Ariamis

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@DarkRecon
This line is problematic: "His skills both as a pilot and soldier of sorts has perhaps saved many a life during the wars." War veterans are fine as characters (see Harold), but this seems like a bit of shilling at this point.

The secondary weapon system is a rehash of Setsuka and should be something new, while the drones, even if they are a homage, seem too diverse in their utility, and should be either limited or weakened.

As for everyone else, I'll be doing some mini-collabs between Lorenzo and some of the characters: titanpad.com/4uQrxZu429

@Ariamis

Bumping for visibility.
@Gate Keeper
Thanks for sharing the files, I appreciate it.

Souls of Steel: A Giant Mecha RP

So yeah, going to post on the weekend (most likely Saturday), so there's the deadline, @Ammokkx@AtomicNut.

Souls of Steel: A Giant Mecha RP

@DarkRecon
Accepted, add these stats to your sheet:

Synchronization Rate: 57%
Experience: 35%

Souls of Steel: A Giant Mecha RP

@GamerXZ
It may seem awfully quiet at first glance, but the people here are understanding when it comes to everyone's posting schedules, and so we've been keeping it chill. As for hot-bloodedness, that is ok here as long as you don't charge frantically every opportunity that comes to you; some situations can't be passed through with simple screaming and courage. Blowing up stuff on the other hand...

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@GamerXZ
Add these to your sheet.

Synchronization Rate: 51%
Experience: 62%

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@GamerXZ
Yes, this is currently open. Please submit an age first.

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@DarkRecon
Describing the character as a recon expert is another example of assuming experience that may not be there after the rolls are made, so you should refrain from doing that. I did notice how you tried to smuggle an additional weapon system in, but I'll allow it with the conditions that it's a once-per-battle use, and that it is the only attack available during the turn it's used.

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@DarkRecon
Pretty much what @Ammokkx has said. The coma was a result of Mai basically losing the fight against the Cruxi, and if it weren't for Caretaker's intervention she would have died. Reflecting on one's self would be an example of a direction, as it were.

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@Jasonhero
Have you read the posts I've made? If you want to collab put a note in my pad.

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@Jasonhero
Sure.