[OOC] No Turning Back - Into the Abyss

[Fuzzybootz]

@Sep

Ok, I've made some changes and I've highlighted them in red in the above CS.

On the Citadel thing. I took the name at random from the list of Arks in the Wiki. It's listed under Active Arks in the Genesis Project page.I can easily change it though.

" There were twelve Arks constructed: Rejuvenation, Vitae, Destiny,Relentless,Hope,Mirai,Citadel,Taweret,Inlustris,Xīng lièrén,Nueva Vida and finally the Jinsei no akashi."

[Sep]

@Fuzzybootz Completely forgot I named one after the Citadel. My bad. Will read the rest later.

[Rawk]

Nice work on your CS @Fuzzybootz.

You get three snaps...



In "Z" formation!

[Draken]

@Sep, I just read your latest post and all I can think is...

[Mao Mao]

I am finally back in the game! Sorry if it's short, but thankfully I have finally posted. If somebody wants to collab, then they will have to wait until me and Sep do our collab. We can, of course, plan ahead for it.

[Subject Zero]

I posted. But this one is more from the perspective of a new npc (who will be floating around if he's ever needed) rather than from Amara's perspective.

[Rawk]

@Subject Zero

I noticed that the "laser scalpel" was in Caleb's hand, so does that mean he was performing brain surgery manually, or can we assume it was somehow guided by an AI? I imagine that the Ark's infirmaries probably have a great deal of robotic assistance, like everything else on the ship.

[Subject Zero]

@Rawk Oh damn it. I meant to add something about him preferring to do it manually but forgot all about it during my four rewrites.

[Sep]

So I was too busy getting drunk feeding homeless people last night that I will finish the post off today to move us on, unless people want me to hold off until Monday (Not doing another full week sorry fam) simply as I know @Vietmyke and @Boomlover have shit they want to do but have been quite busy during our two weeks "down" time.

[Rawk]

I vote for a Monday post, ya drunk lush ;)

[boomlover]

@Sep monday please.

[RedLeather]

I'm working on something, should be up soon.

[Rawk]

I'm working on something, should be up soon.

@RedLeather

Nice work btw and I really dig your character descriptions.

[Draken]

@RedLeather, I gotta say I like the contrast between how our two characters went about almost the same problem.

[RedLeather]

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Nice work btw and I really dig your character descriptions.

@Rawk

Thanks. I always worry that I dont go into enough detail, but I realized these characters aren't important enough to warrant such detail.

@RedLeather, I gotta say I like the contrast between how our two characters went about almost the same problem.

@Draken

It is funny, isn't it.

[Sep]

Everyone saying how Loretta is being cruel or evil or twisted and I'm just here like:

[POOHEAD189]

@boomlover has been advertising this on discord for awhile. I see a lot of RP'ers I know and respect here. I'll be watching^^
(Might even join at some point if able, but having the time atm might be problem).

Cool looking RP though!

[vietmyke]

Wah, I was really really feeling that post. I haven't been that satisfied with a post in a long time.

[Draken]

Wah, I was really really feeling that post. I haven't been that satisfied with a post in a long time.

@vietmyke

Pretty darn well done, too. And it's important their deaths are properly acknowledged. Wouldn't want us to accidentally make life feel cheap, no?

[Rawk]

Wah, I was really really feeling that post. I haven't been that satisfied with a post in a long time.

@vietmyke

Hit me in the feels bro! Nice work. :)