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Alright, looks good to me, I'll send you the discord code for the server we use, and you can move him over to the character tab
It will be a week or two before he gets brought in (partially since we are wrapping up what's currently going on and then there will be a point where he can be brought in) but we'll be glad to have you in the RP!
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Wow, thanks for having me. I'll get on the discord now.
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@BlueSky44 - I revamped / updated Neil's CS, let me know if anything needs changing - I added in the two skills we talked about and updated some stats. He's had a growth spurt!

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Hello,

I just saw that this is open and I am always down to join anything superhuman related.

I have an idea for someone who has geokinetic powers and enhanced physical strength. Think of an earthbender who could toss a horse over their shoulder. I may need to ask for help with a faceclaim though, but if the idea sounds doable, I can work up a sheet.

I also have discord if you want to ask me something there, i'm usually on it 24/7
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I am also interested in superheroes, if you have room for more, of course
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Sure we can always have more, you guys can see about filling out the CS character wise and all, just let me know if you have any questions about anything with regards to the universe or filling out the CS and message me if you need help and all.
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Excited!

Will probably get something up either tomorrow after work or Monday when I am off :)
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Sure we can always have more, you guys can see about filling out the CS character wise and all, just let me know if you have any questions about anything with regards to the universe or filling out the CS and message me if you need help and all.


People generally don’t like mutants in this world, right? Are there any kind of laws that restrict mutants? Like a law that says they’d have to register with the government for example. I’m thinking my character is gonna try to take after the example of people like the Avengers and try to be a hero, only to be held back because people are afraid and pissed off at mutants, which makes her afraid and pissed off at the world as a result.
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Mutants are still typically looked down upon by a lot of people, however in the story of the universe, Congress did at one point try to pass a law restricting them and all, short version is that an organization (that technically was a government one) was basically turning the public opinion more against them, and the leader of the organization had been elected President of the US, however he ended up with a change of heart completely disbanding the organization entirely before that law could be passed, so now there are still people who are kind of vigilantes against mutants at least across the US.
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Alright, I think I can work with that. I’m shooting for someone who’s been hurt considerably by such people, and it toughened her up to the point she’s bristly towards others. Has trust issues and feels a need to do things on her own but won’t admit she’s in over her head because she doesn’t want to show vulnerability. She won’t be a complete ass about it, but she’ll have a chip on her shoulder no less.

She knows how her abilities work and what she can do on a surface level, but there is some nuance to the way her powers work that she isn’t aware of yet and she’ll probably need help fighting that nuance out. As far as she’s concerned, she’s just really good at throwing rocks at people.

She’ll also be 100% new to Xavier’s school. As in, her first day.
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As mentioned in my PM to you I am putting forth a character, here they are. Please let me know if anything needs changing.

EDIT: Made the requested changes and additions.

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Upon further consideration, I'm gonna have to back out of this. I underestimated the scope of the rp, and think I'd be getting in over my head if I continue. This seems like a really cool universe, though. Wishing you guys well without me.
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@Blizz no worries, let me know if you ever want back in and we'll see what we can do for it!

@Martian
Alright, main thing is that the personality section isn't fully filled out. Underneath relationship status there is a space where you more of elaborate on the character's personality.

Skills wise there is a better way to word some of the ones you have...
  • General Farming Skills -> Farming
  • Higher level player of Magic -> Magic the Gathering Card Game (not super specific but you don't need to mention you are a high level player in it, we have someone who literally has Dungeons and Dragons Mechanics as a skill too so fit in that boat there)
  • Computer Sciences in General -> The in general part isn't actually needed
  • Decent Aim when firing gem shards -> Gem Shard Projectiles


This is mainly to make it a bit easier if you ever need to ask for rolls or use the skills and such, since it is okay to have the skills broad in general, since it also makes it easier to potentially find skills for most scenarios and the wording helps a bit to ensure that everything falls into those specific categories for when you ask to use the skill to help boost your rolls.

Now, the one other skill is the Languages one where you mention English and Filipino
It is not necessary to list skills your character automatically would know, as in they grew up with it.
For instance my character Marygold, she's from Germany and was raised in a household that spoke both German and English, so she automatically has those and it isn't necessary to name them off. However later on she did gain the skill of being able to speak French, so she did end up needing the skill added to her CS if that makes sense? And that is the only "language" skill that she actually has since it was something that she ended up getting later.
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Sorry about the rough state of my character sheet, I was just overly excited to get it out. Not sure how I completely missed the personality section, but I have now filled it in and made the skill list more concise. The character sheet has been edited, and given a proper read through, and is in the previous post. Like before, let me know if anything needs changing.
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@Martian Everything looks good to move over, just remember that it will be another two or three weeks until he's brought in (I put out the call for new players early) but give me a moment and I'll send you the discord stuff to join.
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@Trainerblue192 Gaaaaaaaah sorry it took so long
You can move the post over
Only one slight change, that being that the Grimoire isn't meant to be in that slot underneath the skills, it goes in a hider underneath the CS itself for a bit easier access.
Otherwise you are good to go!
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For your consideration - thanks for the invite.



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ok, for the most part it is good to go
However my one issue is her power.
So it essentially looks like she's a Power Mimic, however with the way it is worded currently, she basically can do anything which even with the slight time limit constraint of time between powers is a bit overpowered
However, it is fine as long as it is an instance where she has met someone with the power she wants to use. Ever seen the tv show Heroes? One of the main characters is a Power Mimic, who later learns how to use his powers better where as long as he can imagine and envision the person who has that power, then he's able to manifest the power, it just takes a bit of focus to get there.
Though this one little thing probably won't mess with a lot since the group tends to fight powered people a lot, but also makes it so that she's not insanely overpowered when compared to the other characters
Since a lot of the characters have one limit or another on their powers, and just being able to use their power and switch between them fairly often is a bit too strong and isn't exactly fair for everyone else.

If that makes some sense?
Otherwise everything else is fine aside from the CS being formatted strangely, since the name, those lines and all should be under the hider with the rest of the CS.
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Oh - my mistake (RE: the stuff not under the hider).

And yeah that makes perfect sense - exactly the kind of scenarios (unfair/too easy) I'm wanting to avoid.

So regarding that, I did write she can manifest "any power that she knows of" - I meant it that way like your example: she has to know those powers exist in some other mutant already (there has to be a known precedent) before she can manifest them. My present thinking is she doesn't have to know them personally. Like if her sister said "you know, there's a kid in my class who can turn one material into another", that would be enough for OfAll to do the power, too (possibly after getting some further detail). Though I could change it to where she needs personal experience with the power (i.e. direct witnessing, not even through TV), which would limit.

Timeframe between could also, as mentioned, be more stretched out, like every few or several hours. Assuming most battles don't take that long, she'd likely be working with max 2 powers per battle.

Or how about these alternatives:
1. She can deplete her current power thereby being power*less* until the timeframe elapses where she can switch/reset. And depletion point would be power based. i.e. maybe she can telekinetically move books around for ages, but only telekinetically lift two trucks and then nothing more even if that's only a couple minutes into her power selection; still has to wait 'til she can swap in another power.
2. Her powers are restricted to base levels, or like a video game; depends how much she's used that particular kind throughout her life. Like, Restriction Example: Professor X can effortlessly throw his thoughts into (at least) every mind in the Mansion at once. OfAll, say, could only throw her thoughts into the minds of those in her visual vicinity no matter how many times she's manifested psychic powers. Or Video Game Example: perhaps she's only tried optic blasts a couple times, so they're little more than the power of Cyclops' on low. But maybe she's tried ice powers more regularly, and can icify her whole arm by now.

In any case :) I can't do any edits until the weekend.

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