[OOC] Riverdale High

[Sugar and Spite]

@WilsonTurnerIf it's fine with Obscene, I say Vin is approved.

[WilsonTurner]

@Obscene Symphony

[WilsonTurner]

@Blizz
I would just like to point out that, compared with the average casual character sheet, your post is the absolute and total minimum. And you also have less on that new one than you do on the new one. To be honest, @HaleyTheRandom's Personality section has more than your entire character sheet. I'm no GM/CoGM, but I'm gonna say that you're gonna need to put in more effort. I'd strongly suggest it, that is.

[Undying Curiosity]

@WilsonTurner I'm sorry to say this, but your character seems like a Mary sue, he also seems very OP. In the Character Sheet tab it says you can have the power to manipulate an element or become an animal, I don't think manipulation of certain properties of quantum physics falls under either of those categories. Also, having a power of that level doesn't really fit in the Rp setting, from i know.

[Sugar and Spite]

@Undying Curiosity I approved the power over a pm. After all, others can control shadows. The basics for the powers would be along the elemental basis. However, if a problem arises and you all do not agree with the power, speak up and we can all find a solution.

@WilsonTurner I'm trying to make this fun and equal for everyone, so perhaps you could add a physical or personality flaw to Vin?

Meanwhile, if you all see any other problems, speak up. This is my first time Gm-ing a RP that has shown so much interest and I tend to over look things.

[Undying Curiosity]

@HaleyTheRandom Well, if you agree with it, than I suppose it can't be all bad. I'm sure over the pm's you've both discussed it so you know it's applications and all so I'll trust your word for it.

[WilsonTurner]

@Undying Curiosity
I'll send you the conversation

I have also updated my character a bit.

[Obscene Symphony]

Alright, @WilsonTurner I would like a least a little blurb about some things Vin commonly used his power to do. This gives us a scope of exactly how far a reach he has (for everyone to see, not just us GMs) and how much relative control he has. I'm not rejecting the power, but if you keep it so secretive it's easy to sort of pull a solution to a problem out of nowhere, that no one could predict. I'm not saying I think you'll do that, but it's more fun and fair to everyone to have your cards on the table. Then, if you have an idea for future evolutions of the power (he learns a skill or discovers a new use for his power) you can talk to a Gm about it, but it's better to keep your initial skills clear.

Other than that he looks pretty good. I appreciate your use of memes, and I would like to see a bit more about your character's personality/mannerisms. How did his past affect him? Does he have trust issues, or fear of fire, or abandonment issues? Nervous ticks? Self soothing habits? These all help give depth to a character. ^_^

[WilsonTurner]

Updated me character.

[hagroden]

Ok so here's a WIP character, but I do have a handful of questions for the GM so I can do appropriate research n' stuff

WIP Character

Character Sheet

Name
Equius Zahhac
Nickname
Eq'
Appearance

(6'3, and near 250 pounds)
Age
17
Gender
Male
Sexuality
Grey-Asexual Panromantic
Power
Shifter; Horse
Cannot actual shape-shift
Currently has advanced sense of smell and sight
Enhanced Strength and Speed
Grade in School
Junior
Extra Curricular Activities/Hobbies
Native American Support Club
Works at a coffee shop on campus as a barista.
Body Modifications
A handful of tribal tattoos and piercings, as well as gauged ears and a Bow tattoo on his left shoulder blade.
Personality
Known for how laid back and easy going he is, it's rare that someone has any sort of problem with him. Especially given how capable he is of reading emotions, and how comfortable he makes others to share their situations and troubles. He has an amazing sense of stress management, and can preform perfectly normally under high-stress situations. Highly open-minded, he has the habit of accepting people regardless of their race, creed, or sexuality.
Brief History
Growing up on the Ioway reservation in Nebraska taught him how to be patient, as not doing so would end in a drunk gambler beating you into the dirt. Despite how passive he seems, he was actually a very good fighter, and was arrest at 14 for assault when a gambler called him a "prairie n*****" and charged as an adult, landing him two years in a local jail, which was filled with his relatives and family friends.

After he was released, he began to apply to boarding schools with a fever, trying whatever he could to get out of the Gambling filled reservation and into the world.
Anything else?
He is extremely defensive to racism, and will cause him to act differently then normal.

[Obscene Symphony]

@hagroden Questions? Fire away.

[hagroden]

1. What area are we coming from/living in?
2. What spectrum will we be playing on (low/mid/high) Casual?
3. Is it possible for my personality to be laid out during the rp, instead of spelling out what he'd like?

[Sugar and Spite]

1. What area are we coming from/living in?
2. What spectrum will we be playing on (low/mid/high) Casual?
3. Is it possible for my personality to be laid out during the rp, instead of spelling out what he'd like?

@hagroden

1.) Any part of the world is where your characters can possibly be from. However, the school is based in the USA, if that's what you mean.

2.) I would say mid casual, 2-4 paragraphs, though anyone who decides to post more, may always do so.

3.) Hmm... Perhaps give us the basic idea? You know, list a few things to kick-start and then reveal the rest? If that makes sense xD

[hagroden]

@HaleyTheRandom
Sounds good, thank you.

[Sugar and Spite]

@hagroden

No big deal. If you have any more, just shoot them mine or @Obscene Symphony's way ^.^

[hagroden]

Updated my Character sheet, let me know If I need to make any changes.

[Obscene Symphony]

@hagroden YOU'RE A HOMESTUCK I KNEW IT FROM THE SECOND I SAW THE PICTURE
I DIDN'T EVEN SEE THE NAME
HAHAA AWHYEAH

****EDIT Also, Eq looks great, accepted. You might want to consider that 17 is more of a grade 12 age than grade 11, but it works nonetheless. It's pretty much a half and half split anyway, depending on the part of the year.

[hagroden]

AHHHH YA IMK A TRASHCAN

but tbh it's a headcannon that Equius is native american

[Obscene Symphony]

AHHHH YA IMK A TRASHCAN

but tbh it's a headcannon that Equius is native american

@hagroden

Lordy loo I'm so far behind, I am probably not even close to halfway through the story. XD It's just hard to look at a screen long enough to get any significant reading done, ya feel? Also, I edited my previous post.

[hagroden]

Awesome!!!
Am I good to go ahead and put him in the character tab?