@Boop_Im_A_Dragon My problems with it really just boil down to minor nitpicks. I'd say that this works for me. Accepted!
If you're really curious, the minor nitpicks are as follows:
- I'd prefer if it was just "Omega" in the name section. The binary doesn't really add much of anything to the sheet tbh.
- The grammar is a bit wonky in places, but sufficiently comprehensible.
- I feel like this is more because I was vague about his name and so it isn't your failing, but the latest Frankstein is Albrecht Frankenstein, for reference. Again, it's my fault. I totally forgot to state his name anywhere.
- That's about it, really.
None of the above are a serious problem, however. Like I said, the character has been accepted. Of course others are still able to bring up objections if they wish (I mean, it was a contentious character concept when first brought up, after all.)
If you're really curious, the minor nitpicks are as follows:
- I'd prefer if it was just "Omega" in the name section. The binary doesn't really add much of anything to the sheet tbh.
- The grammar is a bit wonky in places, but sufficiently comprehensible.
- I feel like this is more because I was vague about his name and so it isn't your failing, but the latest Frankstein is Albrecht Frankenstein, for reference. Again, it's my fault. I totally forgot to state his name anywhere.
- That's about it, really.
None of the above are a serious problem, however. Like I said, the character has been accepted. Of course others are still able to bring up objections if they wish (I mean, it was a contentious character concept when first brought up, after all.)