@Mas Bagus Thank you. ^_^ I look forward to your in-depth review later then.
Will have my character either late tonight or tomorrow <3
Personally I am leaning more towards the number 2 actually. But as far as his backstory is concerned, if my understanding is correct that his hometown is inside the land of Twilight, I realized that it will be a bit conflicted with the Land of Twilight's cataclysmic history that has already began since 1000 years ago.
No? Then is that means he is an adventurer looking for job and his background is not yet made for the RP setting?
I do have a suggestion that might fit perfectly with the setting and the proposed character's theme.
He, ten years ago was a Westernant knight in training specialized for clandestine ops. For their final training, they were tasked to delve into the land of Twilight and must return with a proof that they have reached Nuria. It ended with a disaster in which only your knight and some of his friends that made it out alive.
Fast forward to the present day, he joined the group not only because it pays handsomely, but also to honor his fallen comrades and finished the task they failed to accomplish ten years ago.
If none of what I've suggested ends up working out, I think I can work with this, yeah.
@Mas Bagus
Can you give a little more info on the Elves? I wanna make an elf! Like, age and maybe the life they kind of have right now; like scattered from each other or what elves would typically be seen doing.
Trying to get an idea of how i want to structure her and having a tiny bit of difficulty since we don't know how elves age, or what really is happening with them other than they think people going to find their homeland are suiciders (lol).
Ahh! Perfect! Sorry I had to have you bring the info sooner, but it greatly helped, and I've aligned my character ironically enough to what you have haha.
Thank you so much.
@Mas Bagus
Okie! Here's the CS for review. The bio isn't that long and I apologize. Lemme know if i need to change anythingName: Roxas
Species: Elf
Age: 173
Gender: Female
Outfit: Usually wears trousers, tunic, belt and capelet for easier travel.
Passives:
- Longbow: Has been trained to create, and shoot her own longbow; is considered a marksmen with it.
- Shortsword: Knows how to wield and properly care for a shortsword.
- Avians: Has an natural affinity to befriend most birds.
Spells:
- Renew: A spell of light to heal minor injuries. It takes few seconds to cast and heals near instant.
- Barrier: A spell to create a dome for defensive means. It depletes mana fast, so used as a last resort or in dire circumstances.
- Marksman: A buff to hone in on a target and make her arrows hit them without fail. Limited to sight or cover.
Mundane Skills:
- Cooking: Can cook most elven and human dishes. Food is described as better than most.
- Medical: Knowns some basic medical procedures like wrapping up wounds or even sewing them up if needed. Can create basic salves to help with pain.
- Survival: Has most survival skills; building a fire, a small hut, tracking, figuring out North, etc.
Equipment:
- Longbow: her own creation, well loved. A beautiful white wood with carved intricacies. Arrows for said bow are either created or bought.
- Quiver: Her quiver is a darker genuine leather, that rests at her hip and holds her arrows, has a few inner sections to keep certain arrows away from each other; poison, radiant, etc.
- Shortsword: bought it from a vendor; it is high quality steel and expertly made. It usually sits at the small or her back.
- Bag: carries a small pack that holds all her every day travel items; rations, tools, medical items, etc. Carries an dagger incase her shortsword is no longer a means.
Bio:
Roxas lived in Alkaustar until she turned around 100. After that, she grew a little tired of the mundane and repetitive life. She wanted to see more of the world. She wandered around, until she saw Vesemir Barandir's pamphlet. Into the Land of the Twilight, the land that once belonged to her people. She didn't know exactly her elven creation, but she knew it was.. big. Perhaps going to Nuria will tell her more about her heritage. Her curiosity became piqued and she made her way to where recruits for the journey would gather.
Other: Finds peace in music; as thus, she leaned to play the flute; to the degree of making her own to play.
Hey there. This looks interesting to me. I'm into the orc archetype, but more of the 'civilized' type. How's the orc civilization doing in this world in general? Depending on the setting, I can choose either a banished orc who intermingled with humans more or a veteran soldier turned adventurer. But of course, I can be flexible beyond it if needed.
Hello, i am interested. brand new to this site and not sure how it all works yet- but i have a human character in mind I would like to use but she has a hoard of artifacts she regularly uses so i would like to know some guidelines regarding artifacts if thats okay
This doth look dope, Mas Bagus. I'm pinning my interest here.
I've been wanting to play a young genius prodigy sort of character, like Mozart, but with all things artificering (basically magical crafting).
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Welcome!
Honestly, the term artificering is new to me and I have no idea how it will be played out in the RP. Does it mean your character combines two magic spells into another incarnation, or they craft items with magical properties?
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The latter, it's a fancy term to describe "magical blacksmith". Two popular franchises that feature them regularly are Dungeons & Dragons and Final Fantasy, perhaps under different terms but the core principle remains the same
For your convenience, here's a link to the D&D version: Link.