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@Nallore approved, move her over and I'll see about bringing her in next update
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Yay. :)
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Okay, so few things...

  • Her age is off, have her born in 1998 and it'll be fixed (since currently we are at the very beginning of 2018)
  • Skills wise, should just be labelled as Self-Defense and Basic Firearms.
  • Personal style is meant to be a few sentences, not just one. It can be about the different types of clothes they tend to wear, how they do their hair, things like that.
  • Of course need to finish up with the history section


That's all! Tagged me once you've finished the CS, we'll be glad to have you!
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Okay, so few things...

  • Her age is off, have her born in 1998 and it'll be fixed (since currently we are at the very beginning of 2018)
  • Skills wise, should just be labelled as Self-Defense and Basic Firearms.
  • Personal style is meant to be a few sentences, not just one. It can be about the different types of clothes they tend to wear, how they do their hair, things like that.
  • Of course need to finish up with the history section


That's all! Tagged me once you've finished the CS, we'll be glad to have you!


  • if we're in december of 2017, nov 23rd 1999 would mean she had just turned 18 last month. I genuinely hope that doesn't come off rudely, truly not my intention. I might honestly be wrong, I am pretty sick currently. But if you wouldn't mind checking the date again to double check so we're both on the same page I will happily take your recommendation.
  • Will adjust accordingly. :)
  • Ohh! I am terribly sorry. I thought you were going for a little like "sound byte synopsis" of their style. I will fix that once I get back to it to finish the history section! <3
  • Can't wait! I have all that info kinda cliff-noted in my head currently so once I have the time to sit down and write it up I will. <3 ^-^
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Ack, sorry about that age thing, my brain isn't wanting to work half the time, you're fine.
Also actually IC we've jumped to being in January 2018.
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Looks good to me. Move him on over I'll be bringing in all new characters in the next update
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Thanks for the acceptance!
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Ok, just one thing I can really see...
Who is she apprenticed to? It says she's an apprentice to?
If you mean that she's still learning to be a sorcerer and still learning magic, just put sorcerer and then in parenthesis or something that she's still learning to make things a little easier to read.

Other then that she's good to move over!
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Ok, just one thing I can really see...
Who is she apprenticed to? It says she's an apprentice to?
If you mean that she's still learning to be a sorcerer and still learning magic, just put sorcerer and then in parenthesis or something that she's still learning to make things a little easier to read.

Other then that she's good to move over!


Oh, I was more referencing level of skill than position :P

While she has become nearly masterful of what she has learned from her Book she knows (or rather has a strong belief) there is so much more out there that magic can do that she's simply not learned/experienced yet. She has a large understanding of magic and magic-theory though simply hasn't had the opportunity to learn from a Master or Find the books she would need to implement her knowledge of the practice.

Her knowledge of Magic primarily resides in Runecrafting and implementation. The book taught her a few spells outside of Runes though minimally in comparison. She has an extreme desire to learn more practical magic.

Will adjust accordingly :)
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I am interested in this roleplay, Would their be room for one more? I was thinking about making a hero with weapon creation powers that also has multiple personalities?
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Hi there, I'm glad to see that you are interested!
However, I don't think this RP would be a good fit for you, considering your application to one of our RPs in the past.
Not to mention someone with multiple personalities just would not fit in this RP and likely never would have gotten hired by a corporation who created the team for publicity. Someone like that is way to unpredictable for this sort of thing at all.
Best of luck to you in the future though!
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He's good to go, move him on over
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Hello, everyone! Here is Elara a.k.a. Vertigo/Mirage



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Only problem I can see is that her age is off by one year (the RP is in the beginning of 2018, she would have just turned 23 at the end of 2017)

Fix that by either switching her birthday to be in 1993 or switch her age to 23.

Other then that you are good to move her over and you can bring her in since I just updated (she'll be with the group in the conference room)
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