lordmidget said
Can you just add a brief description (or not so brief if you want) of what each magic does and how good she is at it, then you'll be good to go.

Forsythe said
Done. We shall see how this works :)

lordmidget said
Rune you can also PM me your villain and I'll take a look at her and might use her.

lordmidget said
I guess there be non-mages going after mages, it's just unlikely as they would not be very successful against mages with any decent amount of power. If you do stick with the normal humans vs. mages thing, address this issues (perhaps they aren't that good at their job, or they go after weak mages only?)

Forsythe said
As mentioned, Maho is best at hiding herself, but i want her to play a support role, and hiding someone who's for example injured is a rather big part of that. How about if the concealment of others is broken when they try to use magic, would that suffice?

Riaxh said
xD I don't want to insist too much. Made changes. simply replaced the stuff at the top about the family with: so they'd only go after small time criminals, ambush/trap them, drug them so they can't use magic to escape, truss them up and hand em over. Hope that's toned it down enough.

Infin1teZer0 said
In response to dirkin's review:
1. Awareness alone can now break an illusion. What I'm worried about with this mechanic, however, is the metagame making it useless in a combat setting. The RPer knows it's an illusion, so his/her characters instantly become aware as well. I don't think it will be a major issue, but I feel obliged to at least bring some attention to it.
1 and a Half: I stuck in a footnote saying that more people in an illusion equals less stability in the illusion, making it easier for everyone involved to escape. If one becomes aware, he/she can bail everyone else out. Someone on the outside can also interrupt an illusion. Doing anything like a time limit would just prove to be confusing, since the perception of time can also be messed with, meaning that second could feel like hours, etc.
2. Astaroth is an A-class mage as of right now, but he could be promoted to S-class once the plot deems in necessary/acceptable. I have no issues with this setup.
3. Phoenix Wing's master helping Astaroth further control his magic sounds like a grand idea. I'm all for it.

Rune_Alchemist said
I think Victor and Chloe would get a long well xP

Rune_Alchemist said
Hah, I didn't think you did~We're bound to have similar characters with the amount of people we got here~

Rune_Alchemist said
Pffft. Oh god that'd be hilarious xDMore like we'd end up destroying half of the city xPSay, want to have Chloe and Victor on a team?