[OOC] The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

[Hillan]

I think you, sir, have to reread my sheet as it most certainly is complete. :^ )

[Avanhelsing]

@Lord Wraith
*Grumbles about Lord being right. * I think I will add meta powers.
And I must have missed that rule.

[Blue Demon]

@Lord WraithI wasn't done yet. I wasn't going to add it until then, so you would know I was finished. But I'll go add it now. EDIT: And I'm done with it. :)

@Avanhelsing*Pats head* It's all going to be okay.

Anyways, my keyboard is dying on me. Sometimes it doesn't type letters when I writing really fast. I'm sooo frustrated!

[Lord Wraith]

@Archmage MC That really doesn't help your case, I still don't see the character as fitting in, sorry man. You're free to apply with another character but Light just doesn't work for me.

And while I did say it was fine to be inspired by Marvel or DC, I still have the final say on what I allow into the RP.

[Archmage MC]

@Archmage MC That really doesn't help your case, I still don't see the character as fitting in, sorry man. You're free to apply with another character but Light just doesn't work for me.

And while I did say it was fine to be inspired by Marvel or DC, I still have the final say on what I allow into the RP.

@Lord Wraith

I still don't see the problem tbh, unless your not doing a superhero RP, but instead a school RP with superhero on the side, and thus want only humans instead of unique stuff. If thats the case, might wanna put that in the OP.

[Avanhelsing]

Anyone got any ideas of who could be logically paired with Catwoman to give Jack a metapower? I have one but I am not using that guy.

[Lord Wraith]

@Hillan Will double check!

@Avanhelsing I'm sneaky like that.

@Blue Demon Heh, sorry was going through and saw it had a sample so I thought I'd add it onto my review.

[Tyler]

@Lord Wraith
My sheet has been edited accordingly. My humblest apologies for being so unobservant.

@Archmage MC
This is Lord Wraith's roleplay. Whilst it's rooted in the DC universe, there's no such thing as this school and the concept is his own. I think he has the creative liberty to decide what fits the bill, don't you?

[ArtifactCreator]

Character Sheet

| NAME: |

-Fenris (Fen) Murray

| ALIAS: |

-None for the Moment

| AGE: |

-18 Years of Age

| ABILITIES/SKILLS/EQUIPMENT: |

-Persuasion: Fen has both the natural charisma along with his ability to talk to people and over time with his ability, he slowly twists people around his finger whether he likes it or not. His ability comes off like nicotine, effecting the people in small addictive amounts and those who are more exposed around him get more and more addicted to his presence. Slowly he can turn an acquaintance into his friend, a stranger as well and even his rivals as long as he sticks around them long enough. With his influence, he can make these people who had fallen for his ability to be 'suggested' into doing work for him and he could make those people feel that he is privileged to do it and even be admired for doing so. As long as it doesn't go directly against their morals, allies and themselves, but those under his influenced by him for a very long time under the span of several months may be persuaded to do do them with enough comforting and encouragement. At the epitome of his powers with so much exposure to Fen that it is possible for those who are near him the longest to lose most of their free-will and do anything to please him

People who have resistance to mind-affecting abilities are more resistant to this ability, but will never the less break if you spend too much time with him. It takes more or less around a week to influence weaker-willed peopled and longer for those who are stronger willed or have resistance. If their is a combination of both, then it obviously will take a very long time for the ability to effect them no matter how long he is around them. Those who have mental abilities may feel a strange sensation every time he talks, but for the most part seems unintentional and for the most part feels good.

-Supernatural Beauty: Whether genetics is playing favorites or something else mysterious happened to Fen's family a long time ago, it is obvious Fen is just good-looking. As he holds a special ability in which he possesses a supernatural appearance of beauty that is simply unnatural and breathtaking. Despite all odds his appearance will remain beautiful, as even when covered in dirt and grime he manages to pull it off whether as cute or bad ass either one is possible. His appearance is both a blessing and curse, as he is always noticed meaning any attempts of hiding is immediately thrown out the windows as silent and indiscreet muttering and whispering about his appearance. But the good thing is that he gets to be in front of the line!

-Intelligence: While not appearing to be the smartest book out of the stack, he betrays his personality that he often shows as Fenris was actually capable of skipping several grades but made a conscious decision to stay with his peers. In order to keep on top with the competition he has made sure to stay on top of his classes as best as he can, to prevent himself from stumbling and falling behind. While not a genius, Fen is quite capable of handling situations of higher level that require the usage of his mind to solve them. So he is at least as smart as a college student as he has been preparing himself to get a double major in Astrophysics and Psychology.

-Creative Diversity: Competition in colleges is always difficult even going to a school like Corrigan, the individual student matters a lot into the factor of acceptance. Taking pains to make his application more enticing for colleges, he has learned several languages which he uses on a semi-daily basis with friends and family. While he has no preference he is better with using French and Spanish while doing decently in Mandarin and Latin. His main reason for wanting to learn languages may be for college, but he finds it nice to learn them so he can travel around the world and experience the culture along with the native language.

| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |

-Fen is the weakest person out of the group, enough said. He has a normal human body so don't hurt him too badly.
-Don't expect him not to be manipulative, he is a player with a way of words
-His reputation in relationships isn't spot clean but people are still drawn to him one way or another

| SAMPLE POST: |

Fenris glanced up and down the street as he brushed his shoulder with his hand before giving out a sigh, checking his phone every so often. While his feet tapped up and down on the sidewalk as he looked a bit agitated, with his head always darting its attention from left to right. It seems like his friends had ditched him as his calls and text messages went unanswered, so what else could it had been. Ten minutes had already past with him waiting at the spot they said they agreed on meeting only a few hours before hand. But he gave them the benefit of the doubt as another five minutes passed by with the cold night's wind blowing against his body. His light jacket barely did anything as the wind pierced through the thin material and through his shirt chilling his skin.

Sighing out loud miserably, he turned his heels from the spot and he left the dull yellow light emitted from street lamps leaving the spot. Now wandering down the street with no clear intent, he glanced at the buildings as he passed by with some of the old and other new. He checked his phone again, it was 10 PM, a bit late for himself to be found wandering out this late at night without anyone with him but he shrugged as he would find something to accompany himself. As going home at the moment wasn't the favorite thing on his mind at the moment.

Up and down the street were just houses, basically it was a residential area within a neighborhood and any place of entertainment worthy of attention were a bit far away. Since he didn't have a ride he decided to think smaller and go to a local bar that he found on his way. Taking a left on the next street and then a right before continuing walking straight for a few minutes, there it was. A simple bar with nothing fancy, with a simplistic design and a few dull neon signs that seemed to attract nothing but Fen went inside anyways.

Inside he found what he did not expect, it was surprisingly busy but when he checked outside the parking lot was literally empty... Fen assumed these all must of been neighbors who literally walked here as this place wasn't far from the houses at all. Walking forward towards the bar he pulled up on the seat as he ordered something from the tap. Getting a strange look, Fenris pulled out his wallet and his fake-ID which removed the suspicion from the bartender. Smiling pleasantly he waited for his drink as he observed the room, it was clean and decorated but besides that nothing of particular interest. The patrons weren't that interesting as well but there was a few good lookers. Looking back towards to the bar again, he looked to his right side before his eyebrows perked up.

The person he saw was a hunky looking guy who was no older than 30, but no younger than 25 as well. Fenris was a good judge in aging people and recognizing peoples faces so he was pretty sure this man wasn't too old. Besides he was at least charming in his own way, the lumberjack style so to say and he even came with a checkered flannel with red striped lines. The man had short curly hair that looked dark blonde in the lighting of the bar and a rough stubble of a beard on his angular face.

Grinning at himself for his bluntness, he got up from his seat and went over to the man before he sat down next to him, striking up a conversation on the guy. Surprising the guy at first, but slowly got into it as Fen lead into some interesting topics for conversation between the two to relate from. Laying down some subtle hints for the guy and flirted back and forth between the man who returned it playfully as well. The two males began to exchange interests and other similarly related experience as the two laughed. Between each other Fen and the other guy was getting to know each other better but unfortunately the small bromance didn't last for long. As a woman came behind the man and circled her arms lovingly around his neck as she rubbed her smooth skin on his face cutely.

Fenris greeted the girl with a faint and polite smile before he dismissed himself, walking back to his previous seat, he discreetly watched the couple went back to their business. Paying his tab, he left the bar shortly after finishing his first drink and left out the door. But not before catching the eye of the man previously at the bar with him, Fen looked at his girlfriend before Fen put his pointer and middle finger on his lips before blowing a kiss at him as he tuck out his tongue and winked at him before Fen disappeared into the night.

| NOTES: |

-Felix Feclicis obviously, who wouldn't want liquid luck?

[Blue Demon]

@Lord WraithI just finished. It should all be up to code now.

EDIT: BTW, I love Mari with a passion. Now I'm sad again DC made Dick and Kory break up. *Shakes fist*

[Archmage MC]

@Archmage MC
This is Lord Wraith's roleplay. Whilst it's rooted in the DC universe, there's no such thing as this school and the concept is his own. I think he has the creative liberty to decide what fits the bill, don't you?

@Tyler

I'm just trying to get a solid hard reason from him other than "eeh, shes not gritty enough"

[Lord Wraith]

@Hillan & @Blue Demon both sheets are officially accepted despite Blue Demon's blasphemous words :P

[Mixtape Ghost N]

The discourse.

[Avanhelsing]

Any ideas? Cause I do like the idea of a metahuman power for Jack.

Help me group you are my only hope!

[Blue Demon]

@Lord WraithWhat's so blasphemous? *blinks innocently*

[Archmage MC]

Any ideas? Cause I do like the idea of a metahuman power for Jack.

Help me group you are my only hope!

@Avanhelsing

If you can't think of anything just give him super strength. its a pretty staple power. That or Flight.

[Lord Wraith]

@Archmage MC Being gritty doesn't have anything to do with it. The character doesn't fit my vision for the RP and I'm not a fan of it. Like I have already said, she's out of place due to both her appearance and ability. If she was a hulking beast like Killer Croc I would give her more of a chance but Light literally is a living cartoon. The concept is just silly and out of place to me.

[Tyler]

<Snipped quote by Tyler>

I'm just trying to get a solid hard reason from him other than "eeh, shes not gritty enough"

@Archmage MC

I don't think it's about her being gritty. He specifically said that this roleplay isn't particularly gritty. I see his point and completely agree, if I were being honest. Not that my opinion matters; but I guess there's strength in numbers.

It's about the roleplay feeling cohesive. Cartoon-based powers just seem a little whimsical for this roleplay, and Light would stick out like a sore thumb. Have you considered perhaps applying with a different character? You're clearly a creative person, it's just that it didn't pay off with that sheet. Get back on the horse, my friend.

[Lord Wraith]

@Blue Demon You know what you did lol

[Archmage MC]

@Archmage MC Being gritty doesn't have anything to do with it. The character doesn't fit my vision for the RP and I'm not a fan of it. Like I have already said, she's out of place due to both her appearance and ability. If she was a hulking beast like Killer Croc I would give her more of a chance but Light literally is a living cartoon. The concept is just silly and out of place to me.

@Lord Wraith

I still hear "Shes not Gritty enough", thats literally what your saying, especially with your example of what you want.