[OOC] Fenix Tear [Invite | Ask Only]

[Letter Bee]

@Urizen, I just edit my Character Sheet in the Characters Tab, right?

[Danyel]

@Letter BeeYeah

[Gerlando]

@The Jest

Immovable Wind Arts - it's alright on its own, just know his cuts can still be blocked

Healing wind arts - magic first aid, useful but can't heal massive wounds, makes sense since he is not a dedicated healer

Hurricane Shield - has many limits and can't do it for too long, I think it's fine

Furry form: Kitsune - base furry is good, trade defence for offence and sword for fists

Fox Flame - burning the soul is still a potential problem lore-wise, but the effect now being disorientation and vertigo is much better

Hollow Forest Mist - I actually like these illusions with actual counterplay

Furry Magic: Guiding Star - this has so much text T.T , so the basic idea is fine (tho a 10yo using psychology to that extent is crazy)
but again with the last paragraph, about forcefully burning away the spirit, feels more like a Devil Slayer Exorcist than guiding the spirits to the afterlife

I like calling him a Psychopomp because he guides the spirit to the afterlife, while an Exorcist just destroys the spirit so they fuck off

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tldr:

Kotaro is a freak of magic

know that Immovable Wind Arts can be blocked by magic shields and Earth/Metal magic (pokemon style)

Fox flame burning the soul could be an issue for the lore, but we can say he's just charring/singing. Disorientation is cool

Guiding Star still feels like a Devil Slayer Exorcist to me, all because of that last paragraph with the 'forcefully burning away' part

[Danyel]

^Yūdōboshi
_{Star Guide}
誘 導 星
Guiding Star
^{Type: White Arts, Shaman Exorcism, Organic Link Magic, Ancient Spell, Enchantment, Law
Range: AoE
Target: Yōkai Exclusive}
The venerated reijutsu of Hizuru no Senko-Tai that's bequeathed to Kotaro by the highest honor of discipleship as a coming of age rites upon the culmination of the Raigetsu Magics.

An ablazingly enchanted radiant blueflame-solacing starbeads illuminated mirage, Guiding Star glistens wayward with the unresting souls, emotionally entangled and pacifying to its mechanism. A wordysome series of prayerful sacraments divised to encroach yet quell the unresting souls from their earthly strongholds, flickering set ablazing them to resoluting rest by sevenfold. An Ancient Spell requiring heartfelt sincerity to cast, therefore ineffective if the heart is at the wrong road.

Those without remorse of their actions, cancels this Ancient Spell immediately.

Poetically built to precise in Kitsune aesthetic, Hizuru no Senko-Tai is established handling nine spirits at once and at a time in a bustling 99-meter radius likened to the Mythical Nine Tailed Fox. Kotaro by virtue of high magic potency is established with three tails, making him a Sanbigitsune whose range is 33-meters radius true to his moniker; Tenko no Kotaro, Heavenly Fox Kotaro. Neophyte in his skill grasp, Kotaro earnestly trains to master Guiding Star.

Likewise, the penalty of improper execution is likened to abusing and finding a cheating loophole for kicks will warrant users to be cursed by Ankhseram.

[The Jest]

^Yūdōboshi
_{Star Guide}
誘 導 星
Guiding Star
The venerated reijutsu of Hizuru no Senko-Tai that's bequeathed to Kotaro by the highest honor of discipleship as a coming of age rites upon the culmination of the Raigetsu Magics.

An ablazingly enchanted radiant blueflame-solacing starbeads illuminated mirage, Guiding Star glistens wayward with the unresting souls, emotionally entangled and pacifying to its mechanism. A wordysome series of prayerful sacraments divised to encroach yet quell the unresting souls from their earthly strongholds, flickering set ablazing them to resoluting rest by sevenfold. An Ancient Spell requiring sincerity

@Urizen

Thanks for this.

@Gerlando With that, I've made all the necessary edits to Kotaro's CS for now. ^^

[Danyel]

@The Jest

^Yūdōboshi
_{Star Guide}
誘 導 星
Guiding Star
^{Type: White Arts, Shaman Exorcism, Organic Link Magic, Ancient Spell, Enchantment, Law
Range: AoE
Target: Yōkai Exclusive}
The venerated reijutsu of Hizuru no Senko-Tai that's bequeathed to Kotaro by the highest honor of discipleship as a coming of age rites upon the culmination of the Raigetsu Magics.

An ablazingly enchanted radiant blueflame-solacing starbeads illuminated mirage, Guiding Star glistens wayward with the unresting souls, emotionally entangled and pacifying to its mechanism. A wordysome series of prayerful sacraments divised to encroach yet quell the unresting souls from their earthly strongholds, flickering set ablazing them to resoluting rest by sevenfold. An Ancient Spell requiring heartfelt sincerity to cast, therefore ineffective if the heart is at the wrong road.

Those without remorse of their actions, cancels this Ancient Spell immediately.

Poetically built to precise in Kitsune aesthetic, Hizuru no Senko-Tai is established handling nine spirits at once and at a time in a bustling 99-meter radius likened to the Mythical Nine Tailed Fox. Kotaro by virtue of high magic potency is established with three tails, making him a Sanbigitsune whose range is 33-meters radius true to his moniker; Tenko no Kotaro, Heavenly Fox Kotaro. Neophyte in his skill grasp, Kotaro earnestly trains to master Guiding Star.

Likewise, the penalty of improper execution is likened to abusing and finding a cheating loophole for kicks will warrant users to be cursed by Ankhseram.

[Thayr]

Regrettably, due to medical problems sapping a lot of my energy and time, I'll have to bow out of the RP.

I'm fine with my characters coming under control of the DMs, to either exist as NPCs or to quietly leave the setting as well.

Sorry all.

[King Kindred]

Regrettably, due to medical problems sapping a lot of my energy and time, I'll have to bow out of the RP.

I'm fine with my characters coming under control of the DMs, to either exist as NPCs or to quietly leave the setting as well.

Sorry all.

@Thayr

I'm praying for your health and recovery!