1 Guest viewing this page
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Nallore
Raw
Avatar of Nallore

Nallore RPG's Grope Master & Taco Hunter. :P

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

@Morose Edits made for you bosslady. :)
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Morose
Raw
GM
Avatar of Morose

Morose ✨Krakoan Princess✨

Member Seen 23 hrs ago

@Nallore Looks good, move 'em over!

@Trainerblue192 I'm assuming the last two items in your possessions list you meant to put a * next to? Otherwise looks good, move him over!
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Achronum
Raw
Avatar of Achronum

Achronum The Pyro

Member Seen 3 hrs ago

@Morose

Okay I added in his medication, updated the ability, and definitely slid in one of those portable electric stoves stoves.

And it definitely makes sense James and Casper made the call to have him start a little later, good point!
1x Like Like
Hidden 2 yrs ago 2 yrs ago Post by PatientBean
Raw
Avatar of PatientBean

PatientBean Hi, I'm Barbie. What's up?

Member Seen 3 hrs ago

Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Morose
Raw
GM
Avatar of Morose

Morose ✨Krakoan Princess✨

Member Seen 23 hrs ago

@PatientBean Will take a look after work! :)
1x Thank Thank
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Martian
Raw
Avatar of Martian

Martian Possibly a mage

Member Seen 1 yr ago

@Morose
Alright I've decided to go with him just being a Dire Wraith, as that is the most fleshed out concept I have in my mind. Perhaps I'll save the illegitimate demigod or Northstar's adopted kid for another RP. Anyways, I'll start working on my character sheet.
1x Like Like
Hidden 2 yrs ago 2 yrs ago Post by Forsythe
Raw
Avatar of Forsythe

Forsythe Graf von Kaffeetrinken

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

Alrite, take two:
- Changed Stark relation to van Dyne. Unsure what you want to do with Cassie Lang, but I suppose they'd be very familiar with each other
- Noticed I used the same color as as April. Ups.
- Added the personality and history sections


Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Morose
Raw
GM
Avatar of Morose

Morose ✨Krakoan Princess✨

Member Seen 23 hrs ago

@Martian Alright sounds good! Blue is planning on doing a New Mutants RP one day, a kid of Northstar might be a good fit there.

@Forsythe Great! Here are my notes -
  • I think the thing where you hover over and see the truth is cool, but I almost wonder if it would be easier on you to do just Fake Info (Real Info) - i.e., Shieldmaiden (ASTRA). Just since it's no doubt a lot of coding lol. And I have no idea how it might look on a phone.
  • What's in her personal workshop?
  • The survival rations in the backpack does make me wonder - does she eat? If she eats, does she get energy from food? Or is it all for show? (no need for an edit here, I'm just curious lol)
  • lmaooo on the comic Visions bit... I'm guessing you read King's Vision series, with the family? Such a good comic. And outside of that one comic, I never really care - except Viv is cool. Think she's showing up in next issue of Scarlet Witch actually! Anyways, the note I have here is that Vision and Wanda's kids, Billy and Tommy, will be NPCs in the RP as well. Tho I've simplified the lore, so they were never made into demon hand puppets and adsorbed, no retro-reincarnation, they're just their kids.


Overall, I really like her! I think her and Cassie would be super close, and Cassie would see her as her sister as well. The notes I gave above, you are welcome to make edits relating to them, but that's all optional. Go ahead and move her over - I will PM you with the information for getting access to our backup forum, Skyrose, where we copy our IC posts over in case RPG dies on us lol. And of course our discord!

@PatientBean Okay looking at her now! :)

  • I notice you have car keys in your possessions - do you want to add in the car as a possession, and put two asterisks next to it? She can keep it in the campus parking lot or something.
  • I love her powers! She gives me the chills to read about :)
  • Missing one thing under the anything else - I'll give you a hint, there's two spots in the rules that ask for things ;)


Tag me once you've found that other thing for the anything else, and let me know if you decide to edit in the car. Otherwise, she looks great :)
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by PatientBean
Raw
Avatar of PatientBean

PatientBean Hi, I'm Barbie. What's up?

Member Seen 3 hrs ago

@Morose I believe I did as you have asked
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Morose
Raw
GM
Avatar of Morose

Morose ✨Krakoan Princess✨

Member Seen 23 hrs ago

@PatientBean Looks great, move her on over!!!
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Forsythe
Raw
Avatar of Forsythe

Forsythe Graf von Kaffeetrinken

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

I believe I've seen the visions's story in the Champions actually, when Viv had her thing with the high evolutionary. But yeah, Mom Vision especially gives me the chills.

The workshop is where Victoria would store and maintain her gear. There'd be tools to fabricate parts and electronics, probably via 3D printing because 2038.

The medkit and rations she carries around are her thinking of the others, should there be a need. ASTRA has no need for food and can't get energy or material from it, although she can fake eating if needed.

I'll polish stuff and move it over after work (GMT+1 timezone here)
1x Like Like
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Morose
Raw
GM
Avatar of Morose

Morose ✨Krakoan Princess✨

Member Seen 23 hrs ago

@Forsythe Alright, sounds good! I think just add the description of what's roughly in her workshop - Pym lives in the area so she probably can have it be at Pym Tech.
Hidden 2 yrs ago 2 yrs ago Post by Ever Faithful
Raw
Avatar of Ever Faithful

Ever Faithful Will always be Ever Faithful

Member Seen 1 hr ago



Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Morose
Raw
GM
Avatar of Morose

Morose ✨Krakoan Princess✨

Member Seen 23 hrs ago

@Ever Faithful Hey there! So we actually already have someone with that power set in this RP - could you switch to a different concept? Thanks!
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Martian
Raw
Avatar of Martian

Martian Possibly a mage

Member Seen 1 yr ago

@Morose
Alright finished my character sheet. Let me know if anything needs changing.

Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Ever Faithful
Raw
Avatar of Ever Faithful

Ever Faithful Will always be Ever Faithful

Member Seen 1 hr ago

Already another pyro? I must have overlooked it earlier
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Forsythe
Raw
Avatar of Forsythe

Forsythe Graf von Kaffeetrinken

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

I mean, is it bad tho? Could make for a fun to read rivalry :D
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Morose
Raw
GM
Avatar of Morose

Morose ✨Krakoan Princess✨

Member Seen 23 hrs ago

@Ever Faithful Yup, Danny Kingston is a pyro.

@Martian Will look him over after work!
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Ever Faithful
Raw
Avatar of Ever Faithful

Ever Faithful Will always be Ever Faithful

Member Seen 1 hr ago

I wonder what else I can do if not pyro
Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Nallore
Raw
Avatar of Nallore

Nallore RPG's Grope Master & Taco Hunter. :P

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

↑ Top
1 Guest viewing this page
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet