Isotope said
My NS is done, I admit it is short compare to you guys, but when all your technology has yet to be made real, and all your social interactions are non existent, things are a bit short.Of course things will be interesting for me to rp though, made sure of that.
Here's my analysis of the Stoor's interaction with the Virus.
On the assumption that the Virus infects conventional technology - ship systems, computers, A.I., etcetera, the Virus is incapable of infiltrating Stoor society due to the complete absence of electronic appliances, devices, or any other form/entity that makes use of basic computing principles.
I base this assumption entirely off of descriptions of how the Virus spread as listed in their History.
Quite frankly, the description is unhelpfully vague and ambiguous and I was forced to make a lot of guesswork. You describe their initial spread as limited to technological systems, but you shift to describing them as capable of infecting organic entities halfway through without providing any mechanism or impetus for such. For all I know, the Virus might have multiple forms capable of infecting organic creatures in a more conventional fashion - but I don't, because the information to infer such simply is not there. The most enlightening piece of information was the description of the Mind Control Chip produced by your cosmetics industry, but that simply raised more questions because I have no idea how it relates or differs from the Virus itself.
In short, this is a request for you to elaborate upon the actual nature of the Virus in such a way as I can actually tell you whether or not you've managed to penetrate every layer of Stoor civilization. I can appreciate it if you would like to keep the information obscured, and so if you don't want to I won't press the issue. But I will retain the power to deny any and all influence the Virus might have amongst the Stoor - retroactively if necessary - if, when their actual nature and functionality is revealed, it turns out they did not have the capacity implied in your sheet. Which would be faintly inconvenient.