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@Boop_Im_A_Dragon My problems with it really just boil down to minor nitpicks. I'd say that this works for me. Accepted!

If you're really curious, the minor nitpicks are as follows:
- I'd prefer if it was just "Omega" in the name section. The binary doesn't really add much of anything to the sheet tbh.
- The grammar is a bit wonky in places, but sufficiently comprehensible.
- I feel like this is more because I was vague about his name and so it isn't your failing, but the latest Frankstein is Albrecht Frankenstein, for reference. Again, it's my fault. I totally forgot to state his name anywhere.
- That's about it, really.

None of the above are a serious problem, however. Like I said, the character has been accepted. Of course others are still able to bring up objections if they wish (I mean, it was a contentious character concept when first brought up, after all.)
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I am instinctively against everything Soroya Boop does. Because Oslad is the greatest nation and was unfairly abused in the Treaty of Parma of past RPs.

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@Boop_Im_A_Dragon My problems with it really just boil down to minor nitpicks. I'd say that this works for me. Accepted!

If you're really curious, the minor nitpicks are as follows:
- I'd prefer if it was just "Omega" in the name section. The binary doesn't really add much of anything to the sheet tbh.
- The grammar is a bit wonky in places, but sufficiently comprehensible.
- I feel like this is more because I was vague about his name and so it isn't your failing, but the latest Frankstein is Albrecht Frankenstein, for reference. Again, it's my fault. I totally forgot to state his name anywhere.
- That's about it, really.

None of the above are a serious problem, however. Like I said, the character has been accepted. Of course others are still able to bring up objections if they wish (I mean, it was a contentious character concept when first brought up, after all.)


Nah that is fine. I kind of added the binary because I wanted this thing where Omega's only speak to each other via binary, but I can understand the feeling it doesn't add anything. If you want I can remove it and go a different route. I just thought it would just be a fun extra bit of roleplay. (Probably should have mentioned that somewhere). As for grammar, yeah I was a bit rushed. I really wanted to get something out as it has been a while, plus I had some other things I needed to get done. Glad I was accepted though. Now I can perform emergency surgery on Clocku just to prove how far tech has come.

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@Boop_Im_A_Dragon Oh, right. Naw, I take it back now you've explained it. You may keep the binary there. As for Clock's character, make it a live vivisection :B
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That link. I'm fucking dying. Of laughter -and- terminal illness.
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Now I can perform emergency surgery on Clocku just to prove how far tech has come.


plz nu

I don't think my health insurance will cover me getting my internal squishy bits pulled out before getting me memes anally fucked sideways by a robot

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@Hans von Lek

FFFUUUU- I'm sinking myself into the history of the Philippines to find a good point in history. God damn, the rabbit hole is real. I'm sorry Hans! I've got a long weekend so I can do more research and then I could finish writing up the CS.

Again, I'm very sorry.
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@SgtEasy Naw, take it easy (hohohoh). I'm waiting on several other folks as is. There's no hurry, and I'm certainly not cranky with you for taking time.
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@Hans von Lek I'm slowly writing up my CS, but it is getting done. I also only realized after I picked the guy's name that someone else named their guy Alexander, so I have to think of a new name too :-P
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@Zapdos You don't necessarily -have- to find a new name. I mean, in the same war you had Adolf Galland and... the far more notable Adolf Hitler, for instance :P

Also, take your time. I'm still writing everything up myself, heh. Speaking of which, some of you may have noticed that I by now have four of the Axis NPCs written up under my post in the character tab.
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@Hans von Lek If I really can't find a new name, I'll keep the old one, but we'll see.
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You should start this with the current characters man. Don't want this RP dying because of my procrastinating arse. It'd be sad to see this die during the CS stage :(
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@SgtEasy Might do so. I hope it'll be okay with @Zapdos as well. With the way I've written the intro post, it should give you time to introduce your characters a bit later anyway. It's purposefully written to start off a bit slow, rather than in the middle of the action.
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@Hans von Lek My CS is practically done, actually. I think I'll look it over and send it to you via PM.

Edit: I PMed Hans my CS and he had no problems with it, so I'm putting it in the CS section. I hope you all enjoy reading it!
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@Zapdos Can confirm this is true. Accepted! I'll see about getting the intro up soon-ish. I've pretty much just got some finishing touches to do on the admittedly lackluster map and some other stuff to do before then.

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Actually, map will come a bit later. It's not hugely important for now. IC is open!
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@Hans von Lek I liked the first post! I was a bit confused on one part though, is everyone on the Allied team meeting each other for the first time or not? A relocation was mentioned, but I'm not sure if that means that everyone is relocating from a different area or not. I'm also running on maybe five hours of sleep, which likely doesn't help things.
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@Zapdos Naw, if someone's got a query, I'll treat it as being legit, lack of sleep or no. I'll explain:

It's up to you if you've just met or not. It's not farfetched that personnel have been rotated in and out of the operation area. They very likely haven't got the exact same people they set out with by this point. Given I don't think there was any deliberation on established character relations (which is fine), I think it's fair to assume you're all people that just got rotated in from counterpart operations at other castles or similar sites of interest. Originally the relocation just meant how you've been shifted around the Montevoir sites, but I think the above I've decided on also works/makes more sense. Because Montevoir isn't the only place they're poking around at. Operation Fisher King comprises several of such efforts.

EDIT: I can see another source of confusion here. Let me throw together a sort of "order of operations" dealio.

Overall operation: Operation Fisher.
- Several archaeological expeditions, among them the one at Montevoir.
And then underneath the Montevoir project, you've got
- Alpha, Bravo and Charlie digsites.
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@Hans von Lek That works. I think I'll probably make my post tomorrow when I've had more sleep.

This should be a good roleplay!
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