single type, but usually they do tend to have one core ability from which all secondary abilities are derived. From what I can gather, your character's shikai has three. Revolt, dark fire clones, and increased strength in his sword wielding arm.
Now, I'm fine with the increased strength section because it's so basic and is limited to one arm, but the revolt and dark fire clones are two different abilities that each have potential to branch out over a wide area. So I'm going to have to ask that you select one of those, or find a way to make it so one of the abilities falls in with the other.
@BladeSS4
Let's try this again.
Sorry about the grammar mistakes, My grammar does suck from time to time. I do improve though or at least I try to as I go. Always trying to reread things before posting them, but yeah, this is far from the best character I have created. Hopefully with the changes i made to the ability of the shikai will be better now.
As for your other conserns, the number 2 point, I wasnt planning on making Bakuto a vizard. The hollow stuff I added isnt suppose to lead to being a vizard it is to explain his more chaotic personality and to explain why he might have quirks as the rp starts to move.
As for the third consern, I changed the zanpakuto's shikai ability as i said before.. Going with something hopefully a bit more acceptable. Going for a more of a wind enhanced zanpakuto instead of the reashi manipulating one that was before. Going to leave room for the characer to grow as the rp goes on hopefullyAppearance:
Name: Bakuto Hokori
Age: 150
Personality:
Bakuto has a rather eccentric personality, during 'official business' he tries to seem stern, respectful and the kind of person who follows the rules and order of the soul society, when alone to do what he returns to his true personality. He is slightly unstable, and a bit quirky. Doing things the right way isnt his way, if he can get a job done better doing it another way then he will whether it be a harder way or easier.
Bakuto loves to fight hollows, and being surrounded by them just so he can kill more of them. The more hollows he has to fight the happier he is. While he does like fighting other soul reapers he prefers fighting hollows as he doesnt feel like he have to hold back and he can fight without worrying about killing an ally. Bakuto also likes a good competition whether it be gambling or some sort of physical sport to just plain fighting. Bakuto is very competitive and hates losing.
Bakuto always likes to keep 'updated' on what happens in the world of the living, always trying to find some reason to go there even if it is a very petty reason. Bakuto has a slight dislike to kido based zanpakutos. While he does find them impressive he believes the sword should be used like a sword and not like a magical wand or something along those lines.
Bakuto is a bit 'broken' from time to time he will go from being normal to very aggressive. He also is a bit unstable often doing things thought to be 'crazy' or abnormal.
Backstory:
Bakuto isnt a 'Genius' but he possesses the genius gene.
Bakuto was brought into the acadmey at the age of one hundred and forty, he died from the world of the living at the a very young age but it wasnt until one hundred years later he was found and put in the acadmey.
Bakuto was eaten by a Gillan level Menos and survived three days inside the hollow's stomach. The hollow was killed and he fell out of the hollow out of the suprise of many soul reapers.
Bakuto's own spirit pressure kept him alive but yet he felt more like a hollow after this day. His spirit pressure was very simlar to that of a hollow and he couldnt. What was differnt he possessed the gene that the project was drafting soul reapers for.
He was watched when he entered the acadmey as it was worried he might turn into a hollow but he didnt. He was found to excell in brute force and rash thinking and throwing around spirit pressure. He lacked in a lot of other areas, Kido being the main thing he was terrible at. He also cant sense spirit energy very well but he can track hollows better then most. He was put into the 'genius' program and he was at the bottom of his class. Bakuto finds it funny remembering back to this he was the 'dumbest' person in his class and now he is in this 'genius' program.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
strengths- Expert at hand to hand combat, weapons expert and moderate spirit pressure control. Scythe Master Great Endurance. Great cook
Weaknesses- Cannot sense normal spirit pressure, cannot use kido expect for his zampakuto's own attacks. Terrible sense of direction gets lost easly if not directed by someone else who knows where they are going.
Zanpakuto
Name: Kazeyoke
Release Command: Wind, rises and tears the sky to sunder Kazeyoke
Shikai Appearance:
Shikai Ability: Kazeyoke is a wind zampakuto, this sword or rather scythe in cases itself with wind enhancing its damage and destructive power, with the amount of destruction wind can cause. The only thing Bakuto can do is coat his sword in wind to enhance its current power.
Techniques:
Flash Step/Shunpo
Okay. Your character is accepted now. Just try and keep an eye on the grammar from this point on and things should be good.
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@jynmi88 Alright, so I switched up my Shikai ability, since I was incapable of fitting my image onto Yidrias, I went with my second choice and is going to have it being a lightning-type Zanpakuto.
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Alrighty guys
shall we talk ...
shall we talk ...
relationships???
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Umm ... ok. Weird place to talk about this but it's fine. So I'm talking to this girl and honestly idk if it's going anywhere but she texted me saying we should get brunch tomorrow and there's this whole drama with her roommates
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My character is open to it but she obviously is not with anyone right now
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@Crimson Lion@Red Mage Saishu is probably one of the more relaxed guys at the Spiritual Arts Academy. He daydreams with a smile, finishes his tests and exams a bit early, and yet, for the most parts remains a shut door. His voice carries a confident timbre, usually accentuated with a tender undertone--perhaps the precursor of a macabre past. Between classes he vanishes from his peers to find a place to "sleep" or study intensively. After school he trains for three hours on his Zanjutsu and Hoho before spending an hour communing with his Zanpakuto.
A brief description of his life at the academy. Perhaps you guys can build an opinion off this of Saishu.
A brief description of his life at the academy. Perhaps you guys can build an opinion off this of Saishu.
Shikoku would have been mostly a liner out of habit. She would have been abnormally quiet even when she did speak. She eats by herself a lot in secluded places and stores off into nowhere from time to time as if trapped in thought. She isn't hard to engage but she doesn't start conversations by herself.
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@Red Mage Okay, so say by chance Shikoku stumbles into Saishu during a free period or vice-versa. Both of them seeking solitude during said time. Perhaps noticing the distance Shikoku has created between herself and the class, Saishu offers her to join him. How would she react to this?
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Okay. Here's my CS. Sorry for taking so long to get it up. I kept going back and forth between this shikai and the one that was more in line with the eventual bankai.
I've got an early morning tomorrow, but for sure I'll have the starter up sometime after work, if I don't manage to get it before.
Name:
Kokatsu Ririsu
Age:
69
Personality:
Ririsu's intelligence, which was already far higher than average, was pushed to genius levels upon the activation of the prodigy gene within her. This change has been a double edged sword. On the one hand, she finds it extremely easy to understand even the most complex of ideas, and put them to use. On the other hand, she's lost the ability to be idle and quickly becomes bored, and then frustrated without stimuli. Thus, it's not uncommon for her to take needless risks in order to cause something to happen, or allow something minor the chance to become something major. She also has a tendency of changing things for the hell of it. She hates to sleep, because even in her dreams she's aware there's more that she could be doing.
She's an avid fan of the science fiction and horror genres.
Backstory:
Kokatsu doesn't remember much of her previous life. She's certain that wherever she lived prior to finding herself in soul society, it wasn't very interesting because she has hazy flashes of pine trees. The one thing she knows for sure is the fact that she died somewhere hot and bright. She'd like to think her death was the result of some highly classified experiment gone wrong and ending with a massive explosion of the facility where the whole thing took place.
Ririsu was born to two former shinigami of the twelfth division, and grew up listening to horror stories about the captain. However, the stories did not have their intended effect ie scaring the child away from ever trying to become one of the Gotei 13. In fact, the constant tale of things ever changing and new threats that needed to be meet daily, made her want to become a member of the Gotei 13 more than anything else. So Ririsu constantly tried getting in. However, despite her high intellect, she was always turned away from joining the Academy, which she'd eventually learn was due to her parents constantly calling in favors to get her rejected.
However, all their attempts were in vain, as Mayuri's experiment force activated the prodigy gene within her, which meant there was no choice but for her to become enrolled in the academy.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
Strengths
Strengths
Zanpakuto
Name: Gin no kessaku (Silver Masterpiece)
Release Command: Sculpt
Shikai Ability: Upon release Gin no kessaku withers into a large grey plume of smoke before taking the form of a large, grey humanoid, which Ririsu is capable of controlling with vocal commands or hand gestures. Gin no Kassaku possesses a great deal of physical strength and resilience.
Techniques:
I've got an early morning tomorrow, but for sure I'll have the starter up sometime after work, if I don't manage to get it before.
Name:
Kokatsu Ririsu
Age:
69
Personality:
Ririsu's intelligence, which was already far higher than average, was pushed to genius levels upon the activation of the prodigy gene within her. This change has been a double edged sword. On the one hand, she finds it extremely easy to understand even the most complex of ideas, and put them to use. On the other hand, she's lost the ability to be idle and quickly becomes bored, and then frustrated without stimuli. Thus, it's not uncommon for her to take needless risks in order to cause something to happen, or allow something minor the chance to become something major. She also has a tendency of changing things for the hell of it. She hates to sleep, because even in her dreams she's aware there's more that she could be doing.
She's an avid fan of the science fiction and horror genres.
Backstory:
Kokatsu doesn't remember much of her previous life. She's certain that wherever she lived prior to finding herself in soul society, it wasn't very interesting because she has hazy flashes of pine trees. The one thing she knows for sure is the fact that she died somewhere hot and bright. She'd like to think her death was the result of some highly classified experiment gone wrong and ending with a massive explosion of the facility where the whole thing took place.
Ririsu was born to two former shinigami of the twelfth division, and grew up listening to horror stories about the captain. However, the stories did not have their intended effect ie scaring the child away from ever trying to become one of the Gotei 13. In fact, the constant tale of things ever changing and new threats that needed to be meet daily, made her want to become a member of the Gotei 13 more than anything else. So Ririsu constantly tried getting in. However, despite her high intellect, she was always turned away from joining the Academy, which she'd eventually learn was due to her parents constantly calling in favors to get her rejected.
However, all their attempts were in vain, as Mayuri's experiment force activated the prodigy gene within her, which meant there was no choice but for her to become enrolled in the academy.
Strengths/ Weaknesses:
Strengths
- Genius level Intelligence
- Hoho Practitioner
Strengths
- Poor Hakudo skills
- No skill in Kaido Kido
Zanpakuto
Name: Gin no kessaku (Silver Masterpiece)
Release Command: Sculpt
Shikai Ability: Upon release Gin no kessaku withers into a large grey plume of smoke before taking the form of a large, grey humanoid, which Ririsu is capable of controlling with vocal commands or hand gestures. Gin no Kassaku possesses a great deal of physical strength and resilience.
Techniques:
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