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@OwO

Returned Sherry is the extreme is the other direction now lol. A whole year of being hazed in prison ending in Demon torture. She would start crying.
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@Silver Carrot Ah, I just caught something on a re-read: For GM reasons, everybody kinda needs to be present at this final battle in the port of Hadrum before the "regression" gets triggered. So the demons could've still dragged Sherry out of the cell and tortured her, but maybe they kept her alive as a meat shield or something until the Demon Army marched on Hadrum. As twisted as it would be, maybe she sees everything unfold while she's hanging from a cross or something of that nature?
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Looking good, here's a few comments I had:

Yo! Thanks for the feedback:
For the first point, I edited it, now his Physical is down to 1st.

For the second point, his Berserker deal will be his character arc, currently he doesn't know why he does it, and I am not sure either, depending on how I develop the character the root of it may change but first he has to find it. After that it would come to the overcoming step, either accept it, control it, or reject it.

And finally, for the last point, I don't have strong feelings either way, thought I would like to create the NPC companion who died.
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Is it possible to consolidate all the information so that I don't have to jump through different pages to find info?
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@Teyao Okay! No need to rush, but to create the NPC, you don't necessarily need to use the full CS unless you just want to. You could leave off Abilities and Equipment, and just change First Life to a normal backstory/character summary. Whether you wanna use an image or just type out a basic appearance is up to you.

Is it possible to consolidate all the information so that I don't have to jump through different pages to find info?

I'm working on the OOC at the moment to try and do that very thing, if I don't get it up tonight it will for sure be up tomorrow. I think the most relevant things you'll need should be with the CSs, but if you have questions on other stuff just let me know!

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That's good to know.
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@OwO@Silver Carrot@Rune_Alchemist@SilverPaw
Loving the timelines and planning ideas. As I was reading through the stuff you've all done so far to try and mesh it with my own ideas behind the scenes, I came up with some stuff. You can freely ignore it if you wish, it's mostly just me rambling and coming to my own conclusions:


Also, OOC will be up today!
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First of all: Sorry for disappearing these days! Didn't have time to sit and write and trying to make my character sheet from my phone clearly wasn't working.

But I'm back!


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@MooiEen Ah, the classic "No dating! No parties! You study, be doctah!" to "Why you not married!? Why you have no friends?!" parenting style. An excellent setup for interfamily conflict now that she has the opportunity to do everything the way SHE wanted to!

The only question I have is also about her parents, since you've given them a good bit of inferred characterization through the descriptions. Since her mother ran away from battle, I know for sure it can't have been Fulvya Kaides, and based on what can be seen of her father's behavior he doesn't sound like Patriarch Martenos to me either. Do you think she'd be better suited as one of the grandchildren of Deividas Kaides, since he has other adult children besides Sylas? If so, did you envision any other details about them that might be needed to incorporate them into the story? (They might show up at the Collegem for certain events, things like that)
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Okay, I think I'm done? I decided that overall, it'd make more sense right now to go with mostly all skills. A little bit into Aura for now. Lemme know if anything needs to be changed, but for now, I sleep.

Basically, weak point locating for armor and monsters.
Use less stamina for stuff
And something to let her make a reasonable assumption about what someone is going to be doing based on body language/other circumstances.

also, theme song, lol. I got nothin.

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I'll finish my CS today. Think I actually will have her be responsible for the attempt on Estelle. Maybe even personally.

As for creating NPCs, how does that work?
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@Rune_Alchemist EXP all adds up, and I like the inclusions in the backstory!
@Silver Carrot I guess I should make an official NPC Sheet, huh? I figure just a Name and Summary w a blurb or pic for Appearance is enough for most of them, but if you think they would need other things just let me know!

I'm going to put the rough draft for my own character here, and I welcome any feedback you guys have. ESPECIALLY if you see something you feel you need to call out or that I need to clarify---I try very hard not to be "that guy" whose GMPC hogs the spotlight or powergames, etc. But, if you like him, feel free to claim him as your official "li'l brudder," lol. Even though you're going to remember him as being a lot less of a potty-mouth.
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Oh right, I was wondering as well...

In terms of gaining more EXP points n all, is it something that's like "once every arc" or something that happens more often? Are people getting EXP on a case by case basis, off of what characters do, or do we get EXP as a group, like how milestone leveling works?
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@Zeroth I wasn't thinking that far ahead, I was mainly thinking her parents as her greatest regret and the reason of her failure, but I wasn't considering them relevant apart from that. For me, being the granddaughter of Deividas Kaides sounds perfect and really fitting: I could be the daughter of one of the forgotten children, what would explain a lot of the isolation and attitude.

As for other details, I don't have anything important in mind. As I saw I was one of the last (or the last) to have a character sheet, I tried to keep it open and more focused on the character instead of context and other things of the story, not wanting to disrupt what was already created. So, I'm open to whichever you find more fitting. As for them showing up at the Collegem, what I had in mind have always been the idea of a perfect family but just for show, the kind of people that never explains or tells too much, that's the only relevant detail I had
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Oh right, I was wondering as well...

In terms of gaining more EXP points n all, is it something that's like "once every arc" or something that happens more often? Are people getting EXP on a case by case basis, off of what characters do, or do we get EXP as a group, like how milestone leveling works?


There will be certain events, like time-skips, that will equally reward everyone. But, Players will indeed receive EXP for individual actions as well---it's not meant to make players competitive, necessarily, but to emphasize how only making different choices this time around will help them move past the troubles of their first lifetime.

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Yo! I arrenged the Family tree for ease of visualization:



Arrows are descendants and normal lines are marriages/relationships. If anyone is sure who their PC parentage is I would love to add them.
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@Teyao

Sherry is a daughter of the Patriarch and one of the wives (but a different mother to Estelle)
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Yo! I arrenged the Family tree for ease of visualization:



Arrows are descendants and normal lines are marriages/relationships. If anyone is sure who their PC parentage is I would love to add them.


I know Martenos married too young for the mother of the sisters trio (Estelle, Ophelia, I'll probably name my Isana) to be his first wife. Maybe his second or third? It depends mostly on when Martenos married the second and third time. Any input, @Zeroth?
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I know Martenos married too young for the mother of the sisters trio (Estelle, Ophelia, I'll probably name my Isana) to be his first wife. Maybe his second or third? It depends mostly on when Martenos married the second and third time. Any input, @Zeroth?


I took Estelle's age into account when finalizing Martenos's age in the OOC Char tab; she would've been conceived when he was 19, so I feel the second wife is probably the most likely position for the trio's mother. With Estelle being possibly the oldest of the PCs, I figured that position might play into some of the reasoning around either Sherry's attack or the one on Ophelia---the 1st Wife might not have been the first to conceive a child, and thus maybe she or her child (if it were Sherry or someone else) bears a grudge because it puts their position as "head wife" in danger.

Speaking of, @OwO, I had planned on Vincent being one of the younger siblings who greatly admired Estelle---he wouldn't have really understood why "Big Sis 'Stella'" suddenly decided to up and leave, but since he wouldn't have seen her after he turned 12 or so, she'd be one of the few siblings he'd maintain a positive view on as he got edgier and edgier because he didn't directly witness her "fall from grace" moment before he went to the Collegem. But how do you feel about the concept, since it seems almost guaranteed he'll be born from one of the other wives?

And @Silver Carrot, would having Vincent as a full-blood little brother throw any wrenches into Sherry's bad-bitch persona? Or would you otherwise prefer they be from separate mothers?

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Vincent and Sherry being siblings is fine by me. Her success until her desertion probably shaped his 'The good finish last' worldview.
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