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All right. I‘m thinking about Martin of Tours as Rider of Black, if that works.
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@samakama: I don't see why he wouldn't, there's a lot of material to work with.
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  • Name: Charname Avilone
  • Age: 24
  • Gender: Female
  • Appearance: Beware the quiet ones. The glasses are, in fact, normal glasses… though given the nature of her employment, blocking mystic eyes also became a necessary backup.
  • Personality: Charname isn’t a terribly confident person in some regards, particularly not socially, but nor is she excessively shy. In the end, though, she would be happier in the stressful situations that most people avoid, where her skills and upbringing are of more use—rather than having to make conversation over things that simply don’t matter.
    Her opinion on maids is a conflicted one. On the one hand, she likes the look and would join Erika in appreciating them… on the other hand, she very much does not like being dressed as a maid and wishes she could have some more intimidating attire. This might explain why she stands up to her boss where she would silently accept other people.
  • Skills: Despite her employment, Charname lacks the abilities of a maid. Cleaning? An excellent way to get something broken or parts overlooked. Cooking? She can determine if your food has been tampered with but not actually cook something herself, in which case poison is the expected result. The real bulk of her skills are hand-to-hand skills, with a particular focus on knives as both useful where magecraft is concerned and simply for dealing with threats, but experience with other weapons as well. Quite unbecoming for a magus, she doesn’t scorn the use of firearms—depending on the situation, quite anything could be of use.
  • Abilities: Despite their lack of interest in the conceptual possibilities of magecraft, the Avilone have had through the generations a strong desire to perfect the practical use of such things for their own needs. For instance, their approach towards Bounded Fields is peculiar; rather than focus on grand defences and territory, it is one of “what is most useful on the individual scale”. For instance, what is the distinction between delineating inside and outside on clothing rather than buildings? Even in part, buildings will move, and that within them switch about. A narrow loophole that, through sheer pedantry, allowed for establishing bounded fields on their attire. In Charname’s case, this gives her deep pockets. Very deep pockets; every implement or weapon that she feels might be reasonably useful on her person, at once.
    Her preference for using knives follows a similar route, a brief field established by carving runes is an excellent emergency barrier, or trap. Of course, even the non-bounded field uses are useful… as are rune-based curses like Gandr.
    Given the amount of armament both physical and metaphysical that Charname carries, it should be no surprise that part of her contract—one not even necessarily stated to her owner—includes a particular geas: if she should need to give her life then it will be done, regardless of her possible thoughts on the matter. For this reason, self-sacrificial techniques are also within her abilities.
  • Brief Backstory: The Avilone family is one with no interest in reaching the Root, no grand history or lineage to draw on. They are a lineage who took one look at the wealthy, established magus families and came to the conclusion: the best way to prosper is to attach ourselves to them. Thus, for generations the main line has itself provided protection to the Maidandora and trained their heir as such. That which would not be of use in their chosen role and hangers-on to luxury was ignored.
    The demand that she be employed as a maid was quite the insult to Charname’s pride, even if there was no escaping the requirement.
  • Faction: Mage Association


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@Raineh Daze: Accepted.
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Nero's pairing with Erika and Charname with Nightingale.
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@samakama: Hey, need a chance to talk to my CO-GMs before I pass judgement.

@Raineh Daze: Alright updating list.

For everyone else, the RP is slated to start this coming week if possible!
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@samakama: Okay, the big issue I see here is there's really nothing making him a Rider. The sort of quintessential Rider is a Servant who is personally not particularly strong but has multiple NPs, one of which is related to something they rode.

He doesn't really have that.

Give him something like that.
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@VitaVitaAR Added two more NPs. Let me know if any more changes are needed.
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@samakama: Hmmm... Honestly, he's still kind of underwelming. While I wouldn't recommend making his hammer NP stronger and I don't like Noble Phantasms that specifically function by destroying/permanently disabling other Servant's NPs.

But aside from that, Riders are defined by personally not being that powerful but having multiple strong NPs. Try using his history as a basis and really boost up his horse or something, think about what canon Riders can do.
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For everyone still working on a character: I'm going to be starting this RP this coming Friday!
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Hey, sorry for the triple post, but since it looks like we'll have some NPC Servants, would everyone like to see what we have in mind?

I figure it's probably for the best to keep discussion going.

Additionally, given the fact the RP's start is incoming, we also need to solve the potential issue of lacking Master numbers on Black Team, which I honestly hadn't anticipated.
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@Heavy Snark Yo, would you like to make a first post with Archer? Due to some time constraints irl I had to get just a quick post up tonight for my servant.
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@samakama: Sorry for the delay, in light of our conversations over PMs, accepted.
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