My apologies, i jsut tried reworking a character from something that died recently xD I'll make changes accordingly, thx for pointers
lordmidget said
I think Elize's magic is my personal favorite so far, and I look forward to seeing how it'll develop. Only thing I see wrong is "The debt collectors were there, armed with powerful magic" part, 9 years ago there wouldn't be many wizards powerful enough to destroy a town quickly enough before the authorities (Armed with anti-magic weapons) got there. Even if they happened to be some of the few wizards powerful enough back then, they wouldn't be debt collectors.
lordmidget said
Okay, where do I start with John:
1. The magic on the surface seems weak but when you think about it, it's really strong. Something about it needs to change, either it needs to not be able to absorb living things or John needs to be able to only absorb in one area at a time.(Reason being John could redirect an attack and then instantly move his enemy into a pocket dimension, forcing them to break out and be hit by their redirected attack)
2. Mage Hunters aren't actually a thing as murder is still Illegal, magic was just considered evil and people were driven away or scorned when it was found out that they used it. Magic is/was managed by the council (see the main post which is about to be updated for details).
Riaxh said
1. Hmmm I see what you mean. I did mean John to be more of a support-type mage, but I feel like those changes would really limit what he could do. To me it seems that any OPness stems from the pockets of space being an insta hit, so how about we say that the casting time is closely proportional to the size of the space he needs to displace? A person is much bigger than say, an arrow, so that way they should have time to move out of the way if John attempts to trap them (the visual cue would be a blurriness in the air where the spell is being cast at). That would cover the case you mentioned anyway. If there are more that I've missed let me know.
2. I've re-read the intro. I get that the Council oversee magical law enforcement, but still, given how few mages remain (and I'm imagining fewer legal ones) is it not feasible for them to hire non-mages to lighten the workload and help take down criminal mages and such like?
dirkinz said
I was about to go to sleep when I remembered something. We need some help. If you guys could give us a few ideas to start off with for the request board that would be great. We want a big variability in the choice of jobs and we cant make them all ourselves in a reasonable time. Also, for any characters who have been in the guild for an extended amount of time, chances are, you have formed a team to take job requests with. if you guys want to start organizing yourselves as such that would be cool (also, you may add minor NPCs if you need to. Okay, good night for real, haha
Rune_Alchemist said
Morning everyone!~Sounds like you guys could use an antagonist or something. I have just the mage, if you'll let me user her~As for teams, Chloe's been there for a year or two I think. I'll be happy to have her on anyones team~
lordmidget said
1. I'll accept that, unless dirkinz sees a case where it could go wrong and I don't. (Another visual cue would be the magic circle around them)
2. Possibly, but since the council can only really counter mages with magic weapons or other mages, it'd be unlikely as magic weapons weren't exactly easy to get a hold of.
Forsythe said
Ok, done some refurbishing. Addressing the points:
1) Magic changed. I didn't really hope to get away with it but never gonna find out until i try right? :P
2) Oversight on my part, i was removing all mentions f time and places, that one slipped.
3) Changed to her still hiding her past. It would make for an interesting arc if she's eventually rated out :D
Dusk said
Edited Elize's bio :D
Joshua Tamashii said
How's my app lordmidget?
Riaxh said
So to what degree do you need me to rewrite the history? Can I get away with saying that they pursued rogue mages out of personal hate instead of a profession? Or do you want me to stay away from the idea of normal humans going after mages all together?
Rune_Alchemist said
Ah well. I had to ask since I didn't get to use her in the other Fairy Tail RP xP
I'll see if I can come up with some smaller missions and stuff for us to do~