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This is my second profile on here, and I have been Play-By-Post RPing for about nine years now. I do my best to see every RP to the end or at least let my character come to his/her own dramatic conclusion when I feel like signing off. Just like novel writing in real life, I tend to find myself on long hiatuses. Since writing is a great way to work out your brain, I try stay engaged as much as possible.

My favorite genres include futuristic worlds, mysteries, and super powers. Any mixture of these three elements will peek my interest.

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It's not like he would show up immediately. News of Goda's failure needs to reach Laoguai first before Li is dispatched. And by then we presumably are long gone and won't actually see him until another time later on.


Cool that's what I had in mind. Sounds good!
@BladeSS4 Are you still around my friend?
@Balthazar007 Oh, just noticed this in your villain scene, but I was planning on Li being the one who specializes in hunting down traitors.


I figured Li wouldn't be involved right away, since he was so close to Han, in a sort of a mentor role. Of course, when (not if) Goda fails in his mission on Mars, Li would then be dispatched to finish the job.

Or were you really wanting him involved right away?
Hmmm. I'm confused.

@Balthazar007, should I be making with the landing and loring up the Mars setting a bit?


Sorry, I've been busy the last few days. I'm just seeing this.

But yes, I was waiting on you to set up the arrival on Mars and lore it up a bit. If you'd rather I do it, I can think of something in the next couple days.
Kame House, Planet Earth
Tuesday Midday, July 19th, 2500
Bold Headed Bakuto!

The girl stepped between Bakuto and Krillin, facing Bakuto. "You'll fight me then, and trust me. I'm doing you a favor."

"Don't go easy on him, baby doll." Krillin said as he backed away. The rest of the crowd also backed off, giving the two fighters as much room as they would need.

The girl's pale skinned face went red quickly, betraying her calm voice, "Don't call me that pawpaw. Just use my name." She didn't take her eyes off Bakuto as she spoke. Her next words aimed at Bakuto as much as they were to Krillin. "My name is Lazuli, and I promise, I won't be 'going easy on you'. I'll only hold back enough not to kill you, got it, but keep your guard up, or I can't guarantee that second part."

"That's my baby girl. Go get him Lazuli!" Krillin hollered as he picked his legs up off the ground and crossed them. He didn't bother picking up his staff this time, leaving himself comfortably floating in mid air.

Lazuli sighed in embarrassment at being called "baby girl". As she sighed, she dropped her head, momentarily closing her eyes. Would Bakuto take this opportunity to make the first move?

Lazuli's Power Level: 2000
Lazuli's Health: 2000


@BladeSS4
Planet Earth
Tuesday, July 19th, 2500
Hidden HQ of Wuye-ying

"So let me get this straight?" Laoguai was clearly not happy, sitting menacingly at his desk. Even still, his voice remained as calm as usual, cold and intimidating, but calm nonetheless. "You left six assassins to do the job that I assigned to you?"

Goda spoke with his head bowed and tried to calmly plead his case. "I was just delegating sir. You gave me two missions. I thought they could take care of the boy, while I-"

"Enough!" Laoguai said, raising his voice momentarily. He then continued in his normal monotone voice. "I'm not interested in excuses. I'm going to give you one chance to redeem yourself, only because your primary mission was a success."

"Thank you sir." Goda replied in relief.

"My spies in Capsule Corp. say that Han and this Niko Renzo are on their way to Mars now. The Martian Mining Company is one of our biggest clients, and we can't let this Niko Renzo kid... or even my own son... to jeopardize this relationship. My sources tell me they are on course to arrive in about three weeks. I want you to take four of my most elite assassins and terminate this Niko Renzo at all costs. As for Han, I'd prefer you incapacitate him and bring him back to me, but failing that... he too must be terminated."

"Understood sir." Goda said raising head, but not quite enough to make direct eye contact. "Do you want me to choose the assassins that will be joining me? Or...?"

"You can choose any of these." Laoguai slid an unlabeled folder on his desk closer to Goda.

There was a moment of silence as the man looked through the papers inside. "I notice Li isn't in here."

"No. He isn't." He didn't explain himself, and Goda knew better than to press his luck with more questions, especially while he wasn't in the boss's good graces. "Now go, and choose your team." He said, leaning back in his chair. "Your flight leaves tomorrow afternoon. You'll be arriving on Mars a week before Han and Mr. Renzo get there. That should be plenty of time to plan your mission."

"Yes sir!" Goda answered confidently, bowing low to show his respect. Then, he rose, turned, and headed straight for the door.

As he put his hand on the door handle, Laoguai spoke once more, freezing him in his tracks. "This goes without saying, but to be clear... failure is not an option here... You understand don't you?"

A cold sweat ran down Goda's back as he answered, still frozen in place. "Yes sir."

"Good." Laoguai said simply.

Goda exited the room without another word, knowing full well what his boss had demanded of him. If he were to fail this mission, he would have to either fall on his own blade, or he would become a priority target for the very organization he worked for. The first option would probably be best, as Laoguai was known for disposing of traitors himself.
@Double I'm going to sleep on the info you've given me and get something posted in the morning. Thanks!
Finally a post by yours truly. Time just has a funny way of escaping me every single bloody time. The irony given my avatar lol


No worries! Glad to see you back!
And small error, nothing major, but Krillin didn't catch the rock. He saw it leave the crowd of people and could have caught it, but instead he let it hit him square in the forehead and then shook his head in disappointment.
I've hit a bit of a writer's block, but I do have one idea. It involves me taking control of two characters introduced by you @Double. Namely, I have an idea for Goda, the high level assassin that sent those six assassins after you, and Han's father himself.

I only want to control Han's father for one post, a quick cameo if you will, but I'd like to use Goda for more, as in one of the big bads that you'll have to fight on Mars.

Does that sound okay for you? @Double
@Double@FalloutJack@Darkmoon Angel@BladeSS4
Alright everyone, I have tomorrow (Thursday) and Friday off work. I'll be stuck at home anyways, recovering from a root canal, so I'll could get one post out on each day.

Tomorrow I'll do one for Niko and Han, nothing major, since your story is pretty well self contained at the moment.

Then Friday, I can make one for Bakuto and Angela, if one or both of you get a post out before then. If not, I'll hold off till another day.
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