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@Steel Legion If you like, hop in the discord so your idea can be discussed further :)
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Barbary Free State of Bessaruga

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Name of your Nation: the nergai mind swarm

Type of Government: perma brain monarchy (monarchy but with immortal monarch to balance it out if the king dies due to outside influences the nation immediately falls apart)

Demographics & Population: 2.0 million-200,000 mind flayers 1 elder brain and 1.8 million

Governance & Politics: there is no real independence here the only independence is the elder brain the mind flayers below all serve him if they dont have constant psychic connection they die and thus serve him though they do fight eachother for lands like your average noble but below them are hordes and hordes of deep ones with no minds and serve all that is above them

Culture & Society: the mind flayers are egomaniacal mastermind narcissists they serve the elder brain fully and use armys of deep ones to increase their power they usually fight eachother in "tentacle duels" which may end in one eating the others brain the deep ones have no culture they only do things to serve their masters though they do fight eachother sometimes for mates

Magic & Technology: the elder brain is an elder scion from space he has the power to create "mind poles" which can be used to turn humanoids into mindflayers each and every creature in the swarm all have a psychic connection to him and while every mindflayer is at least an average psychic the elder brain is one of the best in the worlds the swarm also has the ability to create flesh towers which may be used to increase his influence and psychic range

Military Overview: one word: swarm the main bulk of the armys are weaklings and mind flayers are too valuable to be put on the front line so about 3 or 4 mindflayers following orders directly from the elder brain have the deep ones attempt to surround flank and generally disorganize the enemy trying to get them to surrender allowing for them to get many new deep ones and possibly mindflayers
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Interesting... I'm into it. It gives me Star Wars Night Sister vibes.
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Fourth Bessarugan Republic

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Fourth Bessarugan Republic







I dunno how active I can be, but I really enjoy thinking up little nation states, so I figured I'd join in the fun. I'll do my best to participate regularly.



Still here for it!



I believe these are all the sheets that have been pending for a while. I find no overarching problems with your sheets and I believe the territorial out of game have been settled. So without further ado, you're all approved.
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I’ll be bowing out. Thank you.
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Where are your folk based out of? Your app gives no indication of the Forsaken being nomadic, yet you provide no indication of where their territory is.
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@Jeddaven Ah, yes. I knew I forgot to claim some land. Sorry about that, adding now.

Edit : Done.
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@Jeddaven Ah, yes. I knew I forgot to claim some land. Sorry about that, adding now.

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Ok, as discussed on the discord, we'llneed you to correct your map claim

Can you also explain what ZF is and what ghouls are in your app? These seem to be major parts of your society that haven'treally been expanded on.

Edit: in general, I'd ask that you give your app a second pass and seriously expand on it. There's a lot that's not thoroughly explained. Forsaken diet (do they only need radiation? Do they need both radiation and standard nutrition? Do they hunt for purely cultural reasons?), ZF, what ghouls even are, etc
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@Liotrent@Jeddaven It is done. Well, mostly complete anyways. The flag and image of the colony's location are things I want to add to it sooner or later!

Also is not meant to be some invincible undead nation. Undead can get blown apart and living lives lost, etc. Just because I overthink and worry. I just wanted to add fun flavor for the undead and such. Hopefully no one else has tried to do undead? Maybe? Eh, anywho... (@_@)


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@Liotrent@Jeddaven So I never got to the edits on the other app, and it got so overcomplicated at concept I just went "blargh". So here, because I am not changing again cause my brain hurts, the final. Final. FINAL. App.

Just tell me what I need to edit or change, if anything! :D


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