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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Techne
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After some futzing about I think I have a workable outline of a lovable if troubled scamp of a slicer. I'm currently in the midst of packing for my last year of undergrad, but I'll try and get something up for you soon!
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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Zoey Boey
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@Torack Hello Torack! It's me, the co-gm.

The RP takes place 3 months after the battle of Endor, the Empire is still very much around and the First Order won't rise for a very long time. This probably changes the personal timeline of your character a lot. Her story might make more sense if you mentioned the Empire withdrawing completely from her planet for one reason or another. But there is no First Order and the Empire she once served in is still very much around.

Cool character though, being a traitor to the empire is a neat concept but her timeline is kind of out of whack. If you want, please make some changes and we can get her in the RP!
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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Zarkun
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I still lurk, I'm just multi-tasking working on a CS for this, adjusting my CS for the PG and GMing. Sorry for my delay folks.
Hidden 5 yrs ago → 5 yrs ago Post by Torack
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Fair enough! I'll make those changes ASAP!

EDIT: got it done!
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Hidden 5 yrs ago → 5 yrs ago Post by Lord Greshh
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@Zarkun, my friend. I would love to have you joining us. But If you are too busy to commit right now, I understand.
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by ButtsnBalls
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Several more changes, @Torack:

Since Arosha is 31 years old, she would've grown up during the final years of the Republic, and been taught pro-Republic, instead of Pro-Empire, philosophies. Besides adjusting this, I'd like to see her reflect on the difference between Republic and Imperial eras. Arosha likely advised her senator in the Imperial Senate, near to the point of its disbandment.

The last paragraph of Outlook and Motivation still mentions the First Order; switch it out for Imperial Remnants.

Since Arosha is a newcomer to Scarlet Moons, a senior enlisted rank like sergeant is unlikely. Her accomplishments would earn her a commission as lieutenant, if she provided the credentials. Otherwise, she would be a specialist.
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I still lurk, I'm just multi-tasking working on a CS for this, adjusting my CS for the PG and GMing. Sorry for my delay folks.


No problem; take all the time you need.
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Torack
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Fixed all the stuff you told me about! I left out her reflections on the differences between republic and imperial era as I thought it'd be a lot more interesting exploring that IC-ly and her struggles of not seeing the despot nature of Palpatine and the guilt of being part of the system that enabled him.
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Fixed all the stuff you told me about! I left out her reflections on the differences between republic and imperial era as I thought it'd be a lot more interesting exploring that IC-ly and her struggles of not seeing the despot nature of Palpatine and the guilt of being part of the system that enabled him.


Excellent. I'm excited to see you explore the depth of your character.

Arosha is approved.


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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by ButtsnBalls
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Alright guys, we'll start once we get two more characters in.
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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Lord Greshh
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Alright guys, we'll start once we get two more characters in.


I can’t wait to finally get going! This is going to be great fun, I just know it.
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I can’t wait to finally get going! This is going to be great fun, I just know it.



Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Zarkun
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So has anyone requested to be the lone human in the RP yet?
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Not yet, @Zarkun.
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by frapet
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Hi there,

I'd love to join, great fan of the system. Still got a spot?
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There's still room, @frapet.
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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by ButtsnBalls
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Would you like to join us, @Boss Kermit?
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Would you like to join us, @Boss Kermit?


Not a chance.
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Not a chance.


So be it... frog.
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