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Come to think of it, Hasta is literally on top of (or right next to) Paris. Sure, most of humanity's cities got wiped off the map and the Sanctum cities were built to house people, but it would be hilarious (and yet heartwarming) to see the City of Lights not only survive the apocalypse, but thrive (even if they changed the name for some reason).
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OK ok ok, I wasn't happy with my first Minako pass either. I made another one, let me know what you think.

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Name: Jenny Malone

Age: 17

Sanctum City: Bellanum

Description: Five foot nothing and 100 lb. soaking wet, Jenny doesn't exactly cut a heroic figure. Her red hair falls in a waterfall to her shoulders. Her clothing is usually in loud colors, far past tasteful but just short of obnoxious.

Personality: Jenny can summed up in three words: Over. The. Top. Everything she does, she does big. She is steadfast and loyal, but has a raging temper- her childhood nickname was Strawberry Shortfuse for a reason. She enjoys athletics and can often be found in the gym or out on the track.

Bio: Life ain't easy in Bellanum. Situated in the frozen middle of nowhere, at times it seems like nature is a bigger enemy than any void. Jenny's family wasn't well off, but they did what they could to spoil their only child absolutely rotten. She grew up playing basketball and soccer, and got quite a bit of attention for her skills on the field, even if her grades were less than stellar.

The problem with living in what used to be Canada is that if something goes wrong with your heater during the winter, you need to find a place to go, quick. As they piled on the blankets and headed for her grandmother's, a shivering Jenny just wished she could be warm again, and a little fire appeared in her hand. That was when she knew.

The Magical:

Armagus Name: Blazing Crimson Ruby

Armagus Description: A 3 foot, basket-hilted rapier. When she draws it, it transmutes into flame from tip to hilt.

Parma: Her physical features don't change, only her outfit- but what a change! Gleaming white boots and gloves, a short red skirt, white top, white cape with emblem of a silver heart containing red flames, and a gold tiara with a ruby.

Elementum: Fire

Elementum abilities: Jenny is the queen of heat and flame. Fireballs, walls of flame for area denial, beams of heat- all are within her domain. She can even breathe fire like a dragon for extra style points.
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Glad to see submissions coming in! I'm thinking I'll let recruitment continue for this coming week and then we can see about getting started.

Edit: I'll get a look at the ones just recently posted/reposted in a few hours!

Character Sheet up!



Penny seems good! The only thing I should note is that magical weapons generally manifest as part of your transformation.

That said I think I'd be fine making an exception and letting Penny using Grand Eisen as her weapon. It'd just be that it becomes far more effective in her transformed state. Untransformed she could still use it to help her channel her magic, but she'd run out of juice pretty quickly.


Also looking good!

Various answers:

@Inedible just for the record, what exactly are the Six that founded the NOI? Separate entity from the Duodecim, right?

Whoops, that's from an old draft. It should be the Twelve, who the Duodecim families consider their originators. I'll fix it!

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How fleshed out are the individual sanctums in your view of the universe? Reason I ask is primarily wondering how much freedom/lewee we have to shape the sanctums when drafting a character, assuming of course nothing is contradictory to what someone else has already done.

EDIT: Also are we allowed to have characters that are a part of a Duodecim family?

It's perfectly fine if you want to make up some details about whatever city you choose.

Likewise you can also be from a Duodecim family and make up details about them.

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What are the names of the Jupiter cities? I'm not sure if they were left off or if I'm just not able to read them on that map

I forgot to name them! I've fixed the map, they are now respectively Danaster (North) and Norba (South).

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Penny seems good! The only thing I should note is that magical weapons generally manifest as part of your transformation.

That said I think I'd be fine making an exception and letting Penny using Grand Eisen as her weapon. It'd just be that it becomes far more effective in her transformed state. Untransformed she could still use it to help her channel her magic, but she'd run out of juice pretty quickly.

I had re-read the setting and tried to edit that part out. Basically, it manifests like any other Gladius now. If I missed a part of the background and didn't edit that part out, point out where; I knew I forgot something.
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It's perfectly fine if you want to make up some details about whatever city you choose.

Likewise you can also be from a Duodecim family and make up details about them.


Perfect, should have the CS up either tonight or tomorrow.

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Second Pass, hopefully, I've caught everything this time.


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Re-write for Penny looks good, don't see anything that needs to be changed there.

OK ok ok, I wasn't happy with my first Minako pass either. I made another one, let me know what you think.


I think this works better, yep.


This all looks pretty good as well!
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You know what, call me interested. Are the entirety of the Sanctum Cities urban, or do the fields cover some less-developed terrain such as, for example, very forested mountains?
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Re-write for Penny looks good, don't see anything that needs to be changed there.

Great! Will upload her CS sometime tomorrow or the day after.
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Hopefully this works and doesn't step on any toes, especially for the people who are still writing their CSs.




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oh no
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There we go.

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Still waiting for a verdict on my girl.
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Whew, we've got a lot of magical girls. I'm probably not going to be able to take everyone, but I like all the submissions so far.

I'm going to walk back my earlier statement and close a bit earlier than planned. All submissions will be due by Wednesday the 14th. I'll pick 4-5 from that group.

That said, on to the ones I've missed so far:


Sorry I missed this the first time, this looks good to me.

There we go.


Another fire user! That's fine, and this looks good.


I figured we'd get a noble or two, so that's good. Aether isn't an element I expected, but I think it'll work. I like it!


Hopefully this works and doesn't step on any toes, especially for the people who are still writing their CSs.




And here's the other noble. This also looks pretty good, nothing to correct.
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You know what, call me interested. Are the entirety of the Sanctum Cities urban, or do the fields cover some less-developed terrain such as, for example, very forested mountains?

I missed this question too, my bad. To answer: Mostly urban. There's some agriculture on the ring, but it's not really 'countryside'. Most of the available land is used and built on, so no very forested areas.
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