[OOC] ⌠𝐈𝐒𝐎𝐋𝐀𝐓𝐄 ╼ 𝐀𝐍 𝐀𝐏𝐎𝐂𝐀𝐋𝐘𝐏𝐓𝐈𝐂 𝐒𝐔𝐑𝐕𝐈𝐕𝐀𝐋⌡

[Mao Mao]

@SouffleGirl123, it's fine. I will still post tomorrow, but I will make sure that I am not going too far.

[SouffleGirl123]

@The Spectre go as far as you need, I can work around it :)

[Mao Mao]

I have finally posted something. @Valor, @BilboTheGreat, @Bayaz, @HowlsOfWinter, @Buddha, and @JackalopeLove. Are you guys still interested in this roleplay?

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

What about me? I have a char and am waiting.

[Mao Mao]

@NecroKnight, oh my. I totally forgot about your character. I am so sorry. Let me take a look at it.

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

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[Mao Mao]

@NecroKnight, it's a good character overall. However, you could add more things into the Physical Description and the Background. For description, you could talk about what she usually wears daily and how she does her hair. As for the background, how did she get to Baltham and Bainbridge Island? I'd also like if she got a medical discharge for losing her arm, leg, or whatever you want it to be. It doesn't even have to be a medical discharge. Just like what Valor, your character seems unapproachable to others.

Your character could have been military before they get the discharge.

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

I was thinking more-like, being sent in with the Army or National Guard - during the initial lockdown.

[Squad 404]

@The Spectre Yes. I am still here.

[Mao Mao]

@The Spectre

I was thinking more-like, being sent in with the Army or National Guard - during the initial lockdown.

@NecroKnight

The issue with that is the government doesn't know what's going on besides there being another shooting. They most likely think that people who said somebody was biting someone else was overeating. The CDC is only interested because it happened in a peaceful city that rarely had a shooting. Plus, you would have to wait a long time before the military and government enter a state of emergency as they haven't seen something like this before.

Remember, the idea of zombies don't exist in this version of Earth.

Besides, you can still add more info into the background and description.

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

That was the best i could think of. Plus I can wait - I got a ton of other stuff going on.

[Mao Mao]

@NecroKnight, you know that your character doesn't have to be military right? They could be civilian like everyone else. Your character could have that military background, but they can't be in the military.

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

Nah, I wanna be military to add some spice later on.

[Mao Mao]

@NecroKnight, well you could still add more info about your character's background and physical description (the background is more important than the description).

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

Like what? In terms of background?

[Mao Mao]

@NecroKnight, I already told you what you needed to add for the background. How did she get to Baltham and Bainbridge Island? And if you are still going to the military thing, what they did during the military. I'd rather you be civilian so more people can interact with you and you lose interest because no-one is interacting with you. But if you refuse to give up on having your character in the military, then go ahead and have them in the military. It has to make sense why they joined the military.

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

It'll take some time then.

[Mao Mao]

@NecroKnight, do you realize that this roleplay is a group effort? A group of everyday civilians just trying to survive hell while keeping a bit of themselves (and it's just getting started).

[NecroKnight]

@The Spectre

Fair enough. Also PMs a no-go?

[Mao Mao]

@NecroKnight, alright mate. I took a hard look at your character and realized that she doesn't fit in with everyone else. I understand that you want to be in this roleplay and put in hard work on your character. However, I can't accept her at all. She can't be on active duty and it can't be altered. I'm also concerned about her interactions with others—as you stated that she's "introvert at best, and lone wolf at worst." It implies that she will have little to do with any of the other characters in this roleplay.

As I said before, group effort is the important point of this game. Lone characters in this game are likely to die sooner because they won't go up to everyone. I thank you for your hard work, but she can not be accepted given the base foundations of her character.