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My post assumes that what happened in Eklispe's post doesn't change in any way as the result of Wisp's actions, and that she was able to roll out of the whirlwind beneath it.
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First judgement day, everyone. The above users have not updated their main team characters since I updated 7 days ago. Much as I hate doing these things, each one is on your 5 day probationary watchlist. If there's something going on, I'm more than happy to work with you, but I need communication. Lugs, I assume you're still on your overseas trip? Please confirm if this is the case.
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I am currently waiting for a few others with the Jacks to post before I do my introduction that way I have a bit more to work with my first post.
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First judgement day, everyone. The above users have not updated their main team characters since I updated 7 days ago. Much as I hate doing these things, each one is on your 5 day probationary watchlist. If there's something going on, I'm more than happy to work with you, but I need communication. Lugs, I assume you're still on your overseas trip? Please confirm if this is the case.


Yes, but I can post tomorrow, and will do my best to do so
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Apologies. I haven't updated in a bit with Kyoshi. I'll tick up a post in a bit as soon as I'm done sorting out my room.

On the plus side, I have my 3D printer hooked up again, so I'll likely start making things.
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"... while someone sneaks in and grabs Wisp,"


Heh, do you have a plan on how to find her? Have you briefed the rest of the team on her power/situation? I may have missed/forgotten if you did, but this made me start wondering.

Edit: Then again, you've said her name now. So, the rest/someone else might know. She's not an unknown, after all. She's directed the Protectorate at villains at some occasions while invisible displaying messages to them and some random blasts of light around town has been attributed to her.
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Looks like everyone except for @The Wild West has updated. That is fantastic and I thank you all for being so responsive. West hasn't been on in over 5 days now. Recent enough to have seen his probation announcement, but long enough for me to worry that something is going on. He has 2 days left, which I will give him out of fairness, but he hasn't responded in other games either. This is really disappointing to me, as I found his contributions to be quite entertaining. In any case, I will update as soon as he updates, or in 2 days after his probation ends, whichever comes first.
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Weekend is crazy. All kinds of busy. Had to attend a class for first time home buyers (oh yeah, buying a house, super stressful and busy), and tomorrow is my first Father's Day, which should be exciting and fun but feels more stressful and full of unnecessary pressure. "Hey Jeff, what do you want to do for Father's Day? Where do you want to go for dinner? Here's twenty more questions." Dammit people I have no idea! I'm still wrapping my head around the concept of fatherhood to begin with! I don't have any thoughts or opinions on what to do tomorrow! Sheesh! If it were up to me I'd stay in and play video games all day, but I can't because I have a 2 1/2 month old infant to care for with my wife!

So yeah, long story short, update is coming Monday most likely. West has until then.
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The two primary teams are updated, I decided to post what I had at the end of lunch and get the Minutemen update done soon as I could instead of making everyone wait because I wasn't done with one group. With that said...

@The Wild West has failed to report in despite multiple warnings and attempts to get his attention, including on skype. His characters are now forfeit as NPCs and he is removed from the RP. West, since you had added a good deal to this game, I will listen to any rebuttal you have if and when you return and might consider reinstating you, depending on what sort of excuse you have. However for now Arsenal will be carried forward with the Jacks by me until I have an in game reason to separate him from the group, same with Artificer of the Minutemen. Exhale will be a random NPC that can show up anywhere at any time I or Eklispe deem appropriate.
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I'm finally all caught up. Only took me about 8 hours. I'm into the OOC tab next, which I hope to read completely by the day's end.

I plan to have that CS up for review today that we talked about the basics of, but please don't hold me to that. Getting another tat today, and I'm not sure how long that'll take. I'll be reading the OOC during, however.

And thanks again for telling me about this. <3 Worm.
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@Old Amsterdam No problem! I'm glad I randomly saw your avatar! Hahaha. It'll be good to have new blood around here.
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The only issue I foresee is that I get excited when something involved Worm, so please tell me once I get posting if I'm going too fast.
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Sorry for the double post, but just an update.

Currently on page 3 of the IC. Hope to finish getting caught up tonight.

For everyone who isn't Pro, to give you an idea of the first character I'm bringing in to the Jacks...

He's gonna be a hell of a hitter.
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I have edited the front page to be more precise and inclusive of the character roster and team list, as well as having added a 0th post with a small list of rules. Let me know if there's anything you guys would like to see added there for convenience.
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Okay, this is not complete at all (I'm missing history and equipment for major parts) but I wanted to hear your thoughts before I get into the hard part.

I've currently have him circumventing the Manton Effect, I hope that's okay. If not I'll very happily change that.

It's also 1am and I just can't concentrate anymore.

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All feedback is appreciated.

Small thing, she'll probably go by Chrissie.
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Okay, this is not complete at all (I'm missing history and equipment for major parts) but I wanted to hear your thoughts before I get into the hard part.

I've currently have him circumventing the Manton Effect, I hope that's okay. If not I'll very happily change that.

It's also 1am and I just can't concentrate anymore.



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Forgot to mention you originally.

Also had a question spring to mind in regards to the limitation I had set up. Changed the time, which is seen in this quoted version and not the one two posts up. Any other limitations suggestions, if deemed needed, would be appreciated.

Kinda want to get what I have down solidifies before I design the rest, as what I've got is what is fueling the rest in my head.
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All feedback is appreciated.

Small thing, she'll probably go by Chrissie.


Looks really good. I like the power, backstory, derangement, and how you were able to come up with a viable striker/stranger cross trigger. My only concerns are nitpicky for the most part. So I have a couple optional items to point out, and once they're addressed (or not) you can slide her on over to the CS tab. Looks like she's had her powers for around 7-8 months by this time and doesn't have a cape name yet. So either she hasn't attracted any public attention, or hasn't actually committed any crimes. I'd prefer that she get a cape name, or that's clarified. Similar to that is that no costume is listed in her appearance section. So if she doesn't have one, please specify that, or list something for her (even if it's just a random mask she throws on). Finally, I greatly prefer that no parahumans are made up for backstories if they're still around and relevant in Denver. I can let her dad slip by since he prefers not to use his powers or do anything in public, but I usually prefer to have a comprehensive list of all parahumans as NPCs for GM control.

So like I said, address all of these, or none of them, at your preference. Either way she can be approved.

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Forgot to mention you originally.

Also had a question spring to mind in regards to the limitation I had set up. Changed the time, which is seen in this quoted version and not the one two posts up. Any other limitations suggestions, if deemed needed, would be appreciated.

Kinda want to get what I have down solidifies before I design the rest, as what I've got is what is fueling the rest in my head.


I definitely like it so far! The first incarnation with the activation time being 30 seconds was definitely waaaaay too much, he'd get the crap beaten out of him before he was able to use his powers. 10 seconds is still pretty high though. I'd recommend dropping to 5. That way it's fast enough to still be useful, but slow enough that he can't steamroll everyone and everything he comes across. This additional limitation is also enough for me to agree to lifting the Manton Effect for this power.

Side note, I'd laugh so hard to see him get into a fight with Alexandria, physically the most powerful hero in the world, only to knock her into the stratosphere. She wouldn't actually get hurt, but it'd be hilarious to see this titan get bitchslapped by someone with ostensibly normal strength.
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I definitely like it so far! The first incarnation with the activation time being 30 seconds was definitely waaaaay too much, he'd get the crap beaten out of him before he was able to use his powers. 10 seconds is still pretty high though. I'd recommend dropping to 5. That way it's fast enough to still be useful, but slow enough that he can't steamroll everyone and everything he comes across. This additional limitation is also enough for me to agree to lifting the Manton Effect for this power.

Side note, I'd laugh so hard to see him get into a fight with Alexandria, physically the most powerful hero in the world, only to knock her into the stratosphere. She wouldn't actually get hurt, but it'd be hilarious to see this titan get bitchslapped by someone with ostensibly normal strength.


Yeah, the more I thought about the time limit the more bothered I got with it. I'll hopefully get this finished on break, or right after work.

And I'm happy I wasn't the only one thinking that! I could just imagine the entire fight, because we know Alexandria wouldn't take him seriously and that would let him activate his power and surprise the shit out of her. I'm fairly confident she'd still destroy him, but at least her ego would get hurt.
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She has been edited a bit, and I will post her in the CS tab as I was given permission =D
The changes are:
Costume' added in the way of a mask that she made out of paper mache, cape name not yet decided on.
Limitation added explaining how her power affects multiple people, and added a flaw to using it too often.
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