[OOC] Pheonix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP)

[Forsythe]

lordmidget said
Can you just add a brief description (or not so brief if you want) of what each magic does and how good she is at it, then you'll be good to go.

Done. We shall see how this works :)

[Infin1teZer0]

In response to dirkin's review:

1. Awareness alone can now break an illusion. What I'm worried about with this mechanic, however, is the metagame making it useless in a combat setting. The RPer knows it's an illusion, so his/her characters instantly become aware as well. I don't think it will be a major issue, but I feel obliged to at least bring some attention to it.

1 and a Half: I stuck in a footnote saying that more people in an illusion equals less stability in the illusion, making it easier for everyone involved to escape. If one becomes aware, he/she can bail everyone else out. Someone on the outside can also interrupt an illusion. Doing anything like a time limit would just prove to be confusing, since the perception of time can also be messed with, meaning that second could feel like hours, etc.

2. Astaroth is an A-class mage as of right now, but he could be promoted to S-class once the plot deems in necessary/acceptable. I have no issues with this setup.

3. Phoenix Wing's master helping Astaroth further control his magic sounds like a grand idea. I'm all for it.

[lordmidget]

Forsythe said
Done. We shall see how this works :)

Can other people besides Maho be sensed when they are under concealment? If not, they should be able to be sensed, maybe not easily but it should be possible(just allies, you can conceal yourself completely). An invisible opponent is hard enough to deal with, even if you are strong enough to sense them; A completely cloaked mage with strong attack magic has game breaking potential

[Rune_Alchemist]

lordmidget said
Rune you can also PM me your villain and I'll take a look at her and might use her.

Eh, while I appreciate the thought, I really don't like it when people other than me RP my characters.

[Riaxh]

lordmidget said
I guess there be non-mages going after mages, it's just unlikely as they would not be very successful against mages with any decent amount of power. If you do stick with the normal humans vs. mages thing, address this issues (perhaps they aren't that good at their job, or they go after weak mages only?)

xD I don't want to insist too much. Made CS changes. simply replaced the stuff at the top about the family with:

[+]

"The Magebanes hated magic and all who stood for it, taking it upon themselves to track down criminal magic users who vexed the authorities, (but who were not enough of a priority to be immediately dealt with) and capture them through traps or ambush"

so they'd only go after small time criminals, ambush/trap them, drug them so they can't use magic to escape, truss them up and hand em over. Hope that's toned it down enough.

[Forsythe]

As mentioned, Maho is best at hiding herself, but i want her to play a support role, and hiding someone who's for example injured is a rather big part of that. How about if the concealment of others is broken when they try to use magic, would that suffice?

[Ebil Bunny]

Nika Aer

Age: 14

Magic: Caster Type: Elite Body Control
Elite Body Control is a passive magic that allows the user to, as the name says, have complete control over their own body. Their mind and their body is directly linked, so all they need to do is think of what they want to do, and their body automatically does it. This makes for good reactions (As soon as he realizes what is happening, he has the ability to react immediately), agility (Self explanatory.), strength (He can put as much power behind the fist as he wants), speech (His mouth says what his mind wants it to say), and flight. Yes, flight.

Magic Level: A

History: Nika was born in a town known as Magnolia, where the famous, as well as infamous, Fairy Tail Guild took place at all those many years ago. His father "left" when Nika was too young to remember. He was an only child, so he had no siblings, but he made lots of friends.
Nika was ten years old when he finally found out what happened to his father. He had gone to an island for business, but hadn't returned. Nika decided once and for all to find out what happened to his father. With the help of the police, Nika found where his father was within a week. He was taken to prison, and was still in the same location nine years later. It turned out that his father's "business" was grand theft and murder. His father was a criminal. Nika was devastated, even though he never knew his father. He felt the need to make up for his father's mistakes. His mother taught him magic for three years.
Finally, Nika felt he was ready to take on the world. He had heard about things called "guilds" that were popping up, and decided that he wanted to join one. One by the name of Phoenix Wing.

Team Members: I'm open if anyone wants to team up :)

Three Strengths:
1. Nika is very clever for his age.
2. He has very good eyesight.
3. His magic is unique, so very few know about it.

Three Weaknesses:
1. He is deathly afraid of snakes.
2. He is young, so not able to legally do much.
3. His... Curiosity often gets the best of him.

Greatest Love: His mother, though the locket he wears around his neck is also very close to him.

Motivation: To make up for his father's mistakes.

Additional Details: NaN

[lordmidget]

Forsythe said
As mentioned, Maho is best at hiding herself, but i want her to play a support role, and hiding someone who's for example injured is a rather big part of that. How about if the concealment of others is broken when they try to use magic, would that suffice?

That'll work perfectly, thanks.

Riaxh said
xD I don't want to insist too much. Made changes. simply replaced the stuff at the top about the family with: so they'd only go after small time criminals, ambush/trap them, drug them so they can't use magic to escape, truss them up and hand em over. Hope that's toned it down enough.

It looks good, accepted.

[Infin1teZer0]

Man, this thing is just blowing up to massive sizes, isn't it? XD

Sidenote: You never gave your two-cents on my CS, lordmidget. If there are any glaring problems, please let me know.

Have a link!

*Glances at the front page* Oh hey! I'm on the thing! Imagine that.

[lordmidget]

Infin1teZer0 said
In response to dirkin's review:
1. Awareness alone can now break an illusion. What I'm worried about with this mechanic, however, is the metagame making it useless in a combat setting. The RPer knows it's an illusion, so his/her characters instantly become aware as well. I don't think it will be a major issue, but I feel obliged to at least bring some attention to it.
1 and a Half: I stuck in a footnote saying that more people in an illusion equals less stability in the illusion, making it easier for everyone involved to escape. If one becomes aware, he/she can bail everyone else out. Someone on the outside can also interrupt an illusion. Doing anything like a time limit would just prove to be confusing, since the perception of time can also be messed with, meaning that second could feel like hours, etc.
2. Astaroth is an A-class mage as of right now, but he could be promoted to S-class once the plot deems in necessary/acceptable. I have no issues with this setup.
3. Phoenix Wing's master helping Astaroth further control his magic sounds like a grand idea. I'm all for it.

Sorry didn't notice this post, from what I see you're all good to go! Main Page update soon is up! As for new character applications I'll do them a little later, I'm a little worn out at the moment.

[Toaw]

Name: Victor "The Giant" Vazquez
Age: 26
Magic:

Iron Skin

Iron Skin gives Victor the ability to have skin harder than, and stronger than steel, and it takes a massive amount of force to even scratch him when he uses this ability, but at the cost that he is extremely easy to hit, and probably moves about three fourths the speed of a normal human due to how heavy his body is when he uses the ability. Iron Skin also allows gives Victor massive amounts of strength due to him feeling little pain when hitting something causing him to be able to exert more force.

Magic Level: B

History:

Histroy

Victor grew up as a foster child due to his parents abandoning him when he was just a baby at the doorstep of a small little foster home in a neighboring village from where he was actually born. The first few years of Victor's life weren't terrible, though it wasn't too soon after being abandoned that the foster mother who was running the home, Isabella, soon realized that Victor had this unique gift, instead of fearing it she grew to accept it, and felt that as long as it brought no harm to the other children she would do her best to raise him, and find him a home. As the years continued people had started to grow scared of Victor, and his ability along with other features that started to show like his massive height, and strength compared to other children. These negative feelings that he had brought out in the the adults and children, caused him to get into numerous fights fights with other boys, and to be shunned by any adults that saw him in the village.

One day this fear turned into desperate hate, and these villagers marched onto the small little foster home with torches, and tools that they had found lying around. Victor was terrified of what was going to happen, but Isabelle grabbed him, and took him to a small little passage way under the foster home, and told him that he should wait there until he hears no one outside, and to find a place where he belongs. Once he was sure it was all over Victor got out of the passage way to find the entire foster home burned down, and not a single villager in sight, but that included Isabella. With a tear in his eye he did as she told him to, and set off moving from town to town, surviving off of the food given to him, until he found Phoenix Wing a guild where he could fulfill Isabella's wish, for him to belong.

Personality: Victor is a fairly kind person who enjoys to be friends with people, and to not be lonely.

Team Members:
1. Chloe
2. Elliott Leond

Three Strengths:
1. Extraordinarily Strong
2. Very Passionate, and Caring
3. Quick to make friends

Three Weaknesses:
1. Extremely Slow learner
2. Clumsy
3. Easily Angered

Greatest Love: Finding people and places that are willing to accept him for who he is

Motivation: To defend those who he cares about, and to enjoy a drink while he is at it

Appearance:
Additional Details:
-Stands around 6'10"

[Collection Of Arcana]

Im gonna be straight up and say I think your character is hella cool Taow.

[Rune_Alchemist]

I think Victor and Chloe would get a long well xP

[Toaw]

Rune_Alchemist said
I think Victor and Chloe would get a long well xP

Wow they are really similar...almost scary similar. (I swear I didn't copy you) Q-Q

[Rune_Alchemist]

Hah, I didn't think you did~
We're bound to have similar characters with the amount of people we got here~

[Toaw]

Rune_Alchemist said
Hah, I didn't think you did~We're bound to have similar characters with the amount of people we got here~

Let's just hope that we don't ever fight over who is smarter...we would probably end up destroying the guild XP

[Rune_Alchemist]

Pffft. Oh god that'd be hilarious xD
More like we'd end up destroying half of the city xP

Say, want to have Chloe and Victor on a team?

[Toaw]

Rune_Alchemist said
Pffft. Oh god that'd be hilarious xDMore like we'd end up destroying half of the city xPSay, want to have Chloe and Victor on a team?

If I get accepted into the RP sure why not. I think it would be interesting for the two to team up.

[Infin1teZer0]

We still haven't seen either of the GM's characters...

Speaking of which, when do you think this'll get off the ground? :D

[Collection Of Arcana]

I was actually thinking this would probably start up tomorrow cause its a friday and we'll be able to get things going through the weekend.