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Suddenly, I have the urge to make Hinami be a not-so-distant descendant of Siduri, just to explain why she was compatible with Gil.
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Still pretty distant. :P
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Nanako is struggling with trying to build a relationship with her new Servant and also keeping her legs from killing people.
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Those are some killer legs.

I'll be here all night.
I'll probably have another post up soon, I have that essay, but if anyone wants to meet up with Serene and Da Vinci, holler. Haven't decided if the place Serene is at is near the corner store the bulk of interactions are at, or if its another store she meant.

I dunno.
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reminder that Melt's legs are actually her 'heels' and she has normal legs beneath them



Work great for health and safety.

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@1Charak2Uh... It's literally a big part of her character that those are her actual legs.

The same with Passionlip and her giant claws.
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@1Charak2 Also Melt has no feeling in her hands.

She's an asshole but kind of bad luck in that department.
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Melt is effectively a quadruple amputee and Passionlip can't perceive her own body as abnormal.

The Sakura Five have problems.
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Again, I'll reinforce my statement that BB is trying to make a version of Katawa Shoujo were all possible love interests are Sakura. There can't be any other reason.
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PS: It's actually pretty easy to see that Melt's legs ends just a little bellow the knee in the official Wada Arco illustrations from CCC. Which are best left in a link rather than image, considering Melt's "chaste and ladylike" outfit:

https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Meltlilith?file=Meltpunishment.jpg
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@clanjos: Okay, comments time.

I think my only real concern is, as usual, the size of that third NP. I want a sense of scale, first and foremost.
Rest looks fine, really.
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I figured something around 20 city blocks if it was manifested all at once. But I don't know if he'd do that, unless the city really needed a chunk of gold real estate.
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@clanjos: Y'know what? Let's go for it. Full usage of all that real estate, which puts an implicit limit on it going full Lagann. Accepted.
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Didn't we already have problems with people apping broken mind control skills a couple pages ago in the OOC?
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Yes, that we did. My verdict on the matter stands.

My co-GM can probably lay out problems with the form on a more conceptual level (I'm more suited towards examining things rooted in east Asian history), but yeah, form's deffo rejected.
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@LukasVolkov: Okay so...

To begin with, you made a Saber and barely mentioned her skill with a sword. Which, notably, was extremely high: She was a duelist who most notably fought off multiple men in one of her most famous duels.

You inexplicably give her the ability to breath fire rather then give her any kind of sword skill or anything of that nature as a Noble Phantasm. You don't even reference the famous incident where she set a fire in a church to run off with one of her female lovers who had been forced to become a nun, which seems like a natural inspiration for a Noble Phantasm.

Her skills are barely related to her story aside from "was very well-known". The Duelist Focus skill actually contradicts one of her most notable fencing exploits.

PKMN already covered the problem with the mind control skill.

I'm sorry if this comes across as sort of harsh, but La Maupin is a really interesting historical figure and you've not really done a good job converting her into a Servant or in making a Saber-class Servant in general.

The current NPs need to be scrapped. She should really have some sort of sword skill, something like some of the Japanese Servants have, mentioned there. Perhaps something related to combining fencing and performance. And an NP related to the convent burning seems like a natural choice given what a notable part of her life it was. The Skills need a complete rewrite.
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There is a single official CG in that shows Meltilith with legs going all the way down to just below the knee

Its Called Melts Punishment. It has the most awkward posing so Im not gonna post it here.

(edit I checked it goes below the knee and then seems to just be covered by up by the metal, so at most shes a below the knee Plegic)
So...

She has alot of actual leg all the same. Just thought people should know just how much 'organic' leg mass melt has.

(also turns out the legs are detachable so like... invest in some prothestics)

Meaning Ironically in that fanart image I shown, The Boots begin exactly where 'normal' organic legs end. Which means Melt can wear different high-length Shoes as long as they double up as prothestic legs

TLDR: Melt can wear different shoes as long as they go to just below the knee in terms of length and double up as prothestic limbs

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@1Charak2: She's still missing almost her entire leg below the knee, and it's important to her character that she is. ^^; She kind of needs prosthetic legs.

Also the picture you're talking about was posted earlier to show her legs end pretty high up. ... Also if you look at how her legs are designed, there's no room for feet or lower leg in them.

... Also prosthetics were literally being bought in my last post, which is part of the process of making sure Melt's original prosthetics don't kill people. ^^;
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I know I was just saying she can change legs.. from knives to normal

Which was my entire point.

(that and her knee exists which means she has organic knee bending thank god)

So to quote myself from earlier with the small semantic error corrected

reminder that Melt's legs are actually her 'heels' and she has normal legs (that end just below the knee) beneath them

TLDR: I made the most minor of semantics when it came to sentence structure and birthed an arguement out of something I knew the truth about already, when all I wanted to do was offer a good melt fanart and join in.

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