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How so?


I plan I've been thinking about for a while. I would need to discuss it with @Caits, @Zarkun, @Burthstone, myself twice, and @Joshua Tamashii simultaneously, though. It's a shame Soren hasn't been around for three months--Pirate Lord is effectively out of the games, unless someone else wants to take over.
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I was talking about Burthstone and our collab, which he's touched once in the past two weeks I want to say.


I was using that to get ya, typed that up before I left my in-laws.
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I just got an idea, myself, actually. I had a team planned for the games, but the plot had some holes in it, so I decided to change it. We can probably work something out, but your idea is probably less flimsy.
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I plan I've been thinking about for a while. I would need to discuss it with @Caits, @Zarkun, @Burthstone, myself twice, and @Joshua Tamashii simultaneously, though. It's a shame Soren hasn't been around for three months--Pirate Lord is effectively out of the games, unless someone else wants to take over.


I just got an idea, myself, actually. I had a team planned for the games, but the plot had some holes in it, so I decided to change it. We can probably work something out, but your idea is probably less flimsy.


We as the GMs have figured out what to do with Pirate Lord, so don't concern yourselves too much.
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Hi.... so I'd like to attempt to join the rp, but I'm not sure if my CS is up to snuff yet so I'm submitting what I think I have done right and asking what needs to be explained in more detail or changed. Please be patient, because I haven't rp'ed for a while and maybe rusty. Thanks in advance.

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Hi.... so I'd like to attempt to join the rp, but I'm not sure if my CS is up to snuff yet so I'm submitting what I think I have done right and asking what needs to be explained in more detail or changed. Please be patient, because I haven't rp'ed for a while and maybe rusty. Thanks in advance.



Solid start on your CS. His strength and weaknesses need to be less focused around his magic and combat skills. Perhaps, for example, keep the skilled swordsman strength, but then maybe he's also a good cook. Get what I'm saying?
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@ZarkunSorry to bother again, but have you given Cain and Abel a look over yet, as I don't want them to be too late for the whole council thing going on.
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@ZarkunSorry to bother again, but have you given Cain and Abel a look over yet, as I don't want them to be too late for the whole council thing going on.


Yes and no. Fine from what I've read.
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@Arkay My critique would be to space all the fields of the CS out, as well as to form paragraphs in his bio and weaknesses. It's visually un-appealing and hard to read with everything meshed together. That said, I like his background and seems like a cool character.
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@ZarkunCool, just give me a mention when you've fully accepted him. . . if you haven't already.
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I plan I've been thinking about for a while. I would need to discuss it with @Caits, @Zarkun, @Burthstone, myself twice, and @Joshua Tamashii simultaneously, though. It's a shame Soren hasn't been around for three months--Pirate Lord is effectively out of the games, unless someone else wants to take over.


I am now controlling pirate lord for the duration of the games
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I have a question about the group with Isabella and bullet: Are we all still together?
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I have a question about the group with Isabella and bullet: Are we all still together?


No, it slowly kinda splintered off for the fighting.
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Solid start on your CS. His strength and weaknesses need to be less focused around his magic and combat skills. Perhaps, for example, keep the skilled swordsman strength, but then maybe he's also a good cook. Get what I'm saying?


I hear you. I think I will go for the cooking thing. Sounds fun!
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Thoughts?

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I say this again...

SO MANY NEW MEMBERSSSSSSS!

I have a question about the group with Isabella and bullet: Are we all still together?


And yes they have. Also what about the council reveal? Gonna continue on that?

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No, it slowly kinda splintered off for the fighting.


And with the thugs at hand, do we control them or do you specifically?
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@Lmpkio Ya probably early tomorrow. Try to give Grane(@Expolar) a chance to post <.< >.>
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Whale. I think I'mma goto sleep in tenish minutes. I'll move Anya up if @Expolar hasn't approved/denied her when I wake up.
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@Demous Goody lol
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@Lmpkio I'd do it now but I'm tired and gonna watch the last of FMA:B soon
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