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@Lord ZeeThey are hundred dollar bills and like travel suit cases that are on wheels.
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(First I'll appologize for posting the characters in separate posts, due to the text size or my computer it lags too much when I edit them)


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Tried to post them as fast as I could at the expense of some quality since I don't want to miss out too much on the things going on IC.
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@Dezuel Delthrael got Hiraga completely backwards xD She cares for humans as much as she cares for Ants or pine trees. The only thing she is infatuated with is the Earth as a whole. and at the present time, few love the humans less than Hiraga :D
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@Dezuel I am reviewing them now. Will get back to you in a couple minutes or more.
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@Dezuel Delthrael got Hiraga completely backwards xD She cares for humans as much as she cares for Ants or pine trees. The only thing she is infatuated with is the Earth as a whole. and at the present time, few love the humans less than Hiraga :D


All things may come to change. Even his description of her.
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Okay great characters you got here @Dezuel I just have a couple of concerns.

Delthrael

Power Seize- This has a great potential to be abused. From what I can understand, the deity this is used on basically doesn't get a chance to defend themselves if caught in its grasp and then are forced to use another power. I'm not sure if anyone would allow that to happen to their characters in the first place either. I'd like to see other opinions on it, but if you tweak it so it isn't so final, I'd be be a bit happier.

Seized Power- Depending upon Power Seize's revision, we may have to take a look at this one as well.

Other then that he looks good. I like the beef he has with Desious.

Golkai

The only problem I have with his powers is this; If he can summon an Army of the Heaven's, why would they reside in the void? The void is basically the opposite of the Heaven's and would not make sense. Now if this army resided, oh lets say, lets say the Army comes from his Banner, I would be okay with this.

Other then that he's good.

Galviere

Bestow Power- Does this power have a limit? Does it run out after awhile? Only certain beings may bestow true godhood.

I'd also like to see a bit more of her History, but you can work on that after we get the other things sorted out first.

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On Delthrael's Power I mostly thought it would be a touch based sort of attack using his main hand and he needs to actually hold them for long enough to fully complete the transfer. Ofcourse people could fight against the attempt. I do understand your concerns and I did ponder on it aswell, ultimately I would like it coming down to each player individually if they are willing to be caught by it and have their Power repertoire change. In the sense of them losing a power and gaining in turn the one he had previously stored. In a sense he could also use it to 'trade' with others and give someone the means necessary to triumph where it normally would be more tricky. I can however add more information about it's limitations and useage.

Regarding Golkai I thought that a place like a void or limbo would serve as a fitting name for a place where being neither dead or alive would linger. In a sense his warriors would be animated clay-like humanoids in armor with energy type weapons. I did consider having the banner summon them but that would pose a problem in terms of the god of war never being where hes needed since he is not able to fly on his own and well that someone might get their hands on his weapon :P. The way I kind of wanted him to be was to be a god of war without overshining or stepping on Amos toes in terms of individual strength.

Then finally on Galviere. Her Power bestowal is like a strength and stamina increase to put someone on a standard god level. It however would not make the person a god. She can at any Point in time during that person's Life chose to take it away aswell or just wait for the person to die. She may only bestow this type of Power to one person/being at a time. Same thing applies to her gift of the gods power.

None of the Powers make a person an actual god. It only gives them the physical strength and immortality that most gods possess.

I shall see if I can alter things the day after tomorrow since I am free then.

(Also do excuse the ranhom letters being large in my text such as "P" and "T"'s for some reason my PC autocorrects my text wrong and I've gotta change to Mozilla or Chrome or something.)
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@Dezuel

Delthrael

Okay good to hear this. As long as player choice is considered then I have no quarrels with it. Any more information on it would be great though.

Golkai

Yeah it would make sense to use the void, but in this setting the void is a bad place and they would most likely become very corrupted. Limbo would even work for me or a personal pocket dimension that he was given by his parents perhaps? And yes, it would be wise not to step on Amos' toes, so I feel you there.

Galviere

Good to hear, I just wanted some clarification.

All of your characters are accepted since the changes are minor and won't really break anything. I have faith that you will make the correct changes/tweaks in a timely manner.
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I'll try to post today... just I got strep and an ear infection so I'm out of it.
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@GrizzTheMauler Hey no worries, personal health comes before anything else. Thanks for letting me know, take your time and heal.
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So how's everyone doing today?
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@Lord Zee
It's my birthday, so I'm being spoiled today.

Am also waiting on @Spawnmeme to reply to Cyl so I can have them do a thing and meetup with the rest of the gods.
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Errand day. Might post, might not. I'm not happy

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Happy Birthday Alchemist!
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@Rune_Alchemist Happy Birthday!

@Dealdric No rush, might want to wait for some more people to go so you have something to go on too.

@Spawnmeme Can we get an ETA on your post?
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Hey guys! Gonna put my CS up this weekend! Woohoo!
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I'm toying with the thought of making a demigod char that's something like the Greek Dionysos. Thinking about either Lust or Gluttony personification, that could be fun.
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@Forsythe That has potential! I say go for it, but it's up to you.
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