[OOC] Fate/Eternum

[RolePlayerRoxas]

Behold, an angry that is not usually angry.

Berserker

• Name: "Guan Yu" (Lady Guan)
• Class: Berserker
• Appearance: Guan in casual wear
• Personality: In what is perhaps rather unexpected for someone claiming to be Guan Yu, Berserker is rather soft-spoken and kindly, a far cry from the thundering war god (s)he should be. Her nature is charitable and accommodating, always happy to help out with a smile. Her demeanour is generally upbeat, doing her best not to look down, especially in front of her Master. Although she finds it to be improper conduct, she is also a *huge* martial arts fan. If she could, she would get the personification of martial arts itself to sign her an autograph.
  
  Thanks to her manifestation as a Berserker, however, her normally reserved anger is quicker to boil to the surface, especially if one lightly broaches the subject of her father. It is recommended to not bring him up at all, even in sympathy - it may surface a memory that will end in a rampage and costly repairs to the neighbourhood.
  That said, she is a proud daughter of the mighty warrior, and a slight against any of her family will not be allowed to slide. She does not consider herself much of a warrior, but Lady Guan will gladly fight for their sake, or her Master's.

• Stats:
• Strength: C+
• Endurance: C+
• Agility: A
• Mana: E
• Luck: D
• Noble Phantasm: C+

• Class Skills:
• Mad Enhancement - C: Increases Strength and Endurance parameters when active.

• Personal Skills:
• War God's Wrath - B: A skill that unnerves those that recognise the might of Guan Yu, negating positive status effects of lower Rank, and decreasing the effectiveness of buffs at an equal rank to this skill.
• Innocent Monster - E: As the origin of the myth regarding Guan Yu's vengeful spirit, minor alterations occur under specific conditions. When Lady Guan is truly angered, her surrounding air chills, layers of frost covering her armour and icy spikes protruding from it. This also happens to strengthen her Noble Phantasm, given the change in temperature in her immediate vicinity.
• Battle Continuation - D: Being the 'vengeful spirit' of Guan Yu, Berserker is able to ignore serious injuries in battle, but is only active when under the effect of Mad Enhancement.

• Noble Phantasm(s):
• Name: Frost Fair Blade ~ Blood Soaked Green Dragon
• Rank: C
• Type: Anti-Unit
• Appearance: The guandao's base appearance. When manifested as the Frost Fair Blade, it can no longer rapidly grow scales due to its new frozen properties. The weapon is also coated in blood due to the frost.
• Effects: The frosty blade of the guandao will actively seek blood to soak within, increasing in power as more is splattered upon the weapon. Once enough blood has accrued, invoking the weapon's name will allow Guan to manipulate that blood - lancing towards an enemy, the blood freezing almost instantaneously, creating any icy spear that can approach terrifying range. Alternatively, Guan can have the blood shoot off in random directions all around her, the frozen blood slicing through objects and enemies all around her. Once this effect is used, more blood must be spilled to 'refuel'.
  Additionally, the blade becomes stronger in colder environments, even capable of striking unlucky foes down with frostbite. It still retains its weakness to dragonslayers, unfortunately.

• Name: War God's Armament
• Rank: A
• Type: Anti-Unit (self)
• Appearance: A steel helmet similar to what was available to generals at the time, with an additional steel mask that obscure her upper face. When donning this helmet, Guan's hair is also worn to flow from the lower half of the helmet, tied be neath her chin to simulate a beard.
• Effects: A helmet that obscures Lady Guan's features, making others see her as the imposing, powerful "Guan Yu", or at least as a terrifyingly powerful individual, if they have not yet recognised her 'true name'. Even though discrepancies can be observed, attempts to perceive the truth will only lead to rationalising Lady Guan as the genuine article. This applies even when her 'real' identity is already known.

• Alignment: Lawful Good
• Changes: Lady Guan is a bit of an odd case, as she doesn't fully qualify by herself to be a servant, and instead piggybacks off of Guan Yu's own summoning in very rare cases. As the source of the myth behind Yu's spirit appearing before, or even killing soldiers of the Wu kingdom, she can manifest in his place as Berserker. As her true name has been lost to history however, she is effectively "Guan Yu" for all intents and purposes, though she doesn't mind being given a new name by her Master.

[KoL]

Ok, I'll try to have my CSs done before the weekend.

Since we already have a mage that deals with metal, I'll go with my secondary Master idea instead of reusing Othis. And for Servants, I'm between Cleopatra and maybe Mordred at this point.

I think that my Master may be an unusually skilled mage (around Brand or Grand rank) with a Sealing Designation on her head. The Kara no Kyoukai vibes I'm working with are strong enough to make me want to do someone with a focus in more esoteric things like Mystic Eyes, Origins, Reality Marbles, etc. The question is if I still have the creative power to put together a KnK style character.

PS: I'm leaning towards Mordred now, since this just looks too good: https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3409410

[Reflection]

From Spears to Swords

Name: Diarmuid Ua Duibhne
Class: Saber
Appearance: A True Knight of Fianna
Personality: Saber is an extremely proud and noble knight who wishes to serve his lord to the best of his abilities. The geis laid upon him by Gráinne was taken by Saber as a test of his pride. He never once blamed her for forcing it upon him, and he truly admired her ability to throw away her pride, title, and future for the sake of her love. He was constantly distressed by the fact that he betrayed his lord, and even as he died while Fionn did nothing, he did not blame his lord for his actions. Saber believed that despite the cruel twist of fate that led him down this path, the days spent with his lord and his love were used to the fullest.

Stats:
Strength: B+
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Mana: D
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: A

Class Skills:
- Magic Resistance A+
- Riding B
Personal Skills:
- Mana Burst (Jump) A: An increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with Magical Energy and instantly expelling it. Simply put, recreating the effect of a jet burst by expending large amounts of Magical Energy. For Diurmuid, this power is concentrated in his powerful legs. Accelerating his speed in leaps and bounds, literally. His speed as such can only increase.
- Honor of the Knights of Fianna B: A skill derived from the desire to protect the honor of a great kingdom. A skill that applies Battle Continuation and Bravery together. When damaged, or acting in defense of another, this skill activates further, granting Diarmuid strength and endurance in the face of increased danger. A Skill that make those who have it become more powerful as they are inflicted more pain. The cost used to heal injuries via magecraft or similar methods is reduced.
- Eye of the Mind (True) B: A heightened capacity for observation, refined through training, discipline and experience. A danger-avoidance ability that utilizes the intelligence collected up to the current time as the basis in order to predict the opponent’s activity and change the current situation. This is not a result of talent, but an overwhelming amount of combat experience. A weapon wielded by none other than a mortal, gained through tenacious training. So long there is even a 1% chance of a comeback, this ability greatly improves the chances of winning.
- Love Spot C: It is because of this curse that he is known as 'Diarmuid of the Love Spot'. A woman who confronts Diarmuid gains a strong love affection for him. Effects are similar to those of Charm-type Mystic Eyes. Avoidable with the Magic Resistance Skill.

Noble Phantasm(s):
Name: Moralltach: Surging Seas of Fury
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
Effects: If we were to pick the strongest among the many weapons Diarmuid Ua Duibhne wields, it could only be this fearsome demonic sword. A blow bringing certain death, another certain victory. Unsheathing the demonic sword, Diarmuid is gifted with a blade of instant death, bringing defeat and ruin to the opponents. The demonic sword Moralltach, which can almost control even destiny, was awarded to him by the Celtic God of of the Sea and Underworld Manannán. Manannán is for sure the deity who gave the Noble Phantasm Fragarach to the Sun God Lugh, he possessed many Noble Phantasms and was a being who donates.
Should the blade strike flesh, death is sure to come. As the demonic blade's power rips through the body of a target, and tearing their life away.
When the true name is called, Time and space ripple and collide. Jumping Diarmuid directly to the target, and applying a single strike. At this time, Moralltach, resembling the "leg of the god Manannáns" from the legends, becomes the three blades to tear the enemy into pieces. This, combined with the blade's ability to kill with one strike, is a a certain death to those who do not possess a means to block all three strikes at once, or avoid.

Name: Beagalltach: Ripples of Passion
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
Effects: Known as the blade of small fury, it is a counterpart to Diarmuid's Gáe Buidhe in that when not using Moralltach he would use Beagalltach in its steed. While Moralltach is a demonic blade, Beagalltach is a heavenly blade. It passively draws in magical energy, feeding it into Diarmuid. The blade is also a perfect defense, as it defends Diarmuid against attacks much like an angel would. It guides itself to intercept any attack directed at its wielder. Any sword or arrow can thus be considered 'worthless' against the defense this blade grants him.

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

[DocRock]

Ok, I'll try to have my CSs done before the weekend.

Since we already have a mage that deals with metal, I'll go with my secondary Master idea instead of reusing Othis. And for Servants, I'm between Cleopatra and maybe Mordred at this point.

I think that my Master may be an unusually skilled mage (around Brand or Grand rank) with a Sealing Designation on her head. The Kara no Kyoukai vibes I'm working with are strong enough to make me want to do someone with a focus in more esoteric things like Mystic Eyes, Origins, Reality Marbles, etc. The question is if I still have the creative power to put together a KnK style character.

PS: I'm leaning towards Mordred now, since this just looks too good: https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3409410

@KoL

I mean, I don't know if my first proper attempt at a Fae master will get passed, and I personally have no issue sharing magecrafts, since I'll admit I'm still learning, even with three or four years of fate exposure due to friends who play. And FGO helping me a tad. And my own reading.

Mordred and Cleo are both adorable and deserve many hugs.

[Raineh Daze]

Shiny

• Name: Gilgamesh
• Class: Gilgamesh
• Appearance:
• Personality:
  EGO.
  It is impossible to talk about Gilgamesh without acknowledging that his ego is colossal beyond reckoning, even to the extent that someone who should never reasonably lose a fight is entirely capable of doing so based on the size of his own pride. Anything the king does is absolute law and right simply because he is the one doing it. If someone unworthy annoys him, then Gilgamesh thinks it's perfectly fine to just eliminate them on the spot.
  Fortunately, whilst he maintains that the world and everything in it belongs to him, the act of actually administering it would be an excessive amount of work--one that he is in no hurry to take back up again so long as humanity itself doesn't fail and disappoint him too much. Fusang City, with its high proportion of Servants, magi, and advanced technology, does a lot to counteract the more negative aspects of modern culture--he's not in such a bad mood that he's inclined to just administer judgement at the drop of a hat.
  Collecting things is more like an act of breathing, and as a wealth magnet he has no need to ever consider working, so his current attitude can be described as simply pleasure-seeking. Or, if one felt particularly brave, calling him a NEET.
• Stats: Let it never be said that the King of Heroes is physically meagre.
  
  • Strength: B
  • Endurance: B
  • Agility: B
  • Mana: A
  • Luck: A
  • Noble Phantasm: EX
• Class Skills:
  
  • Independent Action: A. Backup from the Master is required for the use of Noble Phantasms. However, with Gilgamesh being Gilgamesh, he probably has something to get around that requirement amongst his countless treasures.
  • Magic Resistance: C. Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals. Does not include the resistance of his armour to magical attack, however.
• Personal Skills:
  
  • Charisma: A+. At this point, it is no longer popularity or skill, but rather a kind of spell (curse) in itself. Often praised as the greatest king, Gilgamesh’s ability to command and lead great armies is excellent. An egotistical Gilgamesh radiating with self-confidence will surely boost the morale of his army to an extremely high level.
  • Collector: EX. The 'talent' to collect high quality goods—a 'luck' that draws rare items into the possession of the Servant. As a collector of treasures, and having gathered all the fruits of civilisation into his treasury in life, Gilgamesh has incomparable success at gathering high quality goods and treasures into his possession.
  • Divinity: B (A+). Two-thirds god and created specifically by the gods, Gilgamesh would naturally have the highest rank of divinity below fully transforming into a god--but his own dislike of the gods ranks this down.
  • Golden Rule: A. A skill that measures one's ability to acquire money--at this rank, he's fated to a life of incredibly luxury. Money will fall into his lap without any effort. This, like Collector, stems from his acquisition of all the world's treasures during life.
• Noble Phantasm(s):
  • Name: Gate of Babylon: The King's Treasure
  • Rank: E-A++
  • Type: Anti-Unit (at least, when being directly weaponised)
  • Appearance: Again, when directly being weaponised.
  • Effects: Gate of Babylon is the connection to the King's Treasury; the way Gilgamesh accesses the vast, uncountable treasures that he has access to. They can be summoned to his hand, pull weapons out, or--and this sums up the vast majority of his fighting tendencies--arrange weapons floating in the air only to railgun them at the current target of his displeasure.
    The contents of the treasury include the prototype for every Noble Phantasm and any item that humanity would later construct--including his armour and such things as Enkidu--and this means that it might be the most multi-purpose NP possible. This includes everything necessary for the purposes of using a meal. It also includes a noble phantasm that retrieves everything else fired from it.
    People can also be transported in the treasury.
  
  
  • Name: Sword of Rupture, Ea.
  • Rank: EX
  • Type: Anti-World
  • Appearance: Yes, it's a drill.
  • Effects: The most powerful offensive Noble Phantasm. When Enuma Elish is released, depending upon the level, the vortex it creates can merely be a torrent capable of overpowering even Excalibur--or it can begin to pull in the entirety of the World and show the hell before creation. If not stopped, it would indeed destroy the world just as it supposedly formed it in the first place.
    Aside from being usable on every scale from obliterating a single target upwards, trying to understand it with enhanced senses is a bad idea. Deities could probably understand the Divine Construct, but it's still magnitudes above the creations of deities of human origin.
• Alignment: Chaotic Good
• Changes: He's canon!

As discussed, guy's in a pretty good mood and not really interested in fighting. If there's a tournament? He'd force people to let him judge it and maybe fight the winner. So many Servants is bound to draw the King of Heroes.

[DocRock]

Nice, though you are missing an NP or two, but I doubt anyone is gonna care about his clairvoyant NP. I forget its name off the top of my head. Or his personal dreadnought.

Before one asks, I know a guy who is religious when it comes to documenting all the NPs Gilgamesh has.

[Raineh Daze]

I thought about including the Clairvoyance, but it's Gil. He's liable to ignore it 90% of the time and it's noted he actively suppresses it.

And I am not, FFS, documenting Enkidu, Vimana, Vajra, Dainsleif, Marduk, Houtengeki...

[DocRock]

Yeah, I don't blame you, too much.

And yeah, he does ignore a lot. Like the futures he saw himself get eaten by a girl, lose to a kid...it goes on. I think its fine as is anyway, because yeah, no need to document anything beyond what the average player is gonna know. I just noted the interesting stuff.

[TheFake]

Just going to drop this in here.

Lugh

Class: Lancer
Appearance:

Personality:

Lugh is a leader, having lead the Tuatha Dé Danann into war against the Fomorians after proving her worth across a wide number of disciplines. She so impressed Nuada that she was made leader of the Tuatha Dé Danann in order to lead them in battle against the Fomorians where she killed Balor herself. Lugh is audacious and stubborn, but not callous. She showed mercy to the half Fomor Bres and healed wounds suffered by Cu Cuchulainn. Lugh is also seen as a trickster, sometimes changing her appearance to seem older and appear weak.

Stats:

Endurance: C
Agility: A+
Mana: C
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: C

Personal Skills:

Battle Continuation: B
Protection from Arrows: C
Disengage: C
Divinity: B

Noble Phantasm(s):

Name: Areadbhair, The Slaughterer
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Army
Appearance: A spear wreathed in azure flames, flying forth on its own to strike out at enemies.
Effects:

Lugh had no need to wield the spear herself. It was alive and thirsted for blood so strongly that it could only be kept at rest by dowsing it's head in a sleeping potion. When drawn in battle it struggles to fly free, lashing out with searing flames until it is unleashed. Unleashed, the spear flies out on its own, striking out repeatedly against all foes until none remain standing. The weapon is sheathed in a fiery aura, cutting through armour and capable of striking down an army of a thousand men in a heartbeat.

Alignment: Chaotic Good
Changes:

Lugh was seen as a skillful, youthful hero. This youthful look was entirely the fault of her being female while masquerading as a male warrior.

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

@DocRock: Edison fine. Not-Zero Two fine (though she still needs a surname). Both accepted.

@Rin: Blurbs on the bookloli's skills, please. Doesn't have to be long, but Meanwhile really needs one.

@RolePlayerRoxas: Not-beardman fine. Accepted.

@Raineh Daze: Okay, there was an extensive amount of discussion and self-imposed handicaps (because Gil), so coupled with the setting and all of those, I'll accept goldy.

@Reflection: A few things, I think.
1. Saber Diarmuid doesn't have a 'guaranteed win' off of popping Moralltach in the JP flavor text. It's marked as a 'demonic sword' capable of instakilling with one strike, yes, but not 'guaranteed victory'.
2. Mana Burst != Mana Burst (Jump). It's a weird distinction to make, but it's important because they aren't mutually exclusive. He doesn't have the former; it's the latter instead. There's even a quip about it in his profile on the JP version where it's explained. So.

Yeah. Changes need to be made there.

Also, Master time. Woo.

• Name: Liu Jiang (Jason Liu)
• Age: 17
• Appearance: "Eh? Oh, yeah, sure."
• Personality: Though generally laid back, Jason’s penchant for trouble leads to him occasionally poking his nose where it usually doesn’t belong. He’s friendly to those close to him, but that ever-subtle sense of jealousy of the distinct amount of people who can use magic does cause him to feel inferior and a tad bitter at times. For good reason, of course.
  Despite that fact, most of the time that he ends up involved in magecraft, it’s by complete accident. The Servants that live in the city are everywhere around him, but the sense of being unable to even enter that realm despite living in it acts as a weight chaining his mind down.
• Abilities: Jason has no notable features in terms of magecraft, as he cannot perform magecraft (as far as most others are aware). He does, however, remember a great deal from various classes and lectures on the nature of magecraft, and his background allows him to figure out more about weird magitech technology that has come about as a result of the creation of Fusang City (and, by extension, their contact with Atlas Academy).
• History: A rather distinct non-magus, Jason lived a fairly normal life on the West Coast. His parents, immigrants from China, were comparatively well off from business ventures that they had pursued earlier in life (having been involved in the tech boom of the early 2000s), and had thus settled down near Silicon Valley to pursue this further. Of course, Jason had also had the fortune (or misfortune) of magic being revealed to the world. Though he lived his life close to the world of machines, the idea that fantasy wasn’t so far off was appealing enough to him to the point where he was begging to go to Fusang City to study once it had made its global entrance.
  A combination of personal curiosity from his parents and Jason’s own insistence allowed his attendance at age 10, though only on the condition that he maintain his grades while abroad. With that message taken to heart, the young boy was sent off to the city proposing the colliding of the worlds of science and magic. Here it was that he lived for the next few years, studying the knowledge that was available to him to the best of his ability.
  That being said, though, he still hasn’t actually summoned a Servant or even scratched the surface of learning magecraft, so most of his experience with the latter outside of the ‘normal’ courses has been studying theory than anything practical.
• Other: He has magic circuits despite not having practiced magecraft, so it’s not wholly impossible to learn magecraft.

[Rin]

@Rin: Blurbs on the bookloli's skills, please. Doesn't have to be long, but Meanwhile really needs one.

@PKMNB0Y

Done and done.

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

@Rin: Accepted.

[DocRock]

Roger, I'll add the last name in a moment.

[VitaVitaAR]

• Name: Kobayashi Seria
• Age: 16
• Appearance: "Were you talking to me?" Seria is around 144 cm/4'9 in height.
• Personality: Seria is a fairly prideful girl. She is also a highly competitive one. Perhaps it is for the best that she now dwells in a location where competitions between Servants are frequent, as she absolutely would desire to prove the superiority of the figure that she has summoned. Indeed, as the child of a rather accomplished magus, Seria values her own power a great deal. She also has a somewhat caustic personality, often rather surly and aggressive towards others and quick to point out what she sees as personal failings. However, beneath this prideful and aggressive attitude, there is another side to Seria. Knowing her family sent her to Fusang in hopes of continuing the family line, something she currently has no interest in, has left her quick to push others away. This is not simply due to disliking the fact that her future is being decided for her and that she is being pushed towards a certain outcome, but also due to more personal reasons she is unwilling to be forthcoming with. Due to her petite size, she is sometimes mistaken for being younger then she actually is by a few years(usually about 13), something she dislikes.
• Abilities: Seria was born with a high number of magic circuits. Not only was she born with a large number, they were all also of a very high quality. As a result, she is a highly capable magus with an excellent capacity for performing potent spells consistently and in large numbers. Additionally, her Affinity is for not one, but two elements: Fire and Earth. This allows her a greater deal of versatility when casting spells, and increased compatibility with many destructive and defensive spells as well. Among these include igniting objects, generating 'bullets' of fire, and superheating a patch of the earth in front of her in order to create magma. She is also versed in various staples of magecraft such as reinforcement. It can be said that Seria could be considered a prodigy when magecraft is considered.
• History: Seria is the daughter of a union between the British magus Riandra Vionne Escarola and the Japanese magus Kobayashi Nobuhiko. This union was a very practical one, and while her parents did come to love one another the initial intent behind their marriage was purely in the name of producing an excellent heir by taking advantage of their highly compatible bloodlines. And, indeed, this goal was accomplished with the birth of Seria. As soon as she was capable of comprehending it, her training in magecraft began. She excelled at her understanding, and her upbringing brought with it a great deal of pride. She should be proud of her capabilities, proud to be the daughter of such a powerful union of magus bloodlines. And indeed, she was instilled with this pride, and a highly competitive attitude. For a time, Seria did not mind that aspects of her life had been planned ahead of time. After all, as the daughter of two powerful magus bloodlines, it was only right that her life would be directed towards maximum success. It was only recently, when it became clear that her family desired for her to further bloodline, that she began to find herself growing unsatisfied with this direction. Indeed, Seria was sent to Fusang with the intent to advertise her to potential suitors, among other reasons.
• Other: Seria is fluent in both Japanese and English, though her Japanese is somewhat better than her English due to her upbringing in Japan. She is also sufficient in Mandarin.

When I have no other personality ideas I default to tsundere I don't know why. D:

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

@VitaVitaAR: Accepted.

@DocRock: Edits good. Accepted.

[DocRock]

Looking forward to the fun starting, heh.

[Pie Flavor]

I cannot teach anybody anything, I can only make them think.

Servant

• Name: Socrates
• Class: Avenger
• Personality:
  Despite summoned in this particular class container, a person could do a double take at Avenger and still reluctantly wonder if a bad joke was made. Wondering if someone is yanking their chain or if what they are saying is actually true, as dubious it may seem.
  
  As an aloof and bubbly character that ways seems to always be in the mood for a conversation if you got the time to spare or even waste if you want to procrastinate on something. He doesn't mind, finding whoever is in his company is an interesting puzzle to be solved, with people living in their own individual bubbles separated from one another.
  
  Inquisitive and thoughtful as he unravels the world through questions asked in conversation and exploration that strikes deeper to the foundation. Finding interest in unearthing the true nature of people as they discover who they are as individuals as they search within themselves. For the journey to reach the end of the goal is part of the fun that stimulates the mind for the future.

• Parameters:
  
  • Strength: D
  • Endurance: D
  • Agility: D
  • Mana: B
  • Luck: D
  • Noble Phantasm: B+

• Class Skills:
  
  • Avenger: C
    
    Accepting the misfortunes that fell upon Athens and making himself as the scapegoat to cleanse the city from the strife that it was suffering from. He sought to hone his fellow citizen's sense of righteousness and ability to question all throughout his life, accepting their resentment in order to better themselves. The more hatred he gathers, the more persuasive he becomes rather than increasing in physical strength.
  
  
  • Self-Replenishment (Mana): D+
    
    When engaging or receiving any kind of offensive action, a small amount of magical energy is generated from Avenger, with the debate and challenge of ideas strangely qualifying for the activation of this skill. When Avenger operates toward the promotion of order and maintenance of the law, he gains the bonus modifier that allows magical energy to slowly generate autonomously into his reserves. It is always active with his Noble Phantasm, being just enough to cover the cost of Phronēsis and always keep it manifested.
  
  
  • Memory Correction: C-
    
    A skill that generally increases the damage of an attack from a critical opening that a target may have from forgetfulness. For Avenger, it instead serves as something for him to always remember his opponent's argument, secondarily used to increase the damage against them when contradiction occurs that results in the negative modifier.

• Personal Skills:
  
  • Innocent Creation: EX
    
    There is absolutely nothing that has been recorded about Avenger from himself personally or even anything that was created by him, being an individual that would've have disappeared into the past had it not been for others who recorded his legacy. Influenced greatly from his pupil Plato, Avenger was known to be a Lover of Wisdom who fully dedicated himself to seeking the truth and was one of the founders for Western Philosophy.
  
  
  • Single-Mindedness: A+
    
    The ability for an individual to immerse themselves in something subject, exhibiting a superhuman degree of focus. Avenger himself is a special case, as his origin was revealed to himself from the Oracle of Delphi, fueling his eternal search for the one singular truth that was hidden beneath everything. In this case, it manifests itself as a version of mental pollution almost absolute in nature which prevents people from truly understanding Avenger or affecting him in any meaningful way.
  
  
  • Connection to the Root: D
    
    At the end of his life, during the last fading moments of his life was where he saw the end of all things, the truth that was the origin of all things. A gift from a greater entity that allowed the chance of Avenger to momentarily glimpse at the Root which connected Avenger to that 'source' of wisdom. Influencing him as a Servant, most noticeably causing pure magical damage to be inflicted with his voice vibrates with ideas and concepts that are being attempted to be understood by lesser minds.
    
    With a luck check, Avenger can attempt to haphazardly recall information from the Root, most likely failing in the process and inflicting damage onto himself. But as a side effect, this skill also provides a large resistance against illusions, allowing Avenger to ground himself and see the truth of things, discerning their properties.
  
  
  • Charisma: C-
    
    The rhetoric of Avenger is extremely compelling and conductive to those who wish to learn more but against those who innately disagree will become more entrenched in their mindset. With some of the most incompatible, they may even become enemies rather than allies when he opens his mouth, which is kind of understandable as he is annoying at times.

Noble Phantasm:

Noble Phantasm 1

• Name: Phronēsis - Purity of Thought, Sense, Judgement, Wisdom, and Prudence
• Rank: C+
• Type: Anti-Unit
• Appearance: The appearance of Phronēsis is more of an aura that surrounds Avenger, barely noticeable other than the meager glow that comes off his skin that's probably only noticeable in the dark. When in the presence of something 'Evil' or 'Negative' the glow is intensified, being noticeable as it extends from Avenger as it tries wards away any influence.
• Effects:

Avenger believe that if the wrongdoing and behavior that was not virtuous resulted from ignorance, then the one who did it knew no better. Saying that a person who was virtuous in action, thought, and spirit would not be able to be wronged by a person less virtuous than them. He lived up to this standard and in the end, Socrates accepted his death sentence when most thought he would simply leave Athens, feeling he could neither run away or go against the will of the community. His valor was remarkable that manifested itself as a Noble Phantasm that is always active, protecting Avenger from harm so long as he remains virtuous, taking off a set amount of damage [ C Rank] against attacks while also increasing the process of healing.

Against those that are of the 'Evil' or 'Negative' alignment, the difference in morality between Avenger and the target is so great that this Noble Phantasm gains the bonus modifier. Becoming a potent conceptual defense of 'purity', where he stated that no lesser individual may truly harm the virtuous even if physical harm fell upon them. As they could not affect the purity of his soul or it's integrity, with only himself being the one determining the destination of where it shall go.

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Noble Phantasm 2

• Name: Law of Athens - Daemon of Law, Purity, and Wisdom
• Rank: B++
• Type: Anti-Chaos
• Appearance: More conceptually when it is passively used, looking around Avenger, his environment seems to be more orderly than other places. Things just seems to smoothly go along as intended with nothing too dramatic happening and accidents seem less likely to occur in such a pleasant environment. When actively used, they manifest in the form of chains made from words
• Effects:

Background

Daemons are existences founded within the 6th Imaginary Aspect, called forth by human desires and wishes, that materialize as Phantasms formed from the thoughts of humanity. Acting to realize the wishes they come to be invested within by distorted means.

Born within the city of Athens, a existence built upon the laws of society that were created by the citizens and wish for them to be upheld and followed allowed for this daemon to be born. 'The Law of Athens' as Avenger described the entity was the designation that was given for the Daemon and in it's prime held substantial power even during its decline where the government of Athens deteriorated and people began to doubt the law's ability to fulfill their needs.

It was a daemon that favored a certain individual, almost finding similarity in another being who shared held unshakable faith in the virtue and laws of the people, seeking to improve them so that they could be the best for everyone. To attach itself to Avenger who was the individual it found was almost effortless, being an anchor for such an entity like him was second nature but influenced the world around him. Rather than fully possessing the host and destroying such a compatible vessel, the daemon exerted its powers through Avenger and allowed them to shape Athens with their words. In his pursuit for Akasha, his death planned by his opponents weren't simply to spite the philosopher but aimed to get rid of a host for the daemon, with both following their doctrine to the exact lettering which they took advantage of.

In the end of his lifetime, the Daemon empathized with the philosopher and in return for the man's duty, who have went through poverty and strife was awarded a single gift that it aligned with. Before detaching itself from its anchor, it opened a path towards Akasha within Avenger in those final moments that pushed the existence that was him to its limit, reaching the pinnacle of [The Truth that upholds Society].

Manifested as a servant, he is the potential host to the Daemon 'Law of Athens' who has long since past from the Modern World, his existence has been influence from such an relationship.

Effect

Avenger's conceptual nature brings about the 'laws of society' that influences the natural and predetermined outcome of events to correctly come into fruition. Providing feedback against unnatural phenomenon that may try to influence the system and disturb the process in the form of negative modifiers, as entities which have a Luck Parameter or fate manipulating abilities above [C Rank] receive a single negative modifier on them for each rank they go above it.

When the Noble Phantasm is consciously activated, Avenger can manifested the laws imprinted on the land and impose the rules upon an individual, affecting them in a variety of ways, both detrimental and beneficial in possibilities. Functioning as a type of conceptual ability that ensures that the laws will be followed, harming those that do not follow them while ensuring the safety of those who do, as what the ideal laws should do.

Avenger's overall ability to use this Noble Phantasm comes from the seed within him to birth the Daemon 'Law of Athens' should the opportunity to cultivate that piece ever take place. With the two additional modifiers coming from Avenger progression of becoming the host of a True Demon, with his nature becoming less of something that can be classified as a Servant.

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• Alignment: Lawful Good
• Changes: Liberal and creative application of lore... Hopefully its fine!

@PKMNB0Y
Avenger clocking in for work, time to crank overdrive on some students minds once he gets the final look over.

[Cu Chulainn]

Ahh, after reading the premise, I just realized this may be the best place to app a canon Servant I've been itching to play recently...

Would Napoleon be a fine addition to this roster?

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

@Pie Flavor: As discussed, accepted.

@Cu Chulainn: Cannonman would be fine.

[KoL]

Well, here goes nothing. I hope she's not too confusing since we've already discussed some of the details of this character yesterday.

I need an editor ASAP

• Name: Hinami Asakura
• Age: 24 (apparent), over 400 (presumed real age)
• Appearance:

• Personality: Hinami is normally a calm and collected person. After all, she has seen enough of the world to know that hasty and ill-thought ideas never go forward for long enough. That said, she’s not one to dwell in an endless recursion of schemes and countermeasures as well.
After setting her sights on a goal she’ll work relentlessly towards completing it, though her methods may vary depending on her current physical state. In fact her whole way of being tends to do so as well, becoming more brash when she’s younger and more cold and calculating when she grows older.
She enjoys working on mysteries, reading, and coffee but isn’t too fond of drinking and smoking. If pressed, she would say that she likes cats and dogs in an equal way, but Hinami avoids keeping pets for the same reason that she tends to put on a cold mask to avoid making deeper relationships with other humans. Living a life that’s just too long tends to make you desensitized to the value of bonds that’ll come and go no matter what you do. Though, deep beneath the surface she harbors the desire to have and raise children, which is just about the only thing she was unable to do in her whole life, despite falling in love and getting engaged in relationships multiple times over the years.

• Abilities: Hinami is both skilled and knowledgeable enough to be considered equal to a Magus with the rank of Grand; the apex of modern magecraft. In fact, she could hold such a title if were not for the fact that she’s at odds with the Association. Hinami is experienced in most, if not all, system of magecraft known to the Association, but prefers to use elemental invocation spells whenever possible.
However, what makes her an uncommon individual in the eyes of the Association are her Mystic Eyes, which are a byproduct of being awakened to her Origin, known as Motion. In practice, Hinami’s Origin is connected to circular motion and cycles, making her whole life always go in circles. It’s usually represented by the fact that she grows and then young, always trapped between the early days of elderhood and the late days of childhood. Her Mystic Eyes reflect this, with the ability of reversing the flow things (usually entropy) when she’s on her deaging cycle and speeding the same flow when she’s aging forward.
The fact that Hinami’s Mystic Eyes edge on the territory of Magic is the main source of the problems she has with the Association who would do anything to get their hands on them, including slapping a Sealing Designation on Hinami’s back.

• History: A magus that is old enough to be considered a legend between within the halls of the Mage’s Association. In fact, it is common knowledge that she might as well be older than the Association itself, but after living (existing) for such a long time, even Hinami isn’t sure of it anymore. In fact, she forgot even her real name — if she ever had one to begin with.
Her story began centuries ago, when she was a mere normal girl that happened to be the only survivor of a village decimated by a plague. Her life was spared thanks to the compassion of an alchemist that took her under his wing, teaching her the basics of magecraft. To the great majority of people in the same situation as she, her story would end here, as she lived the rest of her days with her teacher, inherited his talents and passed them forward to her own chosen disciple.
However, that wasn’t the case for Hinami. During the time she lived with her teacher, she got awakened to her Origin and, as befits any who does so, was enthralled by it. The first time she noticed this was shortly after she finished training her own pupil and became a hermit seeking a secluded place to pass the remainder of her days.
Nevertheless, death never came to Hinami. Instead of getting older, she noticed that her complexion became more and more jovial with each passing day and, after a few more decades — when she was just a child once again — her aging process reverted once more and she began to grow older, only to repeat the same cycle anew.
After this point she has been living in the shadows, in a manner not dissimilar to individuals such as the Head of the Makiri clan, seeing the world of mystery grow into the world of technology and finally have the two of them meet up in their search for the Root.
While Hinami usually tried to keep to herself for ages, she couldn’t avoid the pull of her Origin, directing her to Fusang City. In fact, she came to believe that her whole existence was meant to guide her to this place, to see the possibilities that come when two paths to the Swirl mix up together.

• Other: Using her Mystic Eyes accelerates the aging/deaging process in an amount proportional to the amount of energy she manipulates. Because of this, not even Hinami is sure of how old she’s. Furthermore, she’s currently at a deaging cycle, so she can use the “Regression” aspect of her Mystic Eyes. She has about twelve years’ worth of energy to manipulate before she begins to age forward again and is forced to use “Mystic Eyes of Advancement” for the next seven decades or so.

PS: I'm still thinking whether or not I'll do a second character but if I do it'll be Mordred, because someone more action-y would be good for a change.