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@AwesomeZero5: Hm... Okay, let me see here.

Well, there's a few problems with that posited premise—mainly that the RP takes place in 2034, and that Rifts appeared in 2024. Using that date as a basis, the character would have to have been... 30 in 2024? And have been to college from 2012 to 2016, I'd guess...? Hm.
Yeah, honestly, I'm not exactly buying it. While I don't think it's unthinkable that the US did some secret science-y shit during WWI-Cold War era (hell, I think most nations were), I still think you could find a different excuse that might work better in lieu of that. A forced retirement is fine, but political conspiracy isn't exactly a theme I want to tackle all too extensively in the RP (at least, not as far as you might be expecting).

As for the second point... Logically, I could see a person being unable to relax after having had to live more or less their entire lives in paranoia about what might be lurking around the corner, but to be so broken to the point where you must be in a combat scenario... It feels slightly off to me, and I'm not quite sure why. It might be better to shift towards more behavioral tendencies developed as a result of these decades of living through hell, in my opinion? Rather than "the only place I can go in order to stay calm", maybe... "The only place where I have left to go"? I dunno, just giving suggestions.
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@PKMNB0Y

'Aight here we are. Skimped a bit on the history I feel but my migraine's gotten a bit worse so eh. I'll fix anything I need later.
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@Rune_Alchemist: Accepted.
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@Rune_Alchemist First thing I thought when I saw her was that she looked like a human Umbreon, good thing I'm going to bed soon
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If you don't mind me asking @PKMNB0Y, what do you think about my character sheet?
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Ah. Was kinda tired for some reason and half forgot.
@Lugubrious: Accepted. Though, uh... It's kinda weird to have ties to another group while travelling with this crew, but idk. We'll see.
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@AwesomeZero5:... Mmm, yeah, sorry. As much as the concept intrigued me initially, being left with 'detachment' and 'raw aggression' are pushing me towards a decline for now.

Actually, speaking of declines...
@Sanity43217: Sorry, upon a bit of rumination I've decided that the RP, with people having planned entry already beforehead, will be full from here on. Denied by capacity.

In any case... Yeah. The only people I'll accept forms from now are @SquishStar45 and @Rin. Changing the RP to closed; we'll be starting in a short while.
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@SquishStar45: Accepted.

It's likely we'll start later tonight, so be prepared.
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@PKMNB0Y I'm gonna have to bow out of this RP.

I'm so sorry. I didn't think I'd have this much trouble finding time to write since summer started, but I was wrong. Real life really sucks sometimes. I'll probably keep reading, but I don't want to hold you guys back anymore.

Feel free to kill Kay off or just have her get lost in the rift or something. and again, I'm really sorry I waited so long before dropping.
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I dropped in to ask if there's any spots open for another character? I know it says full but I do wanna ask just in case
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