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Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by DracoLunaris
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the one girl wolf pack is finished





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@Crusader Lord
Reminds me of Warlock from Dota 2, which is cool. I like the originality of the weapon as well; classic dark magical girl. Accepted.

@ERode
Well, she's certainly a head turner. Interesting focus with the Specialization. The Power reminds me of Mortal Kombat's Scorpion, heh. The Vendetta opens up some interesting conflict opportunities as well. Patron reminds me of JoJo's Anubis. I did feel that we were missing a flowery swordswoman/fencer. Accepted.
EDIT: PlatinumSkink noted this, but she can have one more Perk, and one more Benefit.

@BrokenPromise
I like Sue's new look a lot; hopefully it comes up in a post as her way of finding her own path in life, and coming up with her own identity. Dresses can be considered uniforms in a sense that there are written invitations asking for them to be worn at social gatherings, so that's fine. Mika is the cutest stalker. Bonus points for cultural diversity too. I did notice a typo (Maki lol), but other than that no problems with her. Really balanced stats, impressive. And another Vendetta! Hmmm...Accepted.

@DracoLunaris
Here comes Liru's badass big sister. Definitely prefer the former nickname over the latter. There's just something about tanned girls with red eyes that I simply can't say no to. Also like the Reaper pin. She will be a fearsome opponent with her single pool of health/mana and ability to pack attack. Accepted.

And with these, I think I'll accept one or two more before closing submissions.
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One more??

(Started working on mine yesterday and plan to finish today)
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@Karkinos

Well, two more should be fine. I'll take a look at your sheet once it's finished.
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@ERode I seem to only count four perks on your character. You get five. The last one can be rolled on any of the tables.

You also seem to have as many Drawbacks as Benefits for your character. Each character gets a single universal benefit from the universal list for free, so you'll have one more benefit than drawbacks. Seeing how you already have picked some from the universal list, you could also pick an additional one from the Lesser Force benefit list, if you so find them fitting. I realize a sword might not normally be granting a lot of benefits in the kind of way that describes, but heh.

Maybe it was intentionally left like this or I am the one who's missing something, but I thought I'd mention.

Oh, and hello.
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Placeholder until I run an idea by Ariamis.
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Accepted. If you're going to play as Shion and Summer, Makoto has to stay out of the RP's events like we have discussed.
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@PlatinumSkink@Ariamis Thanks for the note. I grabbed 'Trained' and 'Hidden Death' for Perk and Benefit respectively.
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@Karkinos
Interesting description of the weapon and it's usage. I'm worried about the collapsing technique, that should be limited to contact only, and even then would require a moment of concentration.
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@Ariamis But idk how he’d collapse space through physical contact. Maybe I could neuter the “line of sight” limit?
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@Karkinos
He could touch and then create a sphere of collapsing space extended from the palm? That's how I would envision it.
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Alright. I rolled ten girls to see which one I'd start off with (since honestly I wouldn't let myself take the Origin of the Smug, both for personal pride and because the two patrons I want to create wouldn't quite mesh with that one), and I've decided on one set of rolls to work with. I still need to do some spending, but stat-wise my magical girl is almost complete.

By the by, where do you suggest I look for character images?
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@MadManMoon Safebooru's where I go. It's relatively safe.
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Don't listen to this Debbie Downer, go to Danbooru/Gelbooru, be a chad. A REAL MAN finds a proper imagine among the sea of lewds!
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Danbooru > Gelbooru, if only because the mods actually delete the shitty pics. Also, their tagging is hella superior.
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I don't typically do this, but I decided to make some post/accepted edits. Nothing too large.

-I never felt Sue's "teleport to base" perk suited her, so I opted to replace it instead of adding a completely new perk.

-I changed Veronica's transformed picture. Same face claim, but the outfit is slightly different.

-Added Sue's surprise over city shift serious fight music to her extra section.

I'll probably be making more inconsequential edits as time goes by, mostly to the history and extra sections.

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@Ariamis That’d be alright if he couldn’t already shoot blasts through his hands; I think having another close-range offensive skill would be kind of arbitrary.

The idea of the “space-collapsing” thing is to have super, super nerfed black holes — drawing things towards them (but not into them) — that would affect the gravity of everyone nearby and not just Saviour. I can just mix the ‘collapsing whatever it overlaps with’ part. It was when I was writing it that I assumed it’d just be inevitable? Maybe the power only works for empty space, idk.
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super, super nerfed black holes


Um... gravity wells?
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