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Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by Marquise
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Likewise done, @vancexentan . Obviously happy to change things if you have concerns :) .
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@Marquise I see nothing wrong I'll accept the character.

@Kazemitsu Ring of Freedom seems too low level for what it does, and besides that it seems way to effective. It general turns one of his downsides, berserkers in games tend to be pure damage, in that he is effected by status debuffs.

His history could be buffed up more. There's not much on the character itself just a very brief description of what he's done.
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Yeah I didn't really know what to put the ring as since it's classed as unknown on the overlord wiki. It's only been used once in...the novel or manga by Nabe. I'll see what I can do about the character bio but he's an average player. Not a top one like /touch Me or Momonga :p
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Momonga's build is actually only top average build. He's just really smart, and a P2W player. According to the wiki Momonga got rekt by min-max players.
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Ah, a cash shop junkie. Well...hopefully character is done now, modified him. I honestly don't really know what else to put in the backstory x.x that's always my hardest part...
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As I said remove ring of binding, and I'll allow it. Negating all paralyzing, and stun attacks is a bit much especially on a pure damage build. @Kazemitsu
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It only removes snares, paralyzing, and movement impairing effects but alrighty.
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paralyzing is a general effect. If a striker hitting a pressure point is considered paralysis in the same way a mage casting 'stun enemy' is paralysis. The difference is the striker/monk is using a physical part of the body to do so, and the caster is using magic. Snares, and traps are a generalist rogue thing. And Movement Impairment is general. A person casting a freeze spell on your leg is movement impairment in the same way getting poisoned and being sluggish afterward is.
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But stuns are in fact different from paralyzing effects. Paralyze is your body can't move whereas a stun is...your brain just got jumbled and you're trying to collect yourself. Don't wanna argue about it though, I fixed what ya wanted.
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Alright then I don't see anything wrong further with the character so I'll accept it.
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While we're waiting on reflection to finish I've made the first IC post

@Kazemitsu@Marquise@Spiritzer@Lord Zee

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I would say that it would be better off if Ivan, the guy who got Grey into it, got her into the game by insistence. I don't think real life Grey would had the motivation to bug her until she played.

Silence should be a single targeter not an AOE i think.

I'm not sure if the titular witch blade is worthy of being denoted as a divine status weapon but I'll let it pass.

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I would say that it would be better off if Ivan, the guy who got Grey into it, got her into the game by insistence. I don't think real life Grey would had the motivation to bug her until she played.

Silence should be a single targeter not an AOE i think.

I'm not sure if the titular witch blade is worthy of being denoted as a divine status weapon but I'll let it pass.

@Reflection


I gave it a bunch of powers at the start, but I cut them down a bit, since I felt giving it too many powers would be unreasonable. So I might drop it down a rank.
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My app may take a few days longer due to moving. Mostly on mobile right now.
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@Lucius Cypher I've been considering closing down applications (at least for the moment) just to let you know Mister Cypher I apologize to say so but I'm going to give it a day, or two before deciding. I think the group is solid as it is but I am also willing to consider my options on the matter.
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@vancexentan I made Silence into a single target spell, but decreased the cooldown just a tad. Since 30 minutes was probably too heavy for a single target spell.
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Alright that's fair enough unless anyone objects to it I'll accept the character. @Reflection
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@vancexentan

Understandable, I do have a considerable amount of the CS finished, I’m mostly just ironing out the class and skills due to being a high level character, also due to some complexity to the character itself. I hope I can make the cut.
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Just to remind everyone NPC's can't talk in Ygdrasil Ainz/Momonga is surprised to see Albedo talking to him initially. It'd just be an npc using a speech bubble, or maybe just a notice on a message board.
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