[OOC] CLOSED - Ultimate One Universe: Season One

[An Outsider]

Whoops, seems like I failed my perception check. I hadn't realised that I'd been accepted until Wraith pointed it out to me.

[mickilennial]

To be fair, the mention system doesn't seem to be well-utilized here.

[Enarr]

So the basic premise of this Wolverine arc is that this is where Wolverine gets his skeleton, but it doesn't quite make him the perfectly indestructible healer that he has been since Claremont left the X-Men (most of his publication history). Instead, this Wolverine is going to be able to heal super effectively, and by multiple methods, but it's not always going to make him exactly like he was before.

Anyhow, he's signed the Cobain doctrine, he's not a person--he's an RC assassin, and will be until he breaks free. It'll basically come down to the fact that the implants that puppet his nervous system aren't as durable as his adamantium lined bones.

But somewhere between proving himself to be their greatest weapon and breaking free, I think he should get a field assignment that brings him in contact with a PC, that way people can have a reason not to trust him cuz' they can be like "he's an assassin not a superhero" or if the target is someone considered evil, then he can be assumed to be an imposter once he has reclaimed his free will.

It'd also be cool to see what the mystical side thinks of Homo Abominus Americana.

[Retired]

To be honest, and not to be rude, I'm having a hard time following your posts, NR.

[Enarr]

To be honest, and not to be rude, I'm having a hard time following your posts, NR.

@Retired

Why is that?

[Retired]

Some aspects seem jarring when compared to the rest, and concepts and elements are introduced but left with little to no explanation, for example. While it's not difficult to read what is written, I'm not being immersed, and I often find myself displaced and taken out of the experience due to the aforementioned things.

[Lord Wraith]

Some aspects seem jarring when compared to the rest, and concepts and elements are introduced but left with little to no explanation, for example. While it's not difficult to read what is written, I'm not being immersed, and I often find myself displaced and taken out of the experience due to the aforementioned things.

@Retired

My last post was supposed to have an 'Asgardians of the Galaxy' segment but it wasn't contributing anything to the overall post and just served as a jarring change of focus.

It's coming but not yet haha

[Retired]

It's coming but not yet

@Lord Wraith

You're not supposed to share the dirty messages you send @Master Bruce in public, silly.

[Lord Wraith]

<Snipped quote by Lord Wraith>

You're not supposed to share the dirty messages you send @Master Bruce in public, silly.

@Retired

I'm an exhibitionist, what can I say?

[Sep]

I admit there are some characters posts that I need to re-read at some point. Not so much due to poor writing, but the characters the players are playing don't interest me a lot, and I'm unlikely to interact with them soon so in my head they're marked as low priority. I don't doubt that some people don't read mine.

I probably won't get a chance to post again till Monday.

[Retired]

That's Sep's way of saying my character doesn't interest him. Confirmed.

[Morden Man]

I think it's unreasonable to expect everyone to read every post.

It's completely natural to prioritise the posts that interest you, so I wouldn't beat yourself up about not reading everything all at once or skimming over some posts because everyone does it. One of the nice things about playing in games like this is that you can look back, having read the posts that were initially interesting to you, and take the time to read some of the work that perhaps wasn't instantly relevant to your character or your posts and find some real gems in there.

[mickilennial]

I read everyone's posts.

[Retired]

I read all posts. And I do so before I post to ensure I didn't miss anything important.
I also had read all the OOC posts before I even applied, and continue to read them all.

[Byrd Man]

I read all posts. And I do so before I post to ensure I didn't miss anything important.
I also had read all the OOC posts before I even applied, and continue to read them all.

@Retired

I'm doing my best to keep up with both.

[Retired]

I know that it's super hard for all of you to keep up with my IC posts. I move at a blinding speed.

[Sep]

I read everyone's posts.

@Inkarnate

Must be nice to have large amounts of free time.

TBH time is a large part of the reason I don't read everything, but that doesn't mean I don't skim for anything important. If this is gonna be a problem going on in the Roleplay I'll take the time to read everything.

I spend most my time keeping up with the OOC.

That said, I'll say it here and now. I'm always willing to accept any and all critique on my posts, as any compliments help me feel good about it and any negative comments help me become a better writer.

[Morden Man]

Let's not turn the OOC thread into a procession of critiques about one another's posts, shall we?

Ultimately we're all here to have fun. If you want someone's opinion about what you can improve upon, ask them via PM. Not everyone is comfortable with having their writing publicly assessed and I'm concerned about the atmosphere it might create for them to have to wade through critiques of other people's writing.

[mickilennial]

Must be nice to have large amounts of free time.

TBH time is a large part of the reason I don't read everything, but that doesn't mean I don't skim for anything important. If this is gonna be a problem going on in the Roleplay I'll take the time to read everything.

I spend most my time keeping up with the OOC.

That said, I'll say it here and now. I'm always willing to accept any and all critique on my posts, as any compliments help me feel good about it and any negative comments help me become a better writer.

@Sep

I understand why some people don’t read posts in large, sandbox games. It can be daunting. Its part of the reason I left Create-a-Hero, because of my own personal reasons and prioritization of processing things. I don’t have a excess of free time, mind you, but I do have a freer schedule currently than when I was working warehouse three years ago. I personally believe everyone should read each other’s posts to greater understand the “current events” of the sandbox, but I would by no means find it a problem if anyone didn’t. I wouldn’t worry about it all that much if I were you, Sep. It’s just a preference.

[Lord Wraith]

He's judging you...