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I'll be writing up the intro once we've all got our characters sorted, so here's the CS for you all to get to work.




Name:
Age: 16-17 (any wider range and the characters would be in different years)
Gender:
Appearance: (This can be a written description, a collection of pictures or both, whatever you want to use)
Equipment: (This will include your weapon(s) and similar equipment, as well as armour etc. Again feel free to write a written description, or to use a collection of images)
Semblance:
Skills:
Personality:
Short Bio:
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I'll work on mine later.

Jute a heads up, I'm going to be using the color red.

I think it would be a good idea to establish a team name so we know what to name our characters.
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@OneWayOut

That's true, any ideas?
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I was thinking about names then thought "Names: marble? Grey? Egg shell?" and the spent a full minute laughing about the name egg shell. We have a Red and some for of green (my character), no ideas yet though for a team name.
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Hmm, well we could always just see what we can make from the names we choose. Do it organically one might say.
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Just found a good name, Malachi (Malachite green). Team name could be something like AMBR if the other two are A and B.
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I like the sound of that, rolls off the tongue and the keyboard.
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I'm good for taking the B of AMBR, if that's what we go with. I'll work with anything though.
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The R in AMBR is mine then. :)
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Should we post the characters in OOC or just immediately in the Character tab?
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@Xiphonic good question. I'm also wondering such.

Also, what kind of characters do you guys plan to make. I think my character will be a kind of glass canon. Quick and agile with strong specialized dust attacks but low defense and limited aura.

I think we should try and be balanced with perhaps someone being able to make up in defense in a doffered to way. Just an idea.
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I was thinking to go for something fairly ranged-heavy, otherwise focusing on speed and stealth. I'll do some actual work as the morning progresses, but right now I'm still recovering from just getting off my shift. Feel free to offer some criticism or ideas.

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I was thinking of my character being a more the slow, hard hitting, close range defensive person.
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@FateWeaver your character looks awesome so far :) I'm already going over combo moves in my head XD

@Xiphonic oooh, should be cool and also would be good to balance the team ^^

can't wait to see what @Karos makes as well. I'm really excited for this.
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@OneWayOut I think your character's all good to go bar the bio and a couple of mods to the skills section. The mirror and corruption powers sound like they could get OP fast, especially when considered with your other abilities.

Perhaps drop those, but lower the energy/effort/time it takes to use charge?

@FateWeaver Looks all good, just gotta nail the Bio.

@Xiphonic Kind of like Yatsuhashi Daichi?

Here's my character by the way, any feedback would be welcome.

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Finished my character-

Name: Malachi Myceli

Age:16

Gender: Male

Appearance: (No accurate pictures) 6ft, medium muscular build, curly brown hair, white skin, human, brown eyes. Wears a black shirt with a green leather jacket and loose blue jeans...socks with sandals...

Equipment:
WEAPONS-
Taur- A very heavy mace that doubles as a remington shotgun (Out of the bottom of the handle). Jars of Dust can be inserted through the top to give additional power.

A Staff- A long black staff (⅘ the size of Malachi) that holds several vials of dust.

ARMOUR-
There is a gauntlet on his left arm that allows his to block attacks from weak aura. His natural resistance to physical attacks allows him to need minimal armour while still being hearty.

Semblance: Stand Your Ground- When Malachi is under threat he will gain tremendous reaction speed and strength while standing still. he can also give additional strength to allies within 3 meters. His strength pushes to three times his maximum and reacts twice as fast. This can only be maintained for one minute at a time and and each strike while doing this drains his aura faster.

Skills:
Momentum strike- Uses the knock back from firing the shotgun to provide additional power on striking.

Earthen strength- Is incredibly resilient to most physical attacks, especially blunt weapons.

Quake- Hits the ground with such force that it sends a shock wave out in the direction he is facing.

Focus- The brief monk training he went through before he was brought to the Academy allows him to focus incredibly hard on one thing.

Personality: A stalwart, friendly man who strongly follows his father's teachings about kindness. Malachi is ruthless to grimm but takes issue with harming others, even Faunus. He has had little love in his life. he is honest and straightforward. He takes pride in his accomplishments but brags little.

Bio: Malachi was born to farmers in Atlas. He worked on the farm for the first ten years of his life, learning from his father about life and morality. Malachi began training with his father at 11 to defend the farm and eventually become a monk in his father’s belief. His power was discovered at 13 when his farm was attacked during a meditation session. A rouge grimm made it to the house, killing several workers and trapping his family inside. His mother called out as the grimm dragged her out. Malachi’s father told him to defend the house. Malachi grabbed the family sword and went to fight the beast. The fight lasted until Malachi was backed into a barn, with nowhere left to run. Malachi knew he would have to stand his ground. His aura activated and allowed him to slay the beast. Now only his father and were alive, and Atlas soon found out, sending a team to retrieve the boy to fight for them. He built a weapon to suit him, a mace/shotgun, and went onto the real academy.

Feed back welcome.
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@Xiphonic I like it, a good solid tank character would really balance out the team.
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@Karos can do with the changes. I suppose I did go a bit overboard XD

I'll finish my bio in a little bit. :)

@Xiphonic Your character is officially the baby of the team. ^^
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@OneWayOut In designing it? Oh wait… we were talking semblances not weapons…

I look forward to seeing what you come up with, we should be ready to start shortly. I've already started working on an open ended intro post.
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